*Hiatus*In Naruto as Op Orochimaru with a system.

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MacBentley

Keep up the good work author, and don’t mind the haters, cause whenever or wherever you are there are always haters. As the saying goes: Haters gonna hate つ(•__•)つ. I also would like to ask you to rewrite the first couple of chapters after you asked the question of how we the readers want the mc to be like, cause I kinda feel like a quick personality change lolz or it is just me over reacting. I would like also to recommend that you should not focus on the harem too much, if there is. Cause it will simply ruin the story in my opinion. As time passes he gets more girls and more his attention is divided into them which results to lack of action and adventure. Which is replaced by caring for them, making them feel “happy”, or whatever you plan to do. Which fuckin makes the story dull af 😂. Well it’s just a suggestion from a fellow reader who expects much from your novel.

LV 6

Zambie

This novel is trash. But you should read it since trash doesn't hide what it truly is. TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH

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Glasgow

Author's here to talk about the story.To sum it up, it's just a guy who get into the Naruto world, and become Orochimaru. The story won't exactly follow the original plot and Orochimaru will both bad and good.The story will also talk about other countries and Samurai as i feel that they've been too useless in Naruto and Naruto Shippuden. I'll try my best to write a coherent story and give you a story that doesn't just follows what Naruto had already done. The Mc will be one cruel bastard and won't have pity or mercy for anyone. There will be a Harem but it will take time to develop as i don't want to just make the girls into mindless bitches who just want to get into Orochimaru's pants.However don't be surprised if their reasons to stay with him aren't really logical, they won't all fall in love with him.Plus the logic in Naruto's world is a bit...............I mean they made Hinata into some sort of role model while all she does is stalk a boy she could help, and just stay weak and shy without trying to change.Let's not even talk about Sakura! Anyway, hope you'll like the story!

LV 5

ROnin2k02

It truly surpassed my expectations. I thought the MC will be more "oh **** i'm a BAD GUY" but he quickly tries to adapt and maybe be a even more badass Orochimaru. I hope this will not be dropped.

LV 7

Melshan

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LV 5

Demonic_Lord

The Novel blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah... I reviewed the novel, now give me my chapters!

LV 4

HentaiVeteran

5 Star for HAREM! Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!Harem!

LV 5

iReading

Haven't read this yet but I just wanna put out a guess on the novel lol, Orichimaru is a gay pedo, this new guy though is...FBI OPEN UP! -BANGS ON DOOR-

LV 11

ClearMindSerene

It’s so and so but still there still interesting thought author san might be not focus on this story...otherwise this can be better than its currently is

LV 14

Mortifer

Here's another review for the chaptaaaaaahhhhsssss!!! 10 chapters per day please!!! Here's another review for the chaptaaaaaahhhhsssss!!! 10 chapters per day please!!!

LV 14

Mortifer

Here's another review for the chaptaaaaaahhhhsssss!!! 10 chapters per day please!!! Here's another review for the chaptaaaaaahhhhsssss!!! 10 chapters per day please!!!

LV 14

Absolute_Reaper

Great novel one of the few showing orochimaru as mc.............. ................ ................. .................. ................... ............ .. ...........

LV 6

GGMissFortune

This novel is trash. But you should read it since trash doesn't hide what it truly is. TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASHThis novel is trash. But you should read it since trash doesn't hide what it truly is. TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASHThis novel is trash. But you should read it since trash doesn't hide what it truly is. TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASHThis novel is trash. But you should read it since trash doesn't hide what it truly is. TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASHThis novel is trash. But you should read it since trash doesn't hide what it truly is. TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH

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Rairaidani

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LV 5

certe

Pretty awesome!I like where the story is going. Just improve your grammar and polish your writing style and please stay consistent with character personalities.

LV 5

notlair

So far so good... And the way youre hyping this novel, you better deliver and be consistent and not drop it like many of the many SI fanfic in this app/site... When you pass the 10 chapter mark, then I'll pour all my stone to you...

LV 4

Dethgaming666

This story is awesome so far and I can't wait for more chapters thanks for writing this author sama I really love it so far.........................

LV 4

Neova_Tempest

I love it its so cool. It was time for somewone to write about Orochimaru [img=recommend][img=recommend] wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

LV 14

Gellert

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PuffyFluppy

intresting