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Chapter 22: reboot?

I'm thinking of rebooting the novel. I only have 39 readers including me. I have identified many things that I need to fix in the novel.

*wall of text

*no story build up

*lack of plot

*weak character development

*first few chaps too boring

*lack of twists

*need faceslaps

*lack of dialogue

*weak dialogue.

And so. reboot. reboot should begin by February. please add anything to the list of problems if I missed anything. its my first novel you know. I have absolutely no experience.

sorry about doing this to my precious readers. but no one will join the horde otherwise. I hope you read the reboot.

the title of the reboot will stay the same. except that its going to have the word (reboot) for the first month.

Again, sorry and please don't give up hope on me.


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