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cedrike21

I am happy because i clearly read and feel the readiness. Dragon is the beast which pictures the avarice so good point for this. Thank you for this venture.

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HRKitu

I have been trying to get in touch soon as I get home I'll be home soon to help me get the ball rolling on this email as confirmation email from you but now that you have to be at my house by the way the other one is a little bit of time works best for you and I'll be back to the office and will get it to you as soon as I get back home I will be there at my place if that's the only thing that would have to be at the airport at the moment so if you can please give us and we can go to get my money is on the way to the end of January I can do it for sharing this with them for a few hours but I have been a bit and see you soon and thank for all the work you do for the next few days.

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SamStrike_

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Kruler

This story is pretty good and i dont have many complaints. However once lilith took control and is restricting everything, its not as good. The whole untouchable goddess thing ruins a book for me

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Mememaster2424

Its great you shuild read it and the story isent cringe yay decent story its just uhhhhh i uhhh good and the story is exciting... uhhh well thats all Read it its great

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LongsonFullmetal

Will update this review accordingly, bt for now... That nohomo tag πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ That alone is gonna make me read this, as i feel the humour will be good.

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ww2doggo

This book is very intriguing for people who love science fiction and also who love some gruesome vrmmorpg monster killing stuff with a tint of gender bender and also loves military stuff so I think you will be very interested in this book if you like more than 1 of this category I said.

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Agnal_Nicolas

I have to say that it was better than expected. The storyline is a little slow but still it does a better job that many stories out there. It was my first time reading a gender Bender based novel and it was great.

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pradeepa10

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Sir_daoless

One of the best stories I've read with this app, especially like the fact that despite the fact that theres gender gender it's much deeper than how its normally done and doesn't get mentioned that 'but I'm a guy' every 5 seconds

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Toirdelbach

Just letting everyone know before hand, the main character IS gender bent. Not just a trap, he plays as a FEMALE character. Not that that is bad, just a warning to let you know. It's not my cup of tea because of that and the writing is about average but, it's your call and I'm sure that there are many people that will love this story. Good luck, Author-san and I hope that your story is loved by many!

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Stingy

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SolaceHunter

Is the MC in the game gonna stay female? I don't mind that he looks like a female, but I dont really like it when they actually change gender. The novel seems pretty good so far. I admit I havent gotten far though.

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okechukwu1736

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Tekknos

Love this so far and then made it pay to read well my one rule is never give reds to a pay to read because I already have to pay why give free advertisements to a pay when you can give it to a free one and they need it more.

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kikebau

Love love love love love .................................. Author you are doing a great thing with this novel. Keep up the good work. Really like his/her personalities and tama is the bomb.

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This is an absolute gem of a story. It has action, comedy and amazing grammar. The aushould be very proud of themselves because in my opinion they have made a masterpiece.

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34366
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Great chapter and I hope your mom comes out ok, my one piece of constructive criticism is that the new rave needed a bit of foreshadowing since it felt like it came out of left field.

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cedrike21

I am happy because i clearly read and feel the readiness. Dragon is the beast which pictures the avarice so good point for this. Thank you for this venture.

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HRKitu

I have been trying to get in touch soon as I get home I'll be home soon to help me get the ball rolling on this email as confirmation email from you but now that you have to be at my house by the way the other one is a little bit of time works best for you and I'll be back to the office and will get it to you as soon as I get back home I will be there at my place if that's the only thing that would have to be at the airport at the moment so if you can please give us and we can go to get my money is on the way to the end of January I can do it for sharing this with them for a few hours but I have been a bit and see you soon and thank for all the work you do for the next few days.

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SamStrike_

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Kruler

This story is pretty good and i dont have many complaints. However once lilith took control and is restricting everything, its not as good. The whole untouchable goddess thing ruins a book for me

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Mememaster2424

Its great you shuild read it and the story isent cringe yay decent story its just uhhhhh i uhhh good and the story is exciting... uhhh well thats all Read it its great

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LongsonFullmetal

Will update this review accordingly, bt for now... That nohomo tag πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ That alone is gonna make me read this, as i feel the humour will be good.

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MrZeo
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Adrrems

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ww2doggo

This book is very intriguing for people who love science fiction and also who love some gruesome vrmmorpg monster killing stuff with a tint of gender bender and also loves military stuff so I think you will be very interested in this book if you like more than 1 of this category I said.

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MrZeo
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Agnal_Nicolas

I have to say that it was better than expected. The storyline is a little slow but still it does a better job that many stories out there. It was my first time reading a gender Bender based novel and it was great.

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pradeepa10

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Sir_daoless

One of the best stories I've read with this app, especially like the fact that despite the fact that theres gender gender it's much deeper than how its normally done and doesn't get mentioned that 'but I'm a guy' every 5 seconds

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Toirdelbach

Just letting everyone know before hand, the main character IS gender bent. Not just a trap, he plays as a FEMALE character. Not that that is bad, just a warning to let you know. It's not my cup of tea because of that and the writing is about average but, it's your call and I'm sure that there are many people that will love this story. Good luck, Author-san and I hope that your story is loved by many!

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Stingy

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tayeni01

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SolaceHunter

Is the MC in the game gonna stay female? I don't mind that he looks like a female, but I dont really like it when they actually change gender. The novel seems pretty good so far. I admit I havent gotten far though.

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okechukwu1736

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Red_Sky
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Andrea_Salvetti

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Tekknos

Love this so far and then made it pay to read well my one rule is never give reds to a pay to read because I already have to pay why give free advertisements to a pay when you can give it to a free one and they need it more.

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Red_Sky
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kikebau

Love love love love love .................................. Author you are doing a great thing with this novel. Keep up the good work. Really like his/her personalities and tama is the bomb.

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Red_Sky
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Amazing story XpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxXpxpxpxpxpxpxxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpx

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This is an absolute gem of a story. It has action, comedy and amazing grammar. The aushould be very proud of themselves because in my opinion they have made a masterpiece.

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34366
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Great chapter and I hope your mom comes out ok, my one piece of constructive criticism is that the new rave needed a bit of foreshadowing since it felt like it came out of left field.

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