So far, I really like the story. I don't really know how to judge stories on here, but it seems like yours has potential. I will continue to follow your story, and good that you won't drop it, since there are really few Jojo fanfics here.
The most unique thing about JoJo Bizarre adventure is not the plot, not the characters, and totally not the stand abilities. Its the poses
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So far, I really like the story. I don't really know how to judge stories on here, but it seems like yours has potential. I will continue to follow your story, and good that you won't drop it, since there are really few Jojo fanfics here.