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Writer has poor grammar which can make reading difficult. Story is somewhat fast paced and hazy on a few details but it has potential. If author spent more time i would read it in the future.
So far it is a good story line however you should post more often when you can or you will not get many viewers and those that do read it will "End" up leaving
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This novel is quite good the author is new to writing there's a lot of potential in this and hope the author start using proper grammar and sentences or get someone to do it it will increase the quality of the chapters.
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Pretty good so far keep it up I hope the next battle will be most epic with ho-ho and darkri fighting that strange pokemon. Like whos that pokemon? will bill keep his promise or not? will the pokemon join or not? what will happen?
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please continue the novel's storyline...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it soon 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏
Writer has poor grammar which can make reading difficult. Story is somewhat fast paced and hazy on a few details but it has potential. If author spent more time i would read it in the future.
So far it is a good story line however you should post more often when you can or you will not get many viewers and those that do read it will "End" up leaving
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This novel is quite good the author is new to writing there's a lot of potential in this and hope the author start using proper grammar and sentences or get someone to do it it will increase the quality of the chapters.
Reveal Spoiler Pretty good so far keep it up I hope the next battle will be most epic with ho-ho and darkri fighting that strange pokemon. Like whos that pokemon? will bill keep his promise or not? will the pokemon join or not? what will happen?
Reveal Spoiler please continue the novel's storyline...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it soon 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏