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A rampant thief dashing to cause mischief within a bustling new virtual world.
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Writing Quality: Grammar and spelling are excellent. I give 1 star for that. Story at this point is non-existent so 0 stars for that. Synopsis isn't a synopsis.... you get the idea. Total 2/5. Stability of Updates: Average. 3/5. It's new, I can't give it a bad or good score.... YET. Story development: None. 1/5 and I'm being generous with this score. I'd normally give a 0/5 for a story that has zero developments. Character Design: None. 1/5 and I'm really being generous with this score. We don't know why the story starts off as an extension of the prologue chapter in the synopsis section.... and there isn't anything explaining who or what the character is. World Background: We don't know which world, which time period, nor the game itself. I'll be generous and give a 1 out of 5 for this section.
Based on the synopsis alone I'm expected to believe that this story is about weak hardware and slow processing ability to load a game and thus there's going to be chapters wasted on loading a game just like how some anime wastes episodes charging up for a kamehameha... The synopsis is either describing a boring book about a game loading and a player logging in, or is a misrepresentation of the actual story. I do hope the author knows what "synopsis" means.... and what I see here doesn't make me want to read the book.
I am a dog I love spring rolls! I give you 5 stars! Keep it up! Write more and post chapters everyday! Fried spring rolls is the best food! Fried spring rolls is best when dipped on sweet and spicy sauce!
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