*paused or dropped*The Almighty sword of Shiro

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LuxVonDeux

Alright where i begin Writing style : i give you 3 star for this because you need some re-work on this you dont need more "!" In one sentences like shiro!!!!!!!!! Just use 3 of them we know you want him look like he scream but just 3 of them is enough or use capitalism like "SHIROU!". Update : i give all my review 5 star because as original writer not even paid for it i understand your need for break or need in real life so yeah Story development : i give you 4 star because your story some time to fast pace and skip some explaination so yeah Character : i give you 4 because you dont just summon them but you alter their personality thats make it have some uniqueness to your character but i recommend you make them have more interraction on each other or to another people in your story World background : i give you 3 star becau you dont explain what kind your mc lived now what kind ruler or power house in the world mc lived in so yeah Anyway thats all i think abou if you have improved i will make another review sorry for my bad english. Good Work author

LV 7

Melshan

Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. Very good the novel recommend to everyone to follow, will not regret. 😎😎

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RoiRed

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LV 4

DentatolucioXIV

The Mc was a fat Otaku without any skills but suddenly after transmigration he be fearless a leader and other skills that doesn't make sense without referring to the instant mastery and is a little hypocrite because he protects the kingdom without thinking if it is goog or bad and bad written

LV 4

Glasgow2

Well hello people my name's Tsarck and this is my novel. To people who are wondering what type of story it is well let me tell you . It is a reincarnated in another world with a system story(the more the story goes on the less you see the system) The mc will become the leader of an organization and protect the world from the evil that seeks to destroy it (without having a hero complex) He will become strong quickly but at one point his growth will stop for a bit . The story will have 4 volume : 1st- the training 2nd- the war againgst the first ennemy 3rd-World War 4th-Going to a world of never ending anime battle(every anime characters fighting for eternity in a world.My other novel will also have that volume but obviously it will be in a different perspective) The pace of the story will sometime be extremely quick and sometime slow as a snails .So sorry if some of you don't like that . I try to write 2 chapter per day but sometimes it's quite difficult(i write way more in the week-end)