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3/5 writing quality but the Author is at least trying to be better, that's admirable. 111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
Would need more chapters and there are many grammar mistakes ………………………………………………………………………….............................................……..
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Is best fanfic story cool i like it..................... ...... . . ... ......................................................be figthing admin
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"My name is Mehdi, a scientific on earth in a country of North Africa." This is the very first sentence of this story.... If this is a Self-Insert than no wonder its ****. ......................................................................
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Great story.....thanks for this another one piece fanfic great.... Keep uploading new chaps...I'm waiting for more chapter to read this so thanks author for this work...@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%good story
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Ecp3xp but I also like novel so... Expexpezp3xp expexpexpepxpdodoxoeodoxododooedklxoxodpdpdpc0x0d00r0rofpd0r9didgrvdgudvehrududduririrututuut
The quality writing is bad, and i dont mind it so whatever. The story so far good, dont know if author want to change it. And mc eat zoan fruit that should belong to Kaido, so we got OP here! I just hope you dont add original character in this, its make it bad if i read op fanfic with it
New concept for one piece fanfiction it's cool liked it man,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Let's gooooooooo, do not stop this because it's a very good guy, I liked it a lot. Do not give up because I'll always support you with that bro, one of the best things I've ever seen at least.Nice story
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Alright, first of all, make sure your synopsis is actually readable then start writing chapters. Just from reading your synopsis tells me your writing quality isn't that good. 2 stars cuz ill feel bad if i give u 1 star
Amazing book , please don't drop[img=update][img=update][img=exp] ¹1111111111111111111111114678998433_678999644478337900 😇☺🙂😅😂😊😃🥰
Reveal Spoiler 3/5 writing quality but the Author is at least trying to be better, that's admirable. 111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
Would need more chapters and there are many grammar mistakes ………………………………………………………………………….............................................……..
Keep......................................................................................................................................up
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Is best fanfic story cool i like it..................... ...... . . ... ......................................................be figthing admin
Reveal Spoiler "My name is Mehdi, a scientific on earth in a country of North Africa." This is the very first sentence of this story.... If this is a Self-Insert than no wonder its ****. ......................................................................
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Great story.....thanks for this another one piece fanfic great.... Keep uploading new chaps...I'm waiting for more chapter to read this so thanks author for this work...@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%good story
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Ecp3xp but I also like novel so... Expexpezp3xp expexpexpepxpdodoxoeodoxododooedklxoxodpdpdpc0x0d00r0rofpd0r9didgrvdgudvehrududduririrututuut
The quality writing is bad, and i dont mind it so whatever. The story so far good, dont know if author want to change it. And mc eat zoan fruit that should belong to Kaido, so we got OP here! I just hope you dont add original character in this, its make it bad if i read op fanfic with it
New concept for one piece fanfiction it's cool liked it man,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Let's gooooooooo, do not stop this because it's a very good guy, I liked it a lot. Do not give up because I'll always support you with that bro, one of the best things I've ever seen at least.Nice story
Reveal Spoiler Alright, first of all, make sure your synopsis is actually readable then start writing chapters. Just from reading your synopsis tells me your writing quality isn't that good. 2 stars cuz ill feel bad if i give u 1 star
Amazing book , please don't drop[img=update][img=update][img=exp] ¹1111111111111111111111114678998433_678999644478337900 😇☺🙂😅😂😊😃🥰
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