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Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Falling, hmm how to explain it?

FUCKING FREAKY CRAP SHIT I IS GONNA DIE! Explains it well enough. For all those who plan to fall two stories falling from two stories actually takes a long time. And I don't suggest you do it. 

Shattered glass fell around me,and Loki's face was above me, shocked, confused and scared... Wait I'm supposed to be the scared one, I'm falling about to die.

This was all before I hit the ground. And oh my gosh it hurt. Pain ricochet throughout my body. Down my arms, my torso, just everywhere. People started too surround me, some on their phones others asking me questions.

I gasped, the agony of just lying there still was excruciating. I turned my head  to the side, something cold and wet hit my cheek. I was crying. 

No I'm not a wimp, you would too if you were in this much pain. I looked the other way to see Loki crouched beside me.

"Are you alright?" He asked me.

"I think so." I managed to whisper to him.

I felt a thin trail of blood start to flow from my mouth. Suddenly it became harder for me to breath. I coughed, chocked and spluttered, my lungs were on fire, I couldn't breathe. With every cough came a little bit of blood. Until I sat up (it hurt like hell) and sort of vomited up heaps of blood.

I could hear the people on the phone start to panic, asking the ambulances what to do so I didn't drown on my own blood. They rolled me onto my side into the recovery position. Loki was still beside me looking helpless not knowing what he should do.

"Well, you're witnessing my death, how do you feel?" I asked him.

"You are not dying." He reassured me.

"Um I think I am. I am starting to drown in my own blood." And right on cue I started to cough again..

"No you're not."

"Fine but if they ask who you are say you are a friend saying over and they might let you in the ambulance." I told him.

"The what?"

"The moving object that will take me to the doctors that will try to fix me."

"Doctors?"

"Ummmmm healers?"

"Oh now I get it. But you will be fine once they heal you."

"Not always, not very many people can survive a fall from a two story building."

"But they should be able to try?"

My voice became softer, "They should."

I felt so sleepy all of a sudden, I just wanted to sleep right here on the pathway.

"I just want to sleep." I managed to speak out through another bout of coughing.

"No stay with me, think of this chocolate you speak of and I'll eat it."

"Go for it at least someone will eat it."

The rest of his speech was blurred and inaudible. My vision went fuzzy, red and blue lights were flashing, Loki's face was in mine and then the darkness came.

Darkness, is unsurprisingly black. A tall, muscular figure appeared just out of my peripheral vision. I turned around to face him.

He had longish red hair, amour on and a cheeky grin upon his face.

"So this is the girl that has taken in my brother." He said to me, "you don't look like much."

"Excuse me, there is so much more," I gestured to myself, "to this than you think."

"Right I was joking with you, Ingrid Lastensture."

"Good.. wait how do you know my name? And who the hell are you? And where the hell am I?''

"I know many things, and I am Thor Odinson of Asgard, and you are in your subconscious."

"Cool, wait did you say your Thor?"

"Yep."

"As in god of thunder, lightning and zapping people"

"All except for the zapping people part, and I'm not a god.''

"Why are you in my subconscious?"

"Because you're on the verge of death, but you're not supposed to die just yet. This is an attempt to throw the circle of life out of balance and in a long and complicated way an attempt on an Asgardian."

"How was Loki in any danger?" I asked.

"He was right next to you but just before the glass cracked he stepped forward avoiding falling like you did."

"Oh! Okay." I managed to say.

"Well looks like people are worried about you, you had better awaken."

"Ummmmmm what will I tell your brother?"

"Tell him I'm trying."

When I woke I was surrounded by doctors, Loki and Ashleigh my orphan best friend.

"AHHHHH SHE'S AWAKE!" Screamed Ashleigh.

I leaned up on my elbows, "Jeese calm down this head is sore."

She grabbed me and pulled me into a rather tight hug. I gave her a slight pat on the back and smiled at Loki, who looked confused.

"Don't you ever think about falling out your window again!" She told me sternly.

"Don't plan on it." I took a deep breath, "So what's the damage?"

A doctor walked up to me, "Umm you were very lucky Ingrid, just internal bleeding, which has stopped"

"Nice." I said.

"You'll have to be careful and look after yourself."

"Gotcha."

She walked away so I turned towards Loki, "So have you at here the whole time?"

Ashleigh replied for him, "He basically has, he ate then watched you."

"Not creepy at all."

Thor's weird talk came back to me.

"Hey ash could you get me a drink?"

"Absolutely!' And she sprinted from the room.

"So while I was knocked out I had a visit from your brother."

"What did he say."

"He said to tell you he's trying whatever that means." I layed back down.

"He's  trying to get me  back to Asgard."

"Do you want to go back?"

"I  don't know."

I closed my eyes and fell asleep.


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