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Wow cool amazing the best fanfic i like it................................................................................thanks ea admin be keep healthy and more update
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trash, just dull text blocks... no action or whatsoever, you should just read the synoptic and go search for something else cuz thats all in this story
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This is the first review I have ever written and I am honored to say that this story deserves it. The character development was exceptional(if you know one piece a little) and though the MC was OP in the end, He didn't go around willy nilly ruining the original story but created a legacy for himself. Though his loner attitude was interesting, I am excited to see where the story will lead to in the future. Good Job Author!!!
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It's fun and funny and entertaining and everything it needs to be. even if mc is overwhelming and powerful it's still awesome thank you very much and I hope you can make it more fun than I thought it would be.
This novel was a lot better than I thought. Honestly i have read a ton of One piece Self inserts yet this one was unique and interesting on it's own. If you are a fan of one piece or self inserts with cheats then this story is the one for you. Thank you author san for this wonderful fan fiction and keep updating chapters faster.
More chapterssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story has sooo much potential but it's all ****** by the mc acting stupid and week instead of acting cool sorry for the bad review just had a lot of hope for this story...
Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action
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omg i'm fucking loving this novel long chapters quick pace but not too fast and the story i'm just loving it don't ever drop my friend's a hacker i'm gonna make him find you ip address and come over and ***** slap you
This story is truly amazing in my opinion as a one piece fan, I hope the author doesn't drop it. Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit
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Mc is a coward and isnt very smart. When the system tells him he can fight evenly with whiteboard, he gets scared by a new world beast.... he also doesnt have administrative power, and if he did he doesnt use it. Being an administrator in the system should give u the ability to create anything you want and customize anything. He shouldn't have to train. He isnt even allowed to create his own body or power himself up.
Wow cool amazing the best fanfic i like it................................................................................thanks ea admin be keep healthy and more update
Reveal Spoiler trash, just dull text blocks... no action or whatsoever, you should just read the synoptic and go search for something else cuz thats all in this story
ExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXPExPeXP
Reveal Spoiler This is the first review I have ever written and I am honored to say that this story deserves it. The character development was exceptional(if you know one piece a little) and though the MC was OP in the end, He didn't go around willy nilly ruining the original story but created a legacy for himself. Though his loner attitude was interesting, I am excited to see where the story will lead to in the future. Good Job Author!!!
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It's fun and funny and entertaining and everything it needs to be. even if mc is overwhelming and powerful it's still awesome thank you very much and I hope you can make it more fun than I thought it would be.
This novel was a lot better than I thought. Honestly i have read a ton of One piece Self inserts yet this one was unique and interesting on it's own. If you are a fan of one piece or self inserts with cheats then this story is the one for you. Thank you author san for this wonderful fan fiction and keep updating chapters faster.
More chapterssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story has sooo much potential but it's all ****** by the mc acting stupid and week instead of acting cool sorry for the bad review just had a lot of hope for this story...
Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action Everything reads like a summary and the few action scenes barely have any action
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omg i'm fucking loving this novel long chapters quick pace but not too fast and the story i'm just loving it don't ever drop my friend's a hacker i'm gonna make him find you ip address and come over and ***** slap you
This story is truly amazing in my opinion as a one piece fan, I hope the author doesn't drop it. Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit Limit
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Mc is a coward and isnt very smart. When the system tells him he can fight evenly with whiteboard, he gets scared by a new world beast.... he also doesnt have administrative power, and if he did he doesnt use it. Being an administrator in the system should give u the ability to create anything you want and customize anything. He shouldn't have to train. He isnt even allowed to create his own body or power himself up.