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I like santa god in the buff. I love the king, hes got a lot of character. 5 star for main character saying "XBAX GO HOME!" I like the story development. The world building needs to be worked on. But its only the start of the book. I love the character design.
Hey author here. I would appreciate Comments and reviews. It helps a lot since I’m a new writer.
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I like santa god in the buff. I love the king, hes got a lot of character. 5 star for main character saying "XBAX GO HOME!" I like the story development. The world building needs to be worked on. But its only the start of the book. I love the character design.
Hey author here. I would appreciate Comments and reviews. It helps a lot since I’m a new writer.
Keep up the good work . Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .