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A world littered with countless dangers and the undead, a young man died a dog's death. At the wrong place and at the wrong time he was accused of stealing and was hunted.
His whole life flashed before his eyes. The young man saw the near death experiences before, the death of his mother, the abuse given to his sisters. With his last breath, he swore that in the next life he will never regret.
In his past life he had nothing but the women who took him in and cared for him. He had nothing but the clothes on his back and he had to scavenge for food to survive.
In the next, he will be the one looking down on everyone.
In the next, he will have everything.
In the next, he will protect those he cares for.
Power, wealth, women.
He will obtain it all.
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Creator of the story here, shamelessly giving my own work five stars. This is the first time that I tried writing a story and letting other people read it so I have no idea whether people would find my work likable. If you do, then I hope you could stick around until till the end and if you don't. Hope you'll give some advice where I should work on. Thanks everyone.
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BORING STORY. WEAK MC, SLOW MC, CRINGEY WORDS.. HAIZT. ILL JUST DROP THIS SHIT.. WEAK TO STRONG?? THE HELL?? I THNK THIS IS IDIOT TO WEAK.. -.- IT SEEMS I WASTED MY TIME READING THIS SHIT..STORY IS PREDICTABLE AS FUCK!! NO EXCITEMENTS..
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Nice written story, the chapters are quite long, but donโt feel too stretched. I like the idea. Some may call it cliche how the characters are connected, but I think itโs a good way to do it. :)
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Itโs an alright story. I am just wondering if you are ever going to write more of it. Iโd greatly appreciate it if you could tell me if you are or not.
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Overall, it's a pretty good book. I'm enjoying how the main character is starting change in personality due to his abilities, but I'll be 100% honest when I say I dislike all the mc's "wives" they don't think, and they're written in a way this is only ever useful or effective in the story during certain events. We haven't heard anything about what the people that were accepted into their fortress are doing. Are they just lazing around? Or are they actually working. It would have been smart of them to start farming to help upkeep their supplies, because there's no guarantee that their supplies will last as long as they're estimating. I'd say I rated it only a bit higher than my initial intention only because I'd love to see this story do better. The end it I have one request: Please for the love of God have the MC think further than sex. Aye he's the Sin of Greed, but there's more to be greedy about than sex and power. And he wasn't always Greed either, so he should fully be capable of thinking beyond sex at least, and it's shown occasionally but not enough to overhaul the occasions that he's ALWAYS around those girls that are also ALWAYS thinking about sex.
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I stop reading this because the MC will save some strangers to his base camp, it will be men and women. If he only saved women maybe i could reconsider spending my time to read this. Anna adopted mother was already 37 years old and she still love MC's father, i don't know how many times maybe she had been gangbanged. If I modified the story I would not take Anna's adopted mother, or I would create something from the system that can purify women making them younger and virgin again
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dont make the females fall for the MC very easily and without a fucking reason please. harem is OK but dont make it empty vase without personality!
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This is one of the best!!This is one of the best!!This is one of the best!!This is one of the best!!This is one of the best!!This is one of the best!!This is one of the best!!This is one of the best!!
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Pretty good so far. Hope it stays that way. :) ..................................................................................................................
Just want to put a review ,why? cuz this not enough rating ,, this novel deserve more rating ,, this one ha a lot of potential hope the the author don't drop this , so far ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ __________
Reveal SpoilerVolume 1 : Greed's Reincarnation
- 1 Prologue 6 years ago
- 2 Regret 6 years ago
- 3 Waking Up from a Dream 6 years ago
- 4 Greed's Reincarnation 6 years ago
- 5 Side Quests 6 years ago
- 6 Vacation 6 years ago
- 7 Mix of Truth and Lies 6 years ago
- 8 Maybe a little? 6 years ago
- 9 [NFK] Little Anna and Mr. Wolf 6 years ago
- 10 The Sin of Lust 6 years ago
- 11 The City and the Camp 6 years ago
- 12 That night already took her life 6 years ago
- 13 Can I be your other girlfriend? 6 years ago
- 14 How did it begin? 6 years ago
- 15 A Woman's Secrets and her Fury 6 years ago
- 16 Wolf's Greed Base Camp 6 years ago
- 17 A City in Panic 6 years ago
- 18 Enemies Walk in a Narrow Road 6 years ago
- 19 Mysterious People 5 years ago
- 20 Three Way Battle 5 years ago
- 21 Conclusion and Flames 5 years ago
- 22 System Error 5 years ago
- 23 Incarnate and Evolved 5 years ago
- 24 Outbreak 5 years ago
- 25 [NFK] A New Beginning 5 years ago
- 26 I've Watched You Disrespect My Wives Long Enough 5 years ago
- 27 We'll See Just How They'll Handle Us 5 years ago
- 28 Beginning Of A Long Night 5 years ago
- 29 [NFK] Her First Time 5 years ago
- 30 Saving the Little Sister 5 years ago
- 31 Loot Box Contents 5 years ago
- 32 D-Rank Dungeon 5 years ago
- 33 Goddess Terra Temple 5 years ago
- 34 Haru-chan You're Pretty Greedy 5 years ago
- 35 Clergyman's Journal 5 years ago
- 36 What if it isn't? 5 years ago
- 37 Taking A Break 5 years ago
- 38 Do you not like me? 5 years ago
- 39 Is the dungeon boss a dog? 5 years ago
- 40 Dungeon Boss 5 years ago
- 41 Fighting the Dungeon Boss 5 years ago
- 42 Killing the Dungeon Boss 5 years ago
- 43 For him, I'll even burn down the world 5 years ago
- 44 Searching the next ruins 5 years ago
- 45 Done flirting? 5 years ago
- 46 Sorry... 5 years ago
I love the story so far, the premise of the apocalypse, the devouring ability of the mc and the personalities of the characters introduced. I really hope the author continues it, I'm pretty sure it will be amazing as long as story maintains the current quality. The only problem is the Synopsis, I mean it's cool and everything but I ignored the novel a lot of times before choosing it because it was too vague. It would nice if it included some additional information so that people won't do the same mistake I did ๐
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