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la fanfic est trop peu remplie il y a aucune comversation et on a l'impression que le mc est le seul qui parle c'est irritant et fatiguant
The story is great and I hope you'll continue it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story backround is pretty good but the story development is sh*t he dosenโt have his own adventure and does the same thing which the strawhats do and join them but if you like something like that its a good story
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havent read it yet but im here to support the no harem gang ==============================================================================================================
dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!
If you guys donโt like it when the mc trains the main character this isnโt for you neither is it for me.................................................................. .............................;..;...................BYE
Harem is the best!!!!!!!! MORE THAN ONE WOMEN IN URE LOVE GROUP๐๐ ONLY ONE ๐ PEOPLE LIKE U WHO ARE BASTARDS DISCUST ME !!!๐ค๐ก๐ง๐ก๐คฌ๐ ๐พ๐๐น๐บ๐โ ๐ป
EEH WHY NO HAREM U FAT BITCH!!! HAREM IS EVERY STRAIT MANS DREAMS REEEEEEE!!! DISLIKE BAD REVIEW THIS SHIT!!! WEOVE HAREMS !! WHY U NO LIKE HAREM U GAY?? ARE U A FEMALE???
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ุงููุตุฉ ุญููุฉ ุจุณ ูุงุฑูุช ูุนุชู ุฏ ุน ุงููุฑุงุบ ุฃูุซุฑ ูุฃูู ุญุงุณุณ ู ุง ุนู ููุง ุดู ูุจูุฑ ูุงูู ูุฑูุถ ูุณุงุนุฏ ุงูุทุงูู ุฃูุซุฑ ู ุดุงู ุชููู ููุชูู ุงูุจุฑ ููุญุงูู ูุชูุงุฏุง ุงูุชุฎุทูุท ูุงูู ุตุงุฑ ุจุงููุตุฉ ุงูุญููููุฉ ูุซูุฑ ุญุดู ููุงุฑูุช ูุงู ุนูุฏู ููุงูู ุดูุทุงู ุฌุฏูุฏุฉ ุฃู ุญุชู ุจุฏูููุง ูุงูู ุจุตุฑุงุญุฉ ุจุญุณ ุงูู ู ุงููุง ูุงุฒู ุฉ ุงูู ูุฎุงุตุฉ ู ุนุง ุงููุฑุงุบ ูุดูุฑุง ูุซูุฑ ูุงูู ุญุจูุจุช ูุซูุฑ ุงูุนู ู
So this story had a lot of potentials at the begining and it hit rockbottom.imagine Mc working workinc 3 years ro get 10 million points and then spend 6 million to get a gun (yes a gun)and another 2 million for cooking books because he cant wait 2 weeks t9 learn it from sunji.he couldve asked for a second devil fruit power but no cooking is better .also if u wonde what will happen if Garp went pirating with luffy this is your novel. The mc is a babysitter f or 99% of the story.
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It's like reading one piece in 3rd person's view.. when this fan-fic is almost done it will take around 10 years like one piece in manga! It's like reading one piece in 3rd person's view.. when this fan-fic is almost done it will take around 10 years like one piece in manga!
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Quite interesting if one watched the original anime. The story is also going at perfect pace. All the best and keep the good work. And one more don't drop in between.
You had my heart at NO HAREM ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ Thank you so much Iโm willing to read this. Harem is extremely played out in these types of storyโs...........................
I will change my review after reading this novel from chapter 1 to latest chapter โบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบ
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I'd say, at first this I thought this story had good potential even though the story development at first was a bit rough, I would say it was still good, But the moment I read chapter 6 or 7! I instantly got a pissed at how the so called "MAIN" Character just became a "SIDE" Character for the Original Character Luffy, I mean yeah the so called "Main" Character just wants to have fun and wants to have his own adventure, But what kind of fun and adventure does becoming a Side Character and squeezing in the adventure of Luffy have? Honestly I was disappointed in this since I've been reading alot of fanfics for a long time now and this is probably the first time I have ever read a "Main" Character becoming a "Side" Character. I'd say this is one of those novels that gives a good first impression but in the end leaves us with nothing but disappointment. But I have to admit, the later chapters were pretty good but reading those starting chapters made me have a bad impression. Don't think I'm angry or something since you can always do better in the later chapters and I'm just saying my opinion.
a good start and stabil update using the existing devil fruit is a bit minus ned more original other world existence start to soon but overall i enjoy read this fanfic hpe you kan kep it up Thanks
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la fanfic est trop peu remplie il y a aucune comversation et on a l'impression que le mc est le seul qui parle c'est irritant et fatiguant
The story is great and I hope you'll continue it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story backround is pretty good but the story development is sh*t he dosenโt have his own adventure and does the same thing which the strawhats do and join them but if you like something like that its a good story
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havent read it yet but im here to support the no harem gang ==============================================================================================================
dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!dont drop it !!!
If you guys donโt like it when the mc trains the main character this isnโt for you neither is it for me.................................................................. .............................;..;...................BYE
Harem is the best!!!!!!!! MORE THAN ONE WOMEN IN URE LOVE GROUP๐๐ ONLY ONE ๐ PEOPLE LIKE U WHO ARE BASTARDS DISCUST ME !!!๐ค๐ก๐ง๐ก๐คฌ๐ ๐พ๐๐น๐บ๐โ ๐ป
EEH WHY NO HAREM U FAT BITCH!!! HAREM IS EVERY STRAIT MANS DREAMS REEEEEEE!!! DISLIKE BAD REVIEW THIS SHIT!!! WEOVE HAREMS !! WHY U NO LIKE HAREM U GAY?? ARE U A FEMALE???
Im guessing josh shot her with his gun your gun ...no pun intended Yeyevebevehdueebybybydneyndundundubdubdudbudbudbdundubdubdudbudbudbudbdubdubdbdubdudnudnudbdundybd
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Reveal Spoiler ุงููุตุฉ ุญููุฉ ุจุณ ูุงุฑูุช ูุนุชู ุฏ ุน ุงููุฑุงุบ ุฃูุซุฑ ูุฃูู ุญุงุณุณ ู ุง ุนู ููุง ุดู ูุจูุฑ ูุงูู ูุฑูุถ ูุณุงุนุฏ ุงูุทุงูู ุฃูุซุฑ ู ุดุงู ุชููู ููุชูู ุงูุจุฑ ููุญุงูู ูุชูุงุฏุง ุงูุชุฎุทูุท ูุงูู ุตุงุฑ ุจุงููุตุฉ ุงูุญููููุฉ ูุซูุฑ ุญุดู ููุงุฑูุช ูุงู ุนูุฏู ููุงูู ุดูุทุงู ุฌุฏูุฏุฉ ุฃู ุญุชู ุจุฏูููุง ูุงูู ุจุตุฑุงุญุฉ ุจุญุณ ุงูู ู ุงููุง ูุงุฒู ุฉ ุงูู ูุฎุงุตุฉ ู ุนุง ุงููุฑุงุบ ูุดูุฑุง ูุซูุฑ ูุงูู ุญุจูุจุช ูุซูุฑ ุงูุนู ู
So this story had a lot of potentials at the begining and it hit rockbottom.imagine Mc working workinc 3 years ro get 10 million points and then spend 6 million to get a gun (yes a gun)and another 2 million for cooking books because he cant wait 2 weeks t9 learn it from sunji.he couldve asked for a second devil fruit power but no cooking is better .also if u wonde what will happen if Garp went pirating with luffy this is your novel. The mc is a babysitter f or 99% of the story.
Reveal Spoiler It's like reading one piece in 3rd person's view.. when this fan-fic is almost done it will take around 10 years like one piece in manga! It's like reading one piece in 3rd person's view.. when this fan-fic is almost done it will take around 10 years like one piece in manga!
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Reveal Spoiler Quite interesting if one watched the original anime. The story is also going at perfect pace. All the best and keep the good work. And one more don't drop in between.
You had my heart at NO HAREM ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ Thank you so much Iโm willing to read this. Harem is extremely played out in these types of storyโs...........................
I will change my review after reading this novel from chapter 1 to latest chapter โบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบโบ
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I'd say, at first this I thought this story had good potential even though the story development at first was a bit rough, I would say it was still good, But the moment I read chapter 6 or 7! I instantly got a pissed at how the so called "MAIN" Character just became a "SIDE" Character for the Original Character Luffy, I mean yeah the so called "Main" Character just wants to have fun and wants to have his own adventure, But what kind of fun and adventure does becoming a Side Character and squeezing in the adventure of Luffy have? Honestly I was disappointed in this since I've been reading alot of fanfics for a long time now and this is probably the first time I have ever read a "Main" Character becoming a "Side" Character. I'd say this is one of those novels that gives a good first impression but in the end leaves us with nothing but disappointment. But I have to admit, the later chapters were pretty good but reading those starting chapters made me have a bad impression. Don't think I'm angry or something since you can always do better in the later chapters and I'm just saying my opinion.
a good start and stabil update using the existing devil fruit is a bit minus ned more original other world existence start to soon but overall i enjoy read this fanfic hpe you kan kep it up Thanks
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