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I remember first reading your book on Wattpad. It struck me so hard and grasped my attention to where I couldn't wait to find out what happened next. People always say you never forget your first love, but I can't seem to forget the first author who got me attached to novels online , and one of the very first books that got me out of twilight vampires. . . . P.S. if your going to sell paper back copies of the eternal series I'd totally buy it . Hehehe.😉👍
Ah author you don't know how sad my heart is cause the novel has ended.. But thank you for such a beautiful story. I truly enjoyed reading every chapter I couldn't put it down.. Even the ss spent on unlocking the chapters were worth it.. Thank you for your hard work.♥️♥️
If you love this author's recent works, do not pass up this earlier gem. Short, sweet and true to her typical style.
Amazing book I read when I was like 14 and I found it again to re read it , it gave me nostalgia. Even if obviously back then I was this innocent little thing and certain things didn’ have the same heart poundin affect it still having my fantasize over some of the guys in this book 😅❤️
Another beautiful story from Ash, this may have been your first but your gift for story telling was so obvious even when you wrote this. You are my favourite author on this platform & I'll be reading your books for as long as you keep writing them 👍😍💕
I really enjoyed this novel and look forward to reading more from this author. It’s a fast burn but I also appreciate that as sometimes novels feel like they drag on in different directions with truly not staying on plot. Thanks for the read.
Amazing story … loved it. I’m actually reading this quite late after finishing Valerian Empire, Heidi and the Lord, Young Master Damien’s Pet, Bambi and the Duke, Crown’s Obsession, Letters to Romeo and while reading ongoing new novel Allure of the Night. Ash Knight’s novels are amazing and while this novel was written much earlier, it doesn’t disappoint. Great work!!
Read a long time back n re-read again I really adore the writings of the author how flawlessly the story line are put into it. I have read almost all the books of this author n let me honest it has never disappointed me instead it made me hook on it for more...
I’m glad I came back and read this earlier work of Author Ash. I love all of her stories and see inspiration in this one for some of her other novels. Ruka and Eve make a cute power couple and I am happy they found each other.
I am already a fan of Ash Knight books.. Some are slow burn but some are regular... but all of them are so interesting.. No misunderstandings, No unnecessary chapters. they have everything.. Romance, action, suspense, thriller, drama . u will love this book
This was the first book of author Ash I read. And I've been in love with her books ever since. She never fails to amaze me with her writing skills❤️
I have read all of Ash’s more recent books, but picked this one up during the Halloween WN event. It’s her first book and I am not disappointed! At this early point in her writing, Ash was already slaying it! I’m in love with Ruka and Eve and can’t wait to see how the story ends!
Ash’s books are all fantastic and you will not regret unlocking and reading any of them. This is her first book and you can see how taented she is even at book 1 👌😍
OMG...I'm really excited with this book and author...you're such an exquisite writer...thanks for pinning me on my bed and sometimes pushing me to the edges and also curling my toes....lols🥰you're the best author. Need more of your books.. through with the series and they're wonderful Valerian empire Heidi and the Lord Bambi and the Duke Young master Damian's pet The crown's obsession....and this now I'm really grateful, thanks a lot dear author 🙏💕❣️😍
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This may be the first but this is the best written book of ashes that’s on the site. No duplication of words everything’s normal very good grammar and placement it’s and it’s a good story I see where a lot of the names came from SMH
Binge read the whole book in a day!! Fell in love with the story and characters at the beginning that I just couldnt put it down. Yes, there are some grammatical errors or word confusions but it the author does inform you about it in the beginning. Now in my opinion there are very few that they do not cause any flow problems the story.
Beautiful story, one of the few that are difficult to put down once you start reading. I'd find myself laughing at myself every time I said one last chapter knowing I'd be saying that for the next hour. I laughed, I cried, all in all if you are a fantasy romance fan it is a must read.
when I first started reading your books on wattpad was unhappy that I can't read all the remaining chapters but later on it comes to my knowledge that I can still find it here. am super happy about all your stories and the way all the books are different and unique in their own different ways.
I really enjoyed this short story, the story its self is great, i love the characters and the plot development. I know this an earlier book from Ash but its wonderful and the story’s only get better.
I know this is one of the earlier works feom the authour, but it is an awesome story! I love the mystical, first love genre and this did not disappoint!
I love the storyline! Its really interesting! Great twists and turns to the plot. Definitely kept me wanting to read more!! A nice break from reality. All of this author’s books are so imaginative! It takes you to a whole different universe!
This book is so beautifully written. I still can't find Eternity in the castle... it's taken down on wattpad & the author mentioned that the book will be here but sadly it's not here!! I really wanted to read that book.
This was a amazing read. I will not lie i was reading the last few chapters through tears. I hated to see this story end, but what a great ending. thank you Ash
I really loved Ruka. I thought he was the perfect soulmate. He was always strong and alpha, but not controlling or angry. He was always so kind to Eve and I loved it. Even though most of it takes place where FL and her friends are in high school, I still recommend it. The last chapter was slightly rushed though
Anotjet amazonf book by Ash! I wish there was more covering the last fee years Maybe we can get a sewiel eventually I think there is still more story to tell and hopefully author will tell it, in time…
I love the background story (obviously, bcs thats how I fell in love with all of Ash' book 😙). I love the stories too, and although it was just a 99 chapter book, it doesn't rlly feel that way bcs of how every chapter filled with different emotions & so much progress!! I love it!!! 🥰🥰
it's a nice storyline.....but its kinda luck of something..and i dont like chapter100 ..its dissapointing im expecting some mind blowing ending [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=recommend]
This was my Very first book I read from Ash. I started reading it from Wattpad and later transferred to Webnovel . Let’s just say, curiosity got the best of me and I am grateful to enter into her world. And you would be as well.
I Loved the story The author always does a great job creating another world I realize that this was the first book written, but it was still very good And the writing Quality improved as the story went on
good plotline and character development. I like the juxtaposition of plot with world events and background. it gives the reader some good story details
So goad i decided to read this first novel by this author whos other works i love. The characters are great and the story and world is fun and fascinating.
I’ve being in love with ash knights books since 2015 when she started with eternity in the castle and I’ve always loved writing but this book seriously motivated me to develop my ideas and gain consistency with working. This book has seriously help me through a lot, always keeping me in suspense wondering what would happen next!!
I remember first reading your book on Wattpad. It struck me so hard and grasped my attention to where I couldn't wait to find out what happened next. People always say you never forget your first love, but I can't seem to forget the first author who got me attached to novels online , and one of the very first books that got me out of twilight vampires. . . . P.S. if your going to sell paper back copies of the eternal series I'd totally buy it . Hehehe.😉👍
Ah author you don't know how sad my heart is cause the novel has ended.. But thank you for such a beautiful story. I truly enjoyed reading every chapter I couldn't put it down.. Even the ss spent on unlocking the chapters were worth it.. Thank you for your hard work.♥️♥️
If you love this author's recent works, do not pass up this earlier gem. Short, sweet and true to her typical style.
Amazing book I read when I was like 14 and I found it again to re read it , it gave me nostalgia. Even if obviously back then I was this innocent little thing and certain things didn’ have the same heart poundin affect it still having my fantasize over some of the guys in this book 😅❤️
Another beautiful story from Ash, this may have been your first but your gift for story telling was so obvious even when you wrote this. You are my favourite author on this platform & I'll be reading your books for as long as you keep writing them 👍😍💕
I really enjoyed this novel and look forward to reading more from this author. It’s a fast burn but I also appreciate that as sometimes novels feel like they drag on in different directions with truly not staying on plot. Thanks for the read.
Amazing story … loved it. I’m actually reading this quite late after finishing Valerian Empire, Heidi and the Lord, Young Master Damien’s Pet, Bambi and the Duke, Crown’s Obsession, Letters to Romeo and while reading ongoing new novel Allure of the Night. Ash Knight’s novels are amazing and while this novel was written much earlier, it doesn’t disappoint. Great work!!
Read a long time back n re-read again I really adore the writings of the author how flawlessly the story line are put into it. I have read almost all the books of this author n let me honest it has never disappointed me instead it made me hook on it for more...
I’m glad I came back and read this earlier work of Author Ash. I love all of her stories and see inspiration in this one for some of her other novels. Ruka and Eve make a cute power couple and I am happy they found each other.
I am already a fan of Ash Knight books.. Some are slow burn but some are regular... but all of them are so interesting.. No misunderstandings, No unnecessary chapters. they have everything.. Romance, action, suspense, thriller, drama . u will love this book
This was the first book of author Ash I read. And I've been in love with her books ever since. She never fails to amaze me with her writing skills❤️
I have read all of Ash’s more recent books, but picked this one up during the Halloween WN event. It’s her first book and I am not disappointed! At this early point in her writing, Ash was already slaying it! I’m in love with Ruka and Eve and can’t wait to see how the story ends!
Ash’s books are all fantastic and you will not regret unlocking and reading any of them. This is her first book and you can see how taented she is even at book 1 👌😍
OMG...I'm really excited with this book and author...you're such an exquisite writer...thanks for pinning me on my bed and sometimes pushing me to the edges and also curling my toes....lols🥰you're the best author. Need more of your books.. through with the series and they're wonderful Valerian empire Heidi and the Lord Bambi and the Duke Young master Damian's pet The crown's obsession....and this now I'm really grateful, thanks a lot dear author 🙏💕❣️😍
Reveal Spoiler This may be the first but this is the best written book of ashes that’s on the site. No duplication of words everything’s normal very good grammar and placement it’s and it’s a good story I see where a lot of the names came from SMH
Binge read the whole book in a day!! Fell in love with the story and characters at the beginning that I just couldnt put it down. Yes, there are some grammatical errors or word confusions but it the author does inform you about it in the beginning. Now in my opinion there are very few that they do not cause any flow problems the story.
Beautiful story, one of the few that are difficult to put down once you start reading. I'd find myself laughing at myself every time I said one last chapter knowing I'd be saying that for the next hour. I laughed, I cried, all in all if you are a fantasy romance fan it is a must read.
when I first started reading your books on wattpad was unhappy that I can't read all the remaining chapters but later on it comes to my knowledge that I can still find it here. am super happy about all your stories and the way all the books are different and unique in their own different ways.
I really enjoyed this short story, the story its self is great, i love the characters and the plot development. I know this an earlier book from Ash but its wonderful and the story’s only get better.
I know this is one of the earlier works feom the authour, but it is an awesome story! I love the mystical, first love genre and this did not disappoint!
I love the storyline! Its really interesting! Great twists and turns to the plot. Definitely kept me wanting to read more!! A nice break from reality. All of this author’s books are so imaginative! It takes you to a whole different universe!
This book is so beautifully written. I still can't find Eternity in the castle... it's taken down on wattpad & the author mentioned that the book will be here but sadly it's not here!! I really wanted to read that book.
This was a amazing read. I will not lie i was reading the last few chapters through tears. I hated to see this story end, but what a great ending. thank you Ash
I really loved Ruka. I thought he was the perfect soulmate. He was always strong and alpha, but not controlling or angry. He was always so kind to Eve and I loved it. Even though most of it takes place where FL and her friends are in high school, I still recommend it. The last chapter was slightly rushed though
Anotjet amazonf book by Ash! I wish there was more covering the last fee years Maybe we can get a sewiel eventually I think there is still more story to tell and hopefully author will tell it, in time…
I love the background story (obviously, bcs thats how I fell in love with all of Ash' book 😙). I love the stories too, and although it was just a 99 chapter book, it doesn't rlly feel that way bcs of how every chapter filled with different emotions & so much progress!! I love it!!! 🥰🥰
it's a nice storyline.....but its kinda luck of something..and i dont like chapter100 ..its dissapointing im expecting some mind blowing ending [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=recommend]
This was my Very first book I read from Ash. I started reading it from Wattpad and later transferred to Webnovel . Let’s just say, curiosity got the best of me and I am grateful to enter into her world. And you would be as well.
I Loved the story The author always does a great job creating another world I realize that this was the first book written, but it was still very good And the writing Quality improved as the story went on
good plotline and character development. I like the juxtaposition of plot with world events and background. it gives the reader some good story details
So goad i decided to read this first novel by this author whos other works i love. The characters are great and the story and world is fun and fascinating.
I’ve being in love with ash knights books since 2015 when she started with eternity in the castle and I’ve always loved writing but this book seriously motivated me to develop my ideas and gain consistency with working. This book has seriously help me through a lot, always keeping me in suspense wondering what would happen next!!