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Chapter 3: The Newborn

-"Did you see what happend?" a female voice could be heard

-"Nope, Sorry darling I was busy working, sorry" answered a man apologetically.

-"Of course you didn't, you never notice anything"

-''That's not true.''

-''Oh yes it is!!''

-''Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!''

-''Notus! I think it's a baby. What is he doing this deep in the forest?''

-''I don't know Savinlia it looks like his family abandonded him''

-''Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!'' this time huge ripples of yin-yang energy flooded over to them. They could see the ripples act as if the were radio waves, the ripples went through the air shattering the earth beneath their feet as if air was cutting water particles. Both of them (half mortal cultivators half 3rd grade peak acolytes) were bieng pushed back several meters before they could even react.

-"Such a strong power and energy!!" shouted Notus astonished, barely able to hear or hold himself back from the incoming force.

The two adults couldn't do anything due to the huge suppression they recieved, so the only thing they could do was wait until the baby stopped crying... A few seconds later, sweet laughter could be heard emanating from the front. However, this sound was mostly covered by the heavy panting coming from the two tired out adults. They both stepped forward to look at the baby they couldn't find it anywhere. Suddenly, Savin felt a small tug coming from below. Savin almost jumped out of her skin and saw the baby beneath her grabbing her robe tightly before falling asleep.


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Chapter 4: 7 years later...

In the immense, ancient and rocky desert in the Golden Fraction, time moved slowly as a few clouds were floating by calmly. Sweet bird chirping could be heard coming from elven forest neighboring the desert, making a warm and relaxing sensation with a chilly breeze. Suddenly, a hand filled with incredible speed and energy stretched out into the far distance of the desert. It was quickly accumulating immeasurable amount of energy particles, while gathering forcefully at the center of the palm, forming an extremely and compressed solidified ball. Every single second it was expanding until, it was triple the size of the palm. Finally, it was launched, it fired out like a rocket until it couldn't be seen. Until it hit the Eternal Barrier which created a huge explosion shaking the ground near it scaring almost all wildlife to death. The path which the energy ball took, destroyed completely the surroundings, forming a semi-circle pathway clear of any bumps or dust.-"Dammit, I just can't break it no matter how much I try. No matter how strong I get" said a 7 year old boy calling out in frustration.

Suddenly, he was knocked behind his head which gave him a huge lump on his head. "See, you did it again!! I told you to control your power and not to destroy the landscape, and what did you do? Destroy the landscape." His mother scolded her she was Savinlia. She was tall in normal standards, she had silver hair that reached her hips, a short nose, a complete set of perfect white teeth, asian long eyes, that were amber and a long beautiful face. However, now she looked like a white haired demon scolding a little child.


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