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Till now all good and I have only read first two ch and in my opinion make the mc op but not too op that he can kill his opponents with a flick of his hand ,just divide them in levels like u did earlier and by the way that's a great idea of dividing the abnlities in level , hope u give him more cool ablities **... don't drop the novel dude
Till now all good and I have only read first two ch and in my opinion make the mc op but not too op that he can kill his opponents with a flick of his hand ,just divide them in levels like u did earlier and by the way that's a great idea of dividing the ablities in level , hope u give him more cool ablities
Hello! The writer of this Fanfic and two others is here, plz note that English is not my first nor my second language, so plz if you have a problem, tell me and will do my best to fix it. Ps: Sorry for shamelessly using the review section.
I really liked this concept of this novel with an op mc but hes just so innocent its not even funny. He is way too trusting dealing with elves especially one who can see into the future hes not questioning the system nearly as much nor is he exploring as much as he should. I understand that they were the first people he met but I just dont like when mc's tell their abilities to strangers and especially when he falls in love with some random elf girl I can understand shes a beautiful but at the same time shes engaged and you just met her. Especially with zodyaks memories hes a trained assassin he should know better along with having some trust issues he should have more common sense
Till now all good and I have only read first two ch and in my opinion make the mc op but not too op that he can kill his opponents with a flick of his hand ,just divide them in levels like u did earlier and by the way that's a great idea of dividing the abnlities in level , hope u give him more cool ablities **... don't drop the novel dude
Till now all good and I have only read first two ch and in my opinion make the mc op but not too op that he can kill his opponents with a flick of his hand ,just divide them in levels like u did earlier and by the way that's a great idea of dividing the ablities in level , hope u give him more cool ablities
Hello! The writer of this Fanfic and two others is here, plz note that English is not my first nor my second language, so plz if you have a problem, tell me and will do my best to fix it. Ps: Sorry for shamelessly using the review section.
I really liked this concept of this novel with an op mc but hes just so innocent its not even funny. He is way too trusting dealing with elves especially one who can see into the future hes not questioning the system nearly as much nor is he exploring as much as he should. I understand that they were the first people he met but I just dont like when mc's tell their abilities to strangers and especially when he falls in love with some random elf girl I can understand shes a beautiful but at the same time shes engaged and you just met her. Especially with zodyaks memories hes a trained assassin he should know better along with having some trust issues he should have more common sense