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Nice novel with well placed plot but why is the author not uploading any chapters? I wish the author continue with the novel as it is one of the top 5 novel in my library including those highly ranked novel.
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Personally I like how the story progressed sometimes it feels like it gets repetitive but it’s not at the level where I would drop it. It would be better if the MC was only in a relationship with RongRong but it’s still fine that he is with that Phoenix girl but no more. But where are are the updates at?????
Just read it IT'S THE BEST fanfic about dragons, cool mc and doulou dalu and the idea of adding charcters to the actual plot of doulou dalu is fantastic and exciting
Disappointing! ... Another harem fanfic ... 😒😒😒 I do not deny that this story is interesting at the beginning ... but in the end the author decided to make it a harem ... Seriously, what way to ruin it ... Is he really an author? ... because you ruin your story with a harem ... 😡😡😡 ... That's why I give a star, because if I could give zero stars as a way of classification I would gladly give it ... 😝😬 😡😠 ... but if you still want to read it. Just read it until chapter 77, because from the beginning it is that the author ruined his story in my opinion, by making him a harem ... 😑😝😒😬😡😠
Man, you're awesome!Your story is amazing!Please don't leave me hanging!And in such a crucial time too!You're so heartless!Please show mercy with a new chapter!
This work is excellent. Well written and easy to understand. The simple faCt that he did not stay in shrek and developed his own network is interesting. i like the plot and the development of it. Keep up the good work.
this is a great novel I hope the author continues with this novel............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I LOVE IT. at first i thought the mc is too paranoid, tense, and egoistic. But i love how he changed gradually. And another thing that amaze me is that this is one of the longest fanfic i ever found, i like how you keep writing with commitment. HOPE YOU CAN FINISH THIS UNTIL THE END. *Sorry for the capslock, i hope to have higher chance you read it
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It starts off strong and it's really enjoyable early on but then it kinda gets slow on the story building aspect, kinda feels like I'm watching Bleaches endless filler episodes, but it gets better eventually. A few problems, in my opinion, is that I feel like the MC can be... unstable... like get this dude a snickers bar or something. It rushes the romance and doesn't really feel like it was built up that much like when your downloads are up to 18% you close your eyes for a second and then it jumps up to 30%, like what? I also feel that the author needed to do time skip earlier as some parts in the story don't feel they are needed, like, at all and are just there to fill up space. Overall I think this definitely worthy of binge reading and any parts in the story I feel are not needed will probably smack me in the face in the coming chapters, so don't take this review too seriously as I am not the author or knows what he plans to do with the story.
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I'm hoping this novel didn't get dropped I'm fine if it's on hiatus Just please don't drop it . . . Just letting you know if you continue this novel and have a stable update, I will donate 3 power stone everyday
since you are the author of one of my fave. original novel. i will shamelessly give this a 5 stars rate. hoping that this will be good if not better as your first novel.
Didn't read it probably not gonna read it but the boy evil dragon makes good novels so I'll just give him a 5 star review and I'll get exp.
Hmmmm the hype is coming back and the story is progressing well, just don't focus to much on making a love scene if your not capable on doing it well
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Lot of potetial BUT ! The MCs Mindset dont make sense... he is a reincarnated 4 godwhoKnows Sake! Y d hell does he want to live a normal life were he already knows from d start that hes in a world of Dog eat Dog world were Migth is Rigth?! Just by reading "true" novel in Earth he knew that already since be4 his birth ! I understand that u author wanna build d so called Character Building BUT u did it in a wrong way.... all in all 2.5 to 3 star pts...
Thanks for writing this, so few of these fanfics out there to feed my cravings lol..... unrepentant and shameless 5 stars for just making it before I even start reading😆😉
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Doing this for the reward that you get for writing a review, I haven’t read the story yet, so just take the review. Konichiwa and bye On 140 characters are needed
I like the new twist the author put on Doulo Dou 1. But personal I wish the MX pick one woman or just let Oscar have Rongrong like the original and Lie have the Phoneix girls.
I like this story it's just gonna make you wanna read more. And the MC is badass something he is a little bit childish but that what makes it even better.
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Nice novel with well placed plot but why is the author not uploading any chapters? I wish the author continue with the novel as it is one of the top 5 novel in my library including those highly ranked novel.
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Personally I like how the story progressed sometimes it feels like it gets repetitive but it’s not at the level where I would drop it. It would be better if the MC was only in a relationship with RongRong but it’s still fine that he is with that Phoenix girl but no more. But where are are the updates at?????
Just read it IT'S THE BEST fanfic about dragons, cool mc and doulou dalu and the idea of adding charcters to the actual plot of doulou dalu is fantastic and exciting
Disappointing! ... Another harem fanfic ... 😒😒😒 I do not deny that this story is interesting at the beginning ... but in the end the author decided to make it a harem ... Seriously, what way to ruin it ... Is he really an author? ... because you ruin your story with a harem ... 😡😡😡 ... That's why I give a star, because if I could give zero stars as a way of classification I would gladly give it ... 😝😬 😡😠 ... but if you still want to read it. Just read it until chapter 77, because from the beginning it is that the author ruined his story in my opinion, by making him a harem ... 😑😝😒😬😡😠
Man, you're awesome!Your story is amazing!Please don't leave me hanging!And in such a crucial time too!You're so heartless!Please show mercy with a new chapter!
This work is excellent. Well written and easy to understand. The simple faCt that he did not stay in shrek and developed his own network is interesting. i like the plot and the development of it. Keep up the good work.
this is a great novel I hope the author continues with this novel............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I LOVE IT. at first i thought the mc is too paranoid, tense, and egoistic. But i love how he changed gradually. And another thing that amaze me is that this is one of the longest fanfic i ever found, i like how you keep writing with commitment. HOPE YOU CAN FINISH THIS UNTIL THE END. *Sorry for the capslock, i hope to have higher chance you read it
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It starts off strong and it's really enjoyable early on but then it kinda gets slow on the story building aspect, kinda feels like I'm watching Bleaches endless filler episodes, but it gets better eventually. A few problems, in my opinion, is that I feel like the MC can be... unstable... like get this dude a snickers bar or something. It rushes the romance and doesn't really feel like it was built up that much like when your downloads are up to 18% you close your eyes for a second and then it jumps up to 30%, like what? I also feel that the author needed to do time skip earlier as some parts in the story don't feel they are needed, like, at all and are just there to fill up space. Overall I think this definitely worthy of binge reading and any parts in the story I feel are not needed will probably smack me in the face in the coming chapters, so don't take this review too seriously as I am not the author or knows what he plans to do with the story.
Reveal Spoiler I'm hoping this novel didn't get dropped I'm fine if it's on hiatus Just please don't drop it . . . Just letting you know if you continue this novel and have a stable update, I will donate 3 power stone everyday
since you are the author of one of my fave. original novel. i will shamelessly give this a 5 stars rate. hoping that this will be good if not better as your first novel.
Didn't read it probably not gonna read it but the boy evil dragon makes good novels so I'll just give him a 5 star review and I'll get exp.
Hmmmm the hype is coming back and the story is progressing well, just don't focus to much on making a love scene if your not capable on doing it well
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Lot of potetial BUT ! The MCs Mindset dont make sense... he is a reincarnated 4 godwhoKnows Sake! Y d hell does he want to live a normal life were he already knows from d start that hes in a world of Dog eat Dog world were Migth is Rigth?! Just by reading "true" novel in Earth he knew that already since be4 his birth ! I understand that u author wanna build d so called Character Building BUT u did it in a wrong way.... all in all 2.5 to 3 star pts...
Thanks for writing this, so few of these fanfics out there to feed my cravings lol..... unrepentant and shameless 5 stars for just making it before I even start reading😆😉
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Doing this for the reward that you get for writing a review, I haven’t read the story yet, so just take the review. Konichiwa and bye On 140 characters are needed
I like the new twist the author put on Doulo Dou 1. But personal I wish the MX pick one woman or just let Oscar have Rongrong like the original and Lie have the Phoneix girls.
I like this story it's just gonna make you wanna read more. And the MC is badass something he is a little bit childish but that what makes it even better.
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