Guns In a Third World Universe

LV 4

Greg_Koc

It has a good story, though the writing and grammar could be more decently improved, then it would be much better, so I personally think that you should hone your skills in that category, no need to rush anything, you can always look back at your writing and correct the mistakes you've made...

LV 11

Revolutionary1999

Myself the author thought the novel was so fire I wrote myself a review.My writing quality is not the good, awhile my updating is 2-4 a month its quite hard to keep up with my daily life. The story development is a bit fast a bit lacking information but I promise you’l get a kick out of it. The characters you mainly will only get hair color/eye color to there build. The world is underdeveloped and still needs a lot more information, and for it to be kept in records to build an accrete world for this story and its adventures.

LV 2

tothedome566

It's a pretty fun read with a likeable main character. Bit of a shame there is so little, but that said what's there is enjoyable . . ..... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ........ .. .. .. .

LV 1

Async0929

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