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I really like this novel it has a lot of things I enjoy to read it is a mix of marvel and dc and I would like to see what this Arthur does with it I hope he can keep up what he is doing because he is heading and the right direction
Although it only has 4 chapters this is already one of the better fanfics on this websites just because of the grammar alone. When I started reading this I was a bit skeptical about the system due to the fact that in most novels the system usually ruins the story with the over reliance the mc has on it the instant power ups from buying powers and bloodlines from the shop. But so far the system is working great. Sure it goes him the skills, abilities and knowledge of the persona but the mc actually has to work and train in order for him to to 100% utilize them. This can be seen in his first fight in chapter 2 or 1, I don't remember exactly which, where he almost breaks his hand from a poorly thrown punch even though he has all of the red hood's skill and knowledge. The only problem I have with it so far is the slow updates because right now this is the only good fanfic that I'm reading that has even updated in the past 3 weeks. So Good Job Author and keep it up
This is an interesting story line nice with the personas. The way it's been done is also awesome. I wonder how this will be. An anti-hero, a neutral character playing this game will be very eye opening. Don't have much to say about this, but it's going to awesome I reckon.
Not a bad start fairly typical of the type of story. MC dies and wakes somewhere else with a system. So far I am looking forward to reading the next chapter of the story. I am curious to see what the character will do next if he will train in the woods and make his house in the woods......................,.......................................,.......................................,.......................................,.................
I want moreee,......................... ............................................ Ycuvibibibjvjblhvhlccocyitcohccoycifugl citcogxgoxgkxkgxig, gigi kgxlgx
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I really like this novel it has a lot of things I enjoy to read it is a mix of marvel and dc and I would like to see what this Arthur does with it I hope he can keep up what he is doing because he is heading and the right direction
Although it only has 4 chapters this is already one of the better fanfics on this websites just because of the grammar alone. When I started reading this I was a bit skeptical about the system due to the fact that in most novels the system usually ruins the story with the over reliance the mc has on it the instant power ups from buying powers and bloodlines from the shop. But so far the system is working great. Sure it goes him the skills, abilities and knowledge of the persona but the mc actually has to work and train in order for him to to 100% utilize them. This can be seen in his first fight in chapter 2 or 1, I don't remember exactly which, where he almost breaks his hand from a poorly thrown punch even though he has all of the red hood's skill and knowledge. The only problem I have with it so far is the slow updates because right now this is the only good fanfic that I'm reading that has even updated in the past 3 weeks. So Good Job Author and keep it up
This is an interesting story line nice with the personas. The way it's been done is also awesome. I wonder how this will be. An anti-hero, a neutral character playing this game will be very eye opening. Don't have much to say about this, but it's going to awesome I reckon.
Not a bad start fairly typical of the type of story. MC dies and wakes somewhere else with a system. So far I am looking forward to reading the next chapter of the story. I am curious to see what the character will do next if he will train in the woods and make his house in the woods......................,.......................................,.......................................,.......................................,.................
I want moreee,......................... ............................................ Ycuvibibibjvjblhvhlccocyitcohccoycifugl citcogxgoxgkxkgxig, gigi kgxlgx