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Hi Author here. I am very excited for this story and I would like to continue it for a long time. It may get boring sometimes but I would try to take it along with a normal pace while building up the story and characters. You may also notice some minor or major changes from original Pokemon. I hope you will like this story and support me so that I can get enough motivation to write more. Also Please Review the story after reading it. It helps me and future readers. I would also like for you all to vote for the story
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good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok back after 8 chapters....It's a nice story...The MC is cute with a deep background story and a clear goal for now.. Story development is a little slow...but I like that. Fight scenes are good but we need a little more info about the world time line.... And DONT DROP THIS
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't drop this and make him collect Uber Psedudo Legendary or legendary Pokemon... And make sure he is in Ash's timeline and let him beat up ASH's stupid ass.
Great.....................Pokemon Gotta Catch them all............ It's nice story.,...........................but need more world background AND DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS BEFORE HE BECOMES A CHAMPION
Great Fan-Fic...................Love the way you are trying to do the character and story development but please increase the pace a little.
Very good........................................................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is my first review in pokemon fan-fic so i give you 5 star and i hope you Don't draft this cuzz i will H..U...N....T.....Y......O.......U in your DREAMS!... And i wish you a big success this novel!. **:PLSS NO HAREM AND GET HIM A LEGENDARY OR SOMETHING LIKE MYTHOLOGY POKEMON. SORRY ENGLISH IS MY 2ND LAGUAGE AND IM STILL LERNING!
Just giving a review based on first chapter.... I will like it to be a little slow paced with huge character building and make sure he catches some good pokemon...maybe some legendary ones too... also I would love it if he has any companions on journey too...don't make me feel this is not the pokemon world that I know of....Fan-fic is good as long it stays true to the original story...
To be honest if I was his parents I would have given him one of their Pokémon for protection and to give them peace of mind when he goes on his journey as his is still physically pretty weak . Good chapter though . I look forward to the others.
Hi Author here. I am very excited for this story and I would like to continue it for a long time. It may get boring sometimes but I would try to take it along with a normal pace while building up the story and characters. You may also notice some minor or major changes from original Pokemon. I hope you will like this story and support me so that I can get enough motivation to write more. Also Please Review the story after reading it. It helps me and future readers. I would also like for you all to vote for the story
Very good zxzzxzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok back after 8 chapters....It's a nice story...The MC is cute with a deep background story and a clear goal for now.. Story development is a little slow...but I like that. Fight scenes are good but we need a little more info about the world time line.... And DONT DROP THIS
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't drop this and make him collect Uber Psedudo Legendary or legendary Pokemon... And make sure he is in Ash's timeline and let him beat up ASH's stupid ass.
Great.....................Pokemon Gotta Catch them all............ It's nice story.,...........................but need more world background AND DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS BEFORE HE BECOMES A CHAMPION
Great Fan-Fic...................Love the way you are trying to do the character and story development but please increase the pace a little.
Very good........................................................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is my first review in pokemon fan-fic so i give you 5 star and i hope you Don't draft this cuzz i will H..U...N....T.....Y......O.......U in your DREAMS!... And i wish you a big success this novel!. **:PLSS NO HAREM AND GET HIM A LEGENDARY OR SOMETHING LIKE MYTHOLOGY POKEMON. SORRY ENGLISH IS MY 2ND LAGUAGE AND IM STILL LERNING!
Just giving a review based on first chapter.... I will like it to be a little slow paced with huge character building and make sure he catches some good pokemon...maybe some legendary ones too... also I would love it if he has any companions on journey too...don't make me feel this is not the pokemon world that I know of....Fan-fic is good as long it stays true to the original story...
To be honest if I was his parents I would have given him one of their Pokémon for protection and to give them peace of mind when he goes on his journey as his is still physically pretty weak . Good chapter though . I look forward to the others.