It needs more of a plot and story line I mean it just starts u off kinda in the middle it need to start from when i woke up all i can think is about u (flash back tell the people where they met and how there relationship begans) then the first two chapters u have should be just one chapter
It needs more of a plot and story line I mean it just starts u off kinda in the middle it need to start from when i woke up all i can think is about u (flash back tell the people where they met and how there relationship begans) then the first two chapters u have should be just one chapter