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I would like to say that I like this story, it's sweet and the mc is cute. Can the author input those cute emojis for our mc's chats please? I could just imagine how great it would be for the mc's adorable character *(>.<)* . I think that this story is very cute, but it is fast. So far... - I think that the ml came into the mc's circle way to fast. The ml should have maybe slowly interacted with the mc because who would trust someone that they just met. Is the mc be wary of rich people because of how helpless she felt with her family's incident? - The ml's background / character should have been explained more because it seems like the mc found out the ml's usual character of being aloof somehow without explanation. How did the mc come to know about ml? Was she into jewelry? Was he in a business magazine before? - The characters need more explanation. How did mc's friends relationships come to be? Does the mc have trust issues because of how pretty much everyone hated her or wanted her? What were some of the bullying that happened at school? Is the mc *****? If so, how because of her bullying environment. If not, why did she trust mc so fast? Was there any times where her beauty got her into trouble (for example, "bad" agencies that want to take videos of her since she has a humble background)? etc details - Was the ml able to break the mc's shell just by their casual texts? Or just by reputation? Is the mc looking for love because of her fan girling? - Please explain the reasons behind the characters actions during some scenes. For example, can the author please explain why she was picking those particular flowers at the hospital. These are just the ones that I think needed a bit more work on. I'm weak against stories like these and I'm glad that the author started this story. It has a good start, but the story itself needs more detail. I think that the author got a good ideas with the mc's tendencies with her suicidal mentality. I hope that this helps the author. Can't wait for more interactions of mc and ml. And can't wait for more chapters.
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I would like to say that I like this story, it's sweet and the mc is cute. Can the author input those cute emojis for our mc's chats please? I could just imagine how great it would be for the mc's adorable character *(>.<)* . I think that this story is very cute, but it is fast. So far... - I think that the ml came into the mc's circle way to fast. The ml should have maybe slowly interacted with the mc because who would trust someone that they just met. Is the mc be wary of rich people because of how helpless she felt with her family's incident? - The ml's background / character should have been explained more because it seems like the mc found out the ml's usual character of being aloof somehow without explanation. How did the mc come to know about ml? Was she into jewelry? Was he in a business magazine before? - The characters need more explanation. How did mc's friends relationships come to be? Does the mc have trust issues because of how pretty much everyone hated her or wanted her? What were some of the bullying that happened at school? Is the mc *****? If so, how because of her bullying environment. If not, why did she trust mc so fast? Was there any times where her beauty got her into trouble (for example, "bad" agencies that want to take videos of her since she has a humble background)? etc details - Was the ml able to break the mc's shell just by their casual texts? Or just by reputation? Is the mc looking for love because of her fan girling? - Please explain the reasons behind the characters actions during some scenes. For example, can the author please explain why she was picking those particular flowers at the hospital. These are just the ones that I think needed a bit more work on. I'm weak against stories like these and I'm glad that the author started this story. It has a good start, but the story itself needs more detail. I think that the author got a good ideas with the mc's tendencies with her suicidal mentality. I hope that this helps the author. Can't wait for more interactions of mc and ml. And can't wait for more chapters.
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