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İt is good and understandable but it is short.İ want it to cantinue please don't stop.Also İ want to learn and know more skills it will be better if MC has more skill from different elements not just fire element like thunder bolt,darkness blade or more powerfull atack skills not just mana punch.İt would be better if MC broke system rules and can spell from previous life but in some amount of mana for example thunder bolt need 50 mp or samething like that.Also good luck İ hope you cantinue very soon.İ will wait.Gambatte.
Please don't drop I love this it's the best novel I read (as of now)....plssssssss.......the characters, background, one opness of mc and the plot.. .
Saya sangat kecewa dengan update novel ini. Terahir kali saya membaca novel ini pada tanggal 30 maret. Tapi sejak saat itu sampai sekarang pada tanggal 10 juli hanya ada update 3 bab. Jika penulis tidak memiliki waktu untuk membuat bab baru, lebih baik berhenti menulis novel ini karena 1 bab dalam 1bulan adalah kecepatan yang sangat lambat. Novelmu sendiri tidak buruk untuk dibaca, tapi karena pembaruan novel ini yang sangat lambat, hampir setiap plot yang dibuat penulis menjadi tidak efektif . Bahkan jika penulis tidak memiliki banyak waktu untuk menulis bab baru, setidaknya buatlah bab dengan 1500-2000 kata dalam seminggu. Jika tidak sanggup untuk melakukan itu, lebih baik menghentikan novel ini . Mungkin novel dengan jumlah kata yang sangat tinggi tidak menjamin kualitas novel tersebut. Tapi novel dengan kualitas baik tetap memiliki standar minimum kata untuk di baca pembaca setiap minggunya agar tidak dilupakan para pembaca dengan cepat.
Boring even though the Mc is the strongest before but now that he time travel he is the weakest even his sister is more stronger than him. How did he fucking become the strongest person in his last life then???? His improvements right now even though he time travel is so slow. I'm sure this will just be Repeative Mc will beat Stronger people than him then if he beat them then there is another stronger people keep popping up.. There's no point on wasting my time reading this I think it's better if the Mc didn't time travel coz before he is strong right now he is fucking lvl1? Seriously,? And his harmless sister is lvl 46!!!?? All he did In his life is masturbate and and eat? I'm expecting a strong Mc from the start coz he is the strongest person in his past life but meh even a rabbit can kill him
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But some chapter its like jumping and easy to think what happen next.. Nice and good work.. i like this kind of story... more power and more update plz.
You ought to at least edit and proofread your introduction. Tons of typos and tense errors, and it's not even the first chapter yet. I'm not sure how the overall rating is so high. You should at least ask a native speaker to proof the blurb that Kickstart your whole story.
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Take your time, but please update at least 3 times a month or 2 times a month. I know you just got a part-time job, but please I love this novel. I want to enjoy this novel with many other people. Please update more😀
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Keep on working on it, make it big. I hope there is a mass release in the future. So after this is exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp.
Also, you can use grammarly to correct your spelling and punctuation, when you type or do your story. This can help your story, progress, because you don't have to worry about the mistakes, if you have a spelling and punctuation fixer like grammarly.
If you can somehow, post more chapters, that would be great. The story is fun and entertaining at the same time, so I wanted to say "work hard".
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I like the novel. I think it's interesting story. I hope the author give the power level. I confuse, what is after legend level, soverng or monarch ?. But this novel overall is good
I like the concept, of leveling up, the background story is there and love interests are present, everything a good story should have The leveling speed actually has grate swings, but i hope for even faster lvl ups in the beginning which will slow down until he switches towns,
Honestly, your English isn't the best, but that also applies to alot of people. It's a very readable and interesting story, shame it's not too popular. Probably because it's an original. Still good though!
still don't have update in 3 year? what happen ?…..….......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
İt is good and understandable but it is short.İ want it to cantinue please don't stop.Also İ want to learn and know more skills it will be better if MC has more skill from different elements not just fire element like thunder bolt,darkness blade or more powerfull atack skills not just mana punch.İt would be better if MC broke system rules and can spell from previous life but in some amount of mana for example thunder bolt need 50 mp or samething like that.Also good luck İ hope you cantinue very soon.İ will wait.Gambatte.
Please don't drop I love this it's the best novel I read (as of now)....plssssssss.......the characters, background, one opness of mc and the plot.. .
Saya sangat kecewa dengan update novel ini. Terahir kali saya membaca novel ini pada tanggal 30 maret. Tapi sejak saat itu sampai sekarang pada tanggal 10 juli hanya ada update 3 bab. Jika penulis tidak memiliki waktu untuk membuat bab baru, lebih baik berhenti menulis novel ini karena 1 bab dalam 1bulan adalah kecepatan yang sangat lambat. Novelmu sendiri tidak buruk untuk dibaca, tapi karena pembaruan novel ini yang sangat lambat, hampir setiap plot yang dibuat penulis menjadi tidak efektif . Bahkan jika penulis tidak memiliki banyak waktu untuk menulis bab baru, setidaknya buatlah bab dengan 1500-2000 kata dalam seminggu. Jika tidak sanggup untuk melakukan itu, lebih baik menghentikan novel ini . Mungkin novel dengan jumlah kata yang sangat tinggi tidak menjamin kualitas novel tersebut. Tapi novel dengan kualitas baik tetap memiliki standar minimum kata untuk di baca pembaca setiap minggunya agar tidak dilupakan para pembaca dengan cepat.
Boring even though the Mc is the strongest before but now that he time travel he is the weakest even his sister is more stronger than him. How did he fucking become the strongest person in his last life then???? His improvements right now even though he time travel is so slow. I'm sure this will just be Repeative Mc will beat Stronger people than him then if he beat them then there is another stronger people keep popping up.. There's no point on wasting my time reading this I think it's better if the Mc didn't time travel coz before he is strong right now he is fucking lvl1? Seriously,? And his harmless sister is lvl 46!!!?? All he did In his life is masturbate and and eat? I'm expecting a strong Mc from the start coz he is the strongest person in his past life but meh even a rabbit can kill him
Reveal Spoiler But some chapter its like jumping and easy to think what happen next.. Nice and good work.. i like this kind of story... more power and more update plz.
You ought to at least edit and proofread your introduction. Tons of typos and tense errors, and it's not even the first chapter yet. I'm not sure how the overall rating is so high. You should at least ask a native speaker to proof the blurb that Kickstart your whole story.
Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard! Keep working hard!
Take your time, but please update at least 3 times a month or 2 times a month. I know you just got a part-time job, but please I love this novel. I want to enjoy this novel with many other people. Please update more😀
ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍 ALICE 😍
Keep on working on it, make it big. I hope there is a mass release in the future. So after this is exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp.
Also, you can use grammarly to correct your spelling and punctuation, when you type or do your story. This can help your story, progress, because you don't have to worry about the mistakes, if you have a spelling and punctuation fixer like grammarly.
If you can somehow, post more chapters, that would be great. The story is fun and entertaining at the same time, so I wanted to say "work hard".
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I like the story it's so Nice Vote for this!!😍 Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍 Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍 Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍 Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍 Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍 Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍 Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍Alice😍
Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
I like the novel. I think it's interesting story. I hope the author give the power level. I confuse, what is after legend level, soverng or monarch ?. But this novel overall is good
I like the concept, of leveling up, the background story is there and love interests are present, everything a good story should have The leveling speed actually has grate swings, but i hope for even faster lvl ups in the beginning which will slow down until he switches towns,
Honestly, your English isn't the best, but that also applies to alot of people. It's a very readable and interesting story, shame it's not too popular. Probably because it's an original. Still good though!
still don't have update in 3 year? what happen ?…..….......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]