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Write a reviewThis has potential, read the first 2 chapters. The reason why my review is so low is due to the synopsis being a single sentence and chapter 1 jumping straight into the story without explaining the MC's previous life/backstory. What makes him what he is. It's pretty confusing and bland since there isn't really anything to tell his personality besides being evil. Again, like I said, this has potential but there isn't any real backbone for characters, world background, and plot.
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This has potential, read the first 2 chapters. The reason why my review is so low is due to the synopsis being a single sentence and chapter 1 jumping straight into the story without explaining the MC's previous life/backstory. What makes him what he is. It's pretty confusing and bland since there isn't really anything to tell his personality besides being evil. Again, like I said, this has potential but there isn't any real backbone for characters, world background, and plot.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!