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redwinbis

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Hosphar

nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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_Aryan_
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this is the best apocalypse novel i hv ever read.story development is a bit slow but every chapters,fight scenes are well detailed and specially world devlopment is awesome.this novel definitely going to my recommendation list. great work author keep it up...and please release more chapters..... we want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mch
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Good........................................................................................................................................

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Lunatic_Reader03

what can I say I like it..............................,................................................................. .................

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novelfanatic

dropped i spent hours doing nothing just to read this novel i lost interest on chapter 200+ . it isn't interesting it become side story. the world background is so-so , its not something unique and have good quality standard. what push me this far is seeing him grow stronger and how did he manage to become last man standing than those with special talent .

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Prathit17

One of the finest work I have seen so far. The story is well written and expressed and you could definitely give it a read. I am looking forward to new updates!!!

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PublishedLeaf

Ill go through the basics of the five. 1. Writing quality 4/5 hes not english, but hes done a really good job considering that. 2. Story Devolpment 5/5 Id say its kinda of like the the walking dead. They killed barry off but you know no plot armor. Good plot. 3. Character Development Gotta say its pretty good. You see a lot of ppl complaing about the mc being stupid, by not knowing things. (Insert rant here) Hes only human he cant remember every single thing. Some may say that he was a sky something, but then hes just a regular human now. He cant remember everthing that happened in ten years hes only human. 4. Updating stability ok. 5. World Background really good makes it believable. 6. Him being stupid is him not being able to remember everything is only human. If he came from the future and was able remember every single thing that happened it wouldnt be believable. Sure itd make a good story. Now this for a novel it kinda sux, that hes stupid but its realistic.

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Vinfran
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Story is intresting it kept me hooked until i reach the last chapter and with 2 chapters a week progesa is really slow. i wish author can improve on the uploads.

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BlueDragon13

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

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MrMoriarty

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cdubbs45

Absolute F*****g gem of a book. very addictive and very hard to put down. definitly recomend!!! Not like most stories on here where nobody close to the mc gets killed. love it 10/10

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Dregen

Love the book just wishing for more updates. The characters are pretty dope wish it had a bit more romance the world building is epic one of.the main reasons for my interest.

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Feiser
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think this history is a good example of exaggerated tension. ( at least the start of it ) -First, you put the tragic past of the MC. It raised the tension but you quickly lowered it by the 'revival' of the family. -Then you showed the tragic story of Jerry's sister witch was raped and killed (that hit me hard, I needed some time to recover). The bad part of it was that it only raised the tension. If you removed it from the history, it wouldn't make any difference in the whole picture. I think you tried to make a sad past to Jerry witch I don't see as a bad thing but when you put rape on it, it became very uncomfortable to read. (Rape is a delicate point that can ruin a whole history if used wrongly. No one likes rape) -Then it was the death of Nina and the other people ( I was hit hard again, I liked her, she was the secretary type ). The way that you described the whole thing raised the tension a lot and I started to feel very anxious about who you would kill next. -Finally was Barry's death, he fought like a true warrior defending the children and I thought that he would get the girl that he liked and became happy. That would balance the tension and make reading more comfortable. But then you killed him and made the girl he liked a broken-heart type. That raised the tension even more and made the history suffocating to read. -Exaggerated tension isn't necessarily a bad thing but it's hard to manage properly, as your first history it's a risky option. One example of a history like this that works is Shigeki no kiojin(Attack on titan) That is my personal opinion and I hope it can be of help.

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GERALDO_BRITO

currently at 103 and all i can say is AWESOME

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web_cop
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Ive literally not even read a single chapter yet I just wanted to mention that the Second chance tag is literally meant to be about going back in time, In the description you even says he goes back in time for a second chance and yet the tag isnt there 🤷‍♂️

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Feiser
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I came here because of your second book that I liked a lot but this one is not for me, it's too sad. I hope your second book doesn't become too sad too.

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Moon_Winchester

I can say that this is so far the best book I have ever read to far. The amount of thought and details put into this book is amazing. I simply love it. Thank you for this book

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OP_FAN

Been looking for a good zombie novel. I haven't read it yet but i know this is very good. Skills sure are great. Well then time to read this hidden gem.

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Mummy_Slave

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Old_Ryan

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Hopeful_Villain

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redwinbis

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Hosphar

nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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_Aryan_
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this is the best apocalypse novel i hv ever read.story development is a bit slow but every chapters,fight scenes are well detailed and specially world devlopment is awesome.this novel definitely going to my recommendation list. great work author keep it up...and please release more chapters..... we want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mch
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Good........................................................................................................................................

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Lunatic_Reader03

what can I say I like it..............................,................................................................. .................

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novelfanatic

dropped i spent hours doing nothing just to read this novel i lost interest on chapter 200+ . it isn't interesting it become side story. the world background is so-so , its not something unique and have good quality standard. what push me this far is seeing him grow stronger and how did he manage to become last man standing than those with special talent .

3yr
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Prathit17

One of the finest work I have seen so far. The story is well written and expressed and you could definitely give it a read. I am looking forward to new updates!!!

3yr
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PublishedLeaf

Ill go through the basics of the five. 1. Writing quality 4/5 hes not english, but hes done a really good job considering that. 2. Story Devolpment 5/5 Id say its kinda of like the the walking dead. They killed barry off but you know no plot armor. Good plot. 3. Character Development Gotta say its pretty good. You see a lot of ppl complaing about the mc being stupid, by not knowing things. (Insert rant here) Hes only human he cant remember every single thing. Some may say that he was a sky something, but then hes just a regular human now. He cant remember everthing that happened in ten years hes only human. 4. Updating stability ok. 5. World Background really good makes it believable. 6. Him being stupid is him not being able to remember everything is only human. If he came from the future and was able remember every single thing that happened it wouldnt be believable. Sure itd make a good story. Now this for a novel it kinda sux, that hes stupid but its realistic.

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Vinfran
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Story is intresting it kept me hooked until i reach the last chapter and with 2 chapters a week progesa is really slow. i wish author can improve on the uploads.

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BlueDragon13

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

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MrMoriarty

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cdubbs45

Absolute F*****g gem of a book. very addictive and very hard to put down. definitly recomend!!! Not like most stories on here where nobody close to the mc gets killed. love it 10/10

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Dregen

Love the book just wishing for more updates. The characters are pretty dope wish it had a bit more romance the world building is epic one of.the main reasons for my interest.

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Feiser
LV 11 Badge

think this history is a good example of exaggerated tension. ( at least the start of it ) -First, you put the tragic past of the MC. It raised the tension but you quickly lowered it by the 'revival' of the family. -Then you showed the tragic story of Jerry's sister witch was raped and killed (that hit me hard, I needed some time to recover). The bad part of it was that it only raised the tension. If you removed it from the history, it wouldn't make any difference in the whole picture. I think you tried to make a sad past to Jerry witch I don't see as a bad thing but when you put rape on it, it became very uncomfortable to read. (Rape is a delicate point that can ruin a whole history if used wrongly. No one likes rape) -Then it was the death of Nina and the other people ( I was hit hard again, I liked her, she was the secretary type ). The way that you described the whole thing raised the tension a lot and I started to feel very anxious about who you would kill next. -Finally was Barry's death, he fought like a true warrior defending the children and I thought that he would get the girl that he liked and became happy. That would balance the tension and make reading more comfortable. But then you killed him and made the girl he liked a broken-heart type. That raised the tension even more and made the history suffocating to read. -Exaggerated tension isn't necessarily a bad thing but it's hard to manage properly, as your first history it's a risky option. One example of a history like this that works is Shigeki no kiojin(Attack on titan) That is my personal opinion and I hope it can be of help.

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GERALDO_BRITO

currently at 103 and all i can say is AWESOME

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web_cop
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Ive literally not even read a single chapter yet I just wanted to mention that the Second chance tag is literally meant to be about going back in time, In the description you even says he goes back in time for a second chance and yet the tag isnt there 🤷‍♂️

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Feiser
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I came here because of your second book that I liked a lot but this one is not for me, it's too sad. I hope your second book doesn't become too sad too.

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Moon_Winchester

I can say that this is so far the best book I have ever read to far. The amount of thought and details put into this book is amazing. I simply love it. Thank you for this book

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OP_FAN

Been looking for a good zombie novel. I haven't read it yet but i know this is very good. Skills sure are great. Well then time to read this hidden gem.

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Beast_Trainer

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