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Write a reviewThe storyline was good but I think the characters lacked emotions. I mean I can't relate. It's like they are monotonous. I guess it will help if they deliver the lines while doing something. It's like a fast-paced story. Also, can you please add a cover? It will add to the appeal of the story overall. Thanks.
This story has a lot of potential. However, its stop early and the reader has not had the opportunity to really enjoy it. There are no updates. Its a shame, really. I hope the author decides to continue with this story or make a decision as to what direction they want to take - end, drop or continue.
The storyline was good but I think the characters lacked emotions. I mean I can't relate. It's like they are monotonous. I guess it will help if they deliver the lines while doing something. It's like a fast-paced story. Also, can you please add a cover? It will add to the appeal of the story overall. Thanks.
This story has a lot of potential. However, its stop early and the reader has not had the opportunity to really enjoy it. There are no updates. Its a shame, really. I hope the author decides to continue with this story or make a decision as to what direction they want to take - end, drop or continue.