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Grammar needs to be improved and the plot could've been smoother. But good job for your first book! Improvements made will definitely uplift the storyline as well
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Great story author👏👏👏👏💖...buh the chapters are too short... hope the next chapters will be at least 10 pages.... that's a good story u have ....plz don't drop it....I love Andrew n Isabel💗💗💗💋❤️💕💓💞💖💃
LV 4 ![Badge]()
Grammar needs to be improved and the plot could've been smoother. But good job for your first book! Improvements made will definitely uplift the storyline as well
Reveal Spoiler
Great story author👏👏👏👏💖...buh the chapters are too short... hope the next chapters will be at least 10 pages.... that's a good story u have ....plz don't drop it....I love Andrew n Isabel💗💗💗💋❤️💕💓💞💖💃