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52.17% Absolute Strengthening Technique / Chapter 69: Xiao Shiyun

Chapter 69: Xiao Shiyun

Mistress Xiao, Xiao Shiyun, had a grim expression on her face. She was never so much frustrated as now. Her family completely foiled her plan and desires. Last night, she saw a handsome young man at the Red Maple Inn. She instantly felt attracted to that young man. She knew he was extraordinary just when her gaze fell on him.

And the members of her clan antagonized that very same person. Not only that, but he also took away her plaything, Yan QingQing. True her family lost two Martial King and eight Xiantian cultivators, and even the third Elder, who died at the leg of that young man, was her uncle, but she didn't feel sad about that. She felt pained when she learned that, that young man hated her.

She looked at the portrait of the young man in her hand. It was drawn by the most prominent artist in the Yan City. Incidentally, the artist was present in the Red Maple Inn during the incident. Of course, he sold them to Xiao Shiyun at a sky-high price, since he knew the young man offended the Xiao Clan. The portrait in the hand of Xiao Shiyun was beautiful to the point that it would instantly awaken Shen's inner narcissism to praise himself!

She couldn't help but bit her lips as she gazed at the portrait of the young man. While she was discontent at the loss of her family. She was more bitter at the loss of this young man. Recently she started losing interest in her lover, Yan Zhongfeng, and this young man made her passion burn fiercely. Lust filled her eyes as her gaze never left the portrait of Shen.

"Find him! I don't care how you will find him, but bring him here! I want him here, and ALIVE!" Even though her voice contained extreme anger, it was still melodious to people's ear. Xiao Shiyun looked to be in her mid-twenties, and her figure was beautiful beyond compare.

Her bosoms were big and perky. She had humongous bosoms with perfectly rounded tips. They were large but plump. She was a perfect woman that any man would want to bed with. If Shen were to see her, he would definitely say, "Let me have a squeeze, first!"

"...B-but young miss, he killed Third Elder in four moves. Even if we find him, what can we do against him?" A man, the survivor of that tragic event, said fearfully.

Another man walked inside the room. He looked refined and dignified and seemed about thirty years old. His gaze right now differed from the woman. He had a deep animosity in his eyes as he looked at the portrait of the young man.

"What did you get about this young man?" Yan Zhongfeng said with a deep voice. The loss this time weakened the Xiao Clan greatly. His position in the Yan Clan relied heavily on the Xiao Clan. If he lost the backing of the Xiao Clan, his current position as the successor of the Yan Clan would go to foil. Yan Zhongfeng had been under pressure to preserve his relationship with the Xiao Clan. The woman beside him was beginning to lose interest in him.

Ever since Yan Zhongfeng successfully hooked Xiao Shiyun from Xiao Clan, not only had he gained control of her body, but he had also brought out her flirtatious behavior.

She would have gone for someone else if they were bold enough to seduce her. Even so, she would still be restless. Yan Zhongfeng knew this well, but because of family matters with Xiao Clan, he would have to be patient with her.

Yan Zhongfeng was not an ambitious man. All he ever wanted was to conquer the entire Xiao Clan with his own ability so Xiao Shiyun would live to please him, not the other way around….

"Master Yan, we are searching for his information. He doesn't seem to be from any nearby countries, so it will take time for us to gather information about him," said the man from Xiao Clan.

"Do it quick!" Yan Zhongfeng ordered deeply.

"Mistress Xiao, we found out something. A cultivator saw that young man riding on a mutated Black Luan. He said he never saw a bird this fast. And from the direction he pointed, I can only say they left for the Greencloud City." A man ran inside the room and said the news in a single breath.

Xiao Shiyun thought for a moment, "All right, find anything you can about him and bring them to me..." she saw the suspicious and displeased look of Yan Zhongfeng and added, "...I'll send them to 2nd Master Xiao for taking care of him."

Xiao Shiyun turned away and returned to her room, leaving the skeptical and dissatisfied Yan Zhongfeng. What could he do other than swallowing his dissatisfaction? Not like he had command over her or anything.

Xiao Shiyun entered her room. Locking the door, she hung the portrait in front of her bed with much care, as if she was handling a delicate treasure. She leaned on the bed as she grabbed her left breast with her right hand. Her left hand naturally found the way to her pussy, which she played with on top of her dress. But in a matter of seconds, the dress felt restraining to her. She immediately threw away the restricting robe as her three fingers penetrated her pussy and her right hand squeezed her breasts with excessive strength.

She felt especially lusty today and even thought about inviting Yan Zhongfeng tonight, but she decided against it. Not only it was Yan Zhongfeng, who usually invited her to the bed, but she also didn't want to compare his lousy dick with that young man. It would completely destroy her mood.

"Shen..." a soft moan left her wet lips. She heard about the name of the young man from her family members. Although they wanted to hide some facts like the reason why Shen suddenly started his slaughter, but they had to spill out everything when she threatened to kill them.

Xiao Shiyun was the reason that the Xiao Clan made a connection with Yan Clan and became the second strongest in the Yan City. Her words were only below the Clan Head of the Xiao Clan! She was especially interested in Shen when she learned that he got angry because of his women. She didn't think she was the most beautiful in the entire world, but she had confidence in her beauty.

Being loved and cared for by such a man would be wonderful. She wanted him to spend night and days with her and pound her hard. Enough to make her unconscious. She felt she would be fine no matter how unreasonable of a request he made. The figure of the young man from last night just burned too deeply in her heart.

"Shen... Shen... SHEN!!!"

Her moans gradually grew larger as her fingers moved more fiercely. As time passed from second to minutes, she came at the end of three minutes and stared at her hand in disbelief. Even Yan Zhongfeng had to exert great effort to make her come once. Many nights he even failed to make her come, and now... now she came by fingering herself for a few minutes...

She crept in her bed as she laid there, feeling empty. While her lust didn't sate, she felt a sudden sense of clarity after the orgasm. Even if she wanted Shen, he was a capable man. Capable enough to defeat the third elder at his young age. She couldn't force herself on him. She must search for a different approach.

For this, she must find out everything about him. Like how in a war you can't fight without knowing your enemy's strength, similarly, she must learn about Shen if she wants to be with him. With this thought, she embraced the sleep that came untimely. Drifting into the worlds of dreams where she couldn't help but wander in...

—————

While Xiao Shiyun and Yan Zhongfeng was with their own thought, Shen and girls stopped to rest in the wilderness. The sun fell for over two hours and the group had to slow down many times during flying as Yan QingQing had problem breathing. Even though Shen used a common shield to block the wind pressure, it didn't help much. Obviously, their speed efficiency dropped by half.

Shen cleared an area of twenty meters and took out five prepared tents from the Mortal Realm. After the Mortal Realm unlocked, Shen kept all the common items, excluding cooking ingredients and materials inside the Mortal Realm.

Soon, Shen started cooking and girls helped him. Of the four girls, only Mingyue Gelou and Yan QingQing could properly help him in cooking. As for the rest two, they knew nothing about cooking, so they could only stand by the side and see how Shen cooked.

After Shen served the dish, everyone eagerly sated their hunger. Everyone specifically looked at Yan QingQing while eating. There was no weird reason, it was because it would be her first time eating anything cooked by Shen. And they knew whoever ate Shen's cooking for the first time; they always had surprised and interesting expression.

Yan QingQing was surprised when she saw Shen taking out the tents and not to mention when he even started cooking. She salivated just by the fragrance. What was he? A martial artist? An Alchemist? Or a chef? She couldn't understand how could a young man like him, who only looked a few years older than her, knew so many things.

When she took the first bite from Abbeocuri, a vegetable dish and was left wide-eyed. It was just a variety of vegetable meshed together with salting and spices Shen used, other than that it looked extremely normal and impossible to imagine that such a dish produced such refined taste. She never tasted such a dish before!

Shen finished the meal casually. The taste was granted since he used his own custom made spices. He already used thyme and perillas from the Immortal Realm to make sauce, seasoning, and broth. He even separated three Thyme and Perillas to collect from them at a different time. From the first Thyme and Perilla, he collected leaves after two years inside the Immortal Realm, which is a little over seven days in the outside world. And for the next one every ten years, and for the last, he decided to pluck from them every 100 years. Not to mention with his natural cooking skills he could make something extraordinary out of common ingredients. The dishes he prepared now was bound to taste heavenly.

After the meal, the girls returned to their designated tent. Yan QingQing still remembered the taste of the dishes. There was a time in her life when she thought, why do humans have to eat. But for the first time in her life, she thought why didn't she had another belly to eat...

———

Inside the Immortal Realm

Shen found Kaidi meditating deeply; the plate of the Heavenly Emperor Palace was in front of her. It was unusual to see her meditate and combined with her serious expression, Shen couldn't help but stare at her blankly. Only when she released a deep sigh and opened her eyes, did he wake up from his stupor.

The eyes of Kaidi immediately fell on Shen. From the look on his face, she understood that he was staring at her for a long time. She couldn't feel it because of her meditative state.

"What are you doing?" she asked.

Shen scratched the back of his head as he sat behind her. His legs wrapped below her knees and thigh, as his hands hugged her waist. He planted a kiss on her cheek and leaned his chin on her shoulder. "Appreciating," he whispered in her ears.

Kaidi slightly moved away her face and asked again, "Appreciating what?"

"Of course, that would be your breathtaking beauty." Shen immediately replied.

"Pervert," Kaidi faked to break away from Shen's "clutch," but the beautiful curve that formed on her flawless lips didn't go unnoticed by Shen. Both of them remained silent for the next hour as they silently enjoyed each other's company. It became their habit to do it once in a while. Sometimes, after waking up from sleep or sometimes while taking a rest during his training.

"What were you doing with that?" Shen broke the silence between them as he pointed at the plate of the Heavenly Emperor Palace.

After Kaidi stopped being lazy and unreasonable, Shen lifted all the restrictions he had placed for her. Even if the last person of the world betrayed him, that wouldn't be Kaidi, more like she couldn't. Her life was connected with his and forever will be. Even in his Absolute Taming Manual.

"Mmm, I was thinking if I could control the Treasure Energy from it and absorb them."

"Didn't you say, you can't control it and the absorbing process might go wrong and destroy your body? Why are you suddenly trying to do something so foolish?" Shen's voice immediately got serious and his hands on her waist tightened.

"Eh, I'm not doing such a thing. I was meditating to see if it was possible to communicate with the palace and absorb the energy slowly, but sadly I couldn't do it." Kaidi placed her hands on top Shen's. She could feel his worry but she wanted to get stronger as fast as possible. Not to mention being able to absorb the energy from this palace would increase her strength by leaps and bounds.

Shen thought for a moment. "Then how about we set up the palace on the other realm? We planned to do that anyway, let's do it now."

Kaidi nodded. It might be a good idea to try this method when the palace was on its complete form, the energy won't be concentrated in a single place and she might have the chance to absorb then.

"Let me try something before that." Shen took the plate on his hand and smiled.

His Absolute Upgrade did many wonders so far. He wondered what will happen when he upgraded the palace to +10? What change will the palace have? The size will be bigger? Or there will be some different changes? He looked forward to it as he prepared to see another item which will be upgraded to +10.

Absolute Upgrade!

Like usual, the Heavenly Emperor Palace flashed a light, but the light didn't dim down as it got increasingly brighter and brighter. Shen felt his spiritual power suddenly being sucked inside the Absolute Upgrade Rune and his eyelids got heavier as he fell on Kaidi, unconscious.


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
BoredDreamer BoredDreamer

I was able to release this chapter today, though it's already 3 AM. Let's not mind the small details...

Chapter 70: To Do, or Not?

Shen woke up from a long deep nap. His head was heavy, his spirit felt drained. Why was he feeling this way? Slowly he remembered what happened before he fell unconscious. He sighed inwardly and opened his eyes.

He felt as if he couldn't bear the brightness, and he instantly shut his eyes down. "Kitty, are you trying to blind me?" he complained.

When he opened his eyes, finding Kaidi smiling with a relieved expression. She was so bright that Shen had to close his eyes.

"Stop speaking nonsense. You were unconscious for two days straight. What happened suddenly? Your spiritual power was drained to the point that made me scared to death," she paused and shouted with anger, "I don't care if you die, but don't drag me with you!"

"Don't be so harsh. Come, give your master a kiss." Shen didn't mind her words. He knew her enough to translate her words automatically.

"Here, kiss my palm." Kaidi angrily pushed her palm on Shen's lips.

Shen immediately licked on her palm, causing her to be startled and retract her palm. "You, sicko, pervert. How dare you do something like that..." Kaidi backed away and wiped her hand on the bedding, not willing to keep this sicko's nasty saliva on her hand. She threw the plate of Heavenly Emperor Palace to Shen. "What did you do to this plate?"

"Hmm? What do you mean?" Shen took the plate and checked with his Absolute Upgrade.

[Heavenly Emperor Palace +1]

The upgrade was successful as he expected, but confused why did the Absolute Upgrade rune suddenly devoured his spiritual energy…

"I don't know what you did but after the light faded away, the Treasure Energy on the plate got purer and increased in quantity and quality. I would say, it increased by almost 15%-20%" Kaidi said as she gazed at the plate in Shen's hand.

Shen took a few moments to digest what Kaidi said, "Hmm, so you are saying that the energy in this plate became higher in quality and also increased in quantity?"

At the weird words of Shen, Kaidi only nodded. But it caused Shen to fall in deep thought. Did he upgrade the treasure energy of this palace? "No, that's impossible. Admitting that I upgraded the treasure energy, there's no way for me to increase them in quantity. What I can think is that I upgraded the palace, and the treasure energy was a side-effect." thought Shen. This was the only outcome he could find, else he had nothing to make sense.

Now the question was, to upgrade the plate again, or not? Shen seriously considered it. After two minutes he shook his head. Just the first upgrade almost killed him; he wouldn't dare try it now. If upgrading the palace needed spiritual power, he will first increase his spiritual power before trying to upgrade the palace.

"I'm not sure either, but it is probably a side-effect of the upgrade," Shen said.

"Upgrade?" Kaidi looked confused and curious at the same time.

Shen thought for a long time before finally opening his mouth, "...Mm, it's one of my abilities. I can strengthen any items, but I still can't use this power freely. The reason my spiritual power suddenly depleted was also because of this ability. You can't tell it to anybody, it's a secret!"

He might be able to hide his cheat from the other girls, but Kaidi would definitely find about it. They were already close with each other, and if he hid something important from her and she found it, it might even hurt her feelings.

"That's..." Kaidi became speechless. What kind of ability was that? Strengthening any items, and that's too by a good margin. From how he said, it seemed he could also upgrade more than once!

She understood why he was so hesitant to about it. If it was her, she might not have revealed this information even to the people she trusts. Since he revealed his secret to her, he expressed his trust at the same time.

She nodded. "All right, it's a secret."

"Good! Let's go to the other realm, and we will set it up there." Shen said and left the realm. He didn't notice that Zhen Kaidi was trying her hard to say something, but when he left the realm she let out a large sigh. She wanted to share her secret with him but couldn't bring herself to say it.

Defeated, she entered the Mortal Realm.

———

Shen returned to the outside world and left Kawa on his tent before he entered the Mortal Realm. Kawa won't take any action as long as any hostile creatures don't enter five meters away from the tents. He ordered so because Shen won't be with the girls always. If they are not vigilant enough, they could lose their lives in the wilderness.

When Shen entered the Mortal Realm, the first thing that caught his eyes were two small porcelain bottles. He opened one bottle and instantly medicinal property rushed out of it. He opened another bottle and this time he only got a whiff of medicinal property.

These two bottles contained two upgraded pills. The first one was upgraded more than five hours ago, and the other was three hours ago. Shen found a problem from the upgraded pills. After a certain amount of time, the upgraded pills would lose their efficiency. He understood the pills didn't lose their efficiency, even when the medicinal effects left the pill but they remained present in the porcelain bottle.

"Hmm, so after the upgrade, I can keep them in a fine state for three to four hours." Shen thought as he found Kaidi just a few meters in front of him.

Both of them entered the plain area, which was in the middle of the Mortal Realm and stood in the place they already decided to set up the palace in. Just a hundred meters behind them was the large waterfall. Shen took the plate and placed it on the ground.

"What now? Expand?" Shen wondered as he mentally thought to expand the palace. In a matter of seconds, a giant golden palace stood in front of him.

Kaidi was amazed by the majesty of the palace, and Shen was amazed at how the small and light golden plate became a palace which he couldn't even see the end of.

"Shen, let's go inside!" Kaidi excitedly said. She couldn't wait to go inside the palace. Although she was in it last time, there was nothing to see. Death in every step. Completely different from now.

"Why not you go alone? I already disabled all the traps. Find the treasury for me in the meantime. It will be midnight soon, and I have to use the time before that," said Shen.

Kaidi nodded and started climbing the stairs. Shen stopped for a few moments before returning to outside and then to the Immortal Realm.

———

The next morning, the sun was yet to show up on the horizon. Shen stood outside Yan QingQing's tent and called her out, "QingQing, wake up."

Surprisingly enough, she came out just after a single call.

"Yes, erm... Teacher?" Yan QingQing tilted her head as she thought what to call Shen. His position was much higher than herself, and he didn't look old enough to be called as Master either. Out of all things, she could only call him Teacher.

"It's alright, you can call me Shen. We are about the same age, anyway." Shen said calmly as he walked a little farther away from the tents.

"What?!" Yan QingQing was so shocked that she stopped in her tracks. She was sure that Shen was at the very least 19 and possibly be 21.

Noticing such a strong reaction from QingQing, Shen couldn't help but question her, "What? Is it that surprising?"

"Same age..." Yan QingQing muttered, "I'm sixteen you know!" She clarified her age just in case Shen got her age wrong!

"Hmm, yeah. I'm the same," Shen became confused as to why she looked so surprised, "Alright, I think you know the basics of Martial Arts but I'll mention some important things. Cultivation can be generally split into 2 paths. First is the foundation building, and the second is the martial techniques. Combining both together will let one unleash formidable might."

Shen educated Yan QingQing about the various meridians and energy channels within the human body. Prior to this, Yan QingQing had already learned many information from the Yan Family, thereafter it was easy for her to follow Shen's teaching. His teaching was very informative and clear due to Shen's understanding of Absolute Medical Manual and cultivation experience.

"What kind of weapon do you prefer? I have techniques for different weapons." Shen asked as he reached the end of his explanation.

Yan QingQing thought for some moment as she said, "I prefer spear but so far I had only a little experience with it."

Shen frowned a little, "Spear is one of the hardest weapons to train with, and if you want to gain mastery on it, you have to work hard. Since you chose spear, I'll impart you with one of my major and side cultivation techniques and basic spear techniques."

Shen had basic techniques for all weapons from the Absolute Upgrade, but they were only a collection of basic actions. He couldn't understand what was the purpose of those strange movements but he learned them. He only learned sword techniques and skipped the others.

"Come closer, I'll pass on the techniques."

QingQing got closer and stopped one meter away from him. Shen got closer and grabbed her head. His face gradually got closed in.

QingQing panicked. No one could be calm at this moment, "W-what are you doing?!"

"Hm? Imparting you with the techniques." Shen's face got increasingly closer to her, and at some point, she couldn't help but focus her gaze on Shen's lips. She couldn't break away from his grip. Will she be kissed by him? How was this imparting technique? It was definitely him definitely forcing himself on her! Was this his target from the start? Then why through all those troubles? But thinking about the girls by his side, she shook away that idea. They were definitely drop-dead gorgeous beauties, he had no reason to do something like that. At that moment, she could only trust him. Not like she had any choice.

As she closed her eyes and prepared herself for the impending kiss which she couldn't stop.

Shen stopped before her face. He was only planning to touch his forehead with hers. But no matter how he looked, she misunderstood his intention. Closed eyes, parted lips. Did this girl think he was trying to kiss her? And rather than getting out of his grasp, why did she even parted her lips?

Only then did he realize, although his grasp on her was "light," it was impossible for Yan QingQing to break free. Let alone break free, she couldn't even budge it. As for her parted lips, she must have convinced herself that it was required for imparting his techniques.

Now the question was, to do, or not? What will she think about him if he really kissed her? Normally giving someone techniques only required him touching them, and if he masterfully controlled his Qi of Absolute Strengthening Technique, he could impart techniques without even touching them. His reasoning to touch forehead with theirs was only to leave a deep impression on them.

Looking at her parted lips, Shen thought it would be rude to make her wait any longer. The index and middle fingers of his right hand lifted her face upward, as the thumb finger trailed on her pale white lower lip. She gave him a refreshed feeling, unlike Mingyue Gelou, Zhu Qing. Mingyue Gelou was devoted and Zhu Qing was like an enchantress, and QingQing gave him a feeling of a refined flower. QingQing was already 16 and went through the coming age of ceremony; she was considered an adult according to the world of nine continents.

He felt Yan QingQing's body shivering with his finger trailing on her lower lip. He didn't hesitate anymore and slipped his tongue in her mouth, his lips pressed on hers. The startled QingQing only gave Shen the chance to take control over her tongue, as they coiled and twisted together. Shen willed the Absolute Duo Manual to circulate at the same time.

Although it circulated passively during intercourse, it was possible to cultivate just with a simple touch from different sex, but the efficiency was non-existent in those cases. But here they were basically "connected" with each other. Not as good as intercourse, but the efficiency was much better than touching. Combined with his cultivation being on the Martial King Realm, Yan QingQing could reap more than enough benefits.

As the Absolute Duo Manual circulated, Shen almost lost his concentration once. He immediately imparted One Nurturing Will. As for the minor cultivation technique, he gave her a cultivation technique that mainly focused on meditation. It was given to him by Yu Ruyan, while it had no purpose in cultivation, it helped him easily entering the meditative state. After he was done with them, he passed the spear techniques one after another.

The whole process took twenty-five seconds, but Shen didn't hesitate to take advantage in that time. He already kissed her; now holding back would only be his loss! He totally explored her mouth, tasted her saliva and even mixed his saliva with hers.

When he broke the kiss, QingQing's body weight fell on Shen. She heavily heaved for breath. It was her first kiss... it was passionate and a bit overwhelming.

"The techniques are already in your head. The cultivation technique you see is only there to help you to enter the meditative state. After you enter that state, you will find the main technique I gave you," Shen calmly said, as if the event just a moment was insignificant.

He took out a porcelain bottle. "Take this, you will take one pill after every 24 hours from now on. This will help you speed up your cultivation."

QingQing took a pill from the bottle and instantly her spirit gained clarity; she felt boundless energy coursing through her body. "I feel boundless energy in my body. This pill is almighty!" QingQing exclaimed, her cheeks flushed pink because of the earlier event! Her lips became blood red, which was a striking contrast from earlier.

Shen only found her more charming now, feeling the lust inside him he took a deep breath to calm himself down and coughed, "This pill only increases your cultivation speed, not your strength. The reason your strength increased was because of my dual cultivation technique."

Shen used his Absolute Vision to check her strength and felt disappointed. The boundless energy she felt was only 5,000 jins of pure strength. For a mortal, this was indeed a boundless amount of strength, but Shen expected her to gain at least 10,000 jins of strength.

"Dual Cultivation Technique?"

"Yes, as for the details, ask Su Rou when you find her free. Now start cultivating according to the meditation manual."

QingQing followed his words and sat down, cultivating according to the manual. But how can it be so easy? Especially after what Shen did a few moments ago. Whenever she closed her eyes, her mind flashed the scene of that moment.

Mediation was a quintessential practice in the way of cultivation. This was especially true when it came to cultivating higher-tiered martial arts. If one could not even calm one's heart, one would not be able to go far on the road to become an expert.

Shen saw her struggling to calm down and stopped her. "Don't force yourself, the more naturally you approach meditation, the more naturally it comes to you. Practice with the spear techniques and only try to meditate when you think your mind is in a relaxed state."

QingQing followed his advice and stopped trying.

Shen took out an oversized wooden stick, it was three meters in length with the right amount of thickness that didn't feel too thin or thick either, "For now train with this. We will buy a suitable spear for you when we reach Greencloud City."

She took the stick and held it like a spear before she tried thrusting and piercing.

Shen called Kawa as he introduced it to QingQing, "This is my contracted wolf, Kawa. You don't have to worry here and can train freely. It will keep you safe. I'll check on the others. You can go ahead with practicing."

Shen looked at the sky while leaving behind Kawa and QingQing, who was checking out the demonic contracted wolf. The sky was still dark, it might take 15-30 minutes for the sun to appear, also the time when the girls should start waking up.

He decided to wake them up, while "imparting" One Nurturing Will to them. He licked his lips as he entered the tent of Wenren Wushuang.


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Alright, I'm not sure about the quality anymore. I'll wait for the comments to see if this chapter needs edit.

Let us hope there will be another chappy tomorrow.

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