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Very interested in the story and the development but then saw how many coins to unlock chapters. Range from 23-42coins!!!! Ouch. I don’t think I’ll be reading this anytime soon. 😮💨😵💫
Unnecessarily complicated, the title is just a title with no relation to the MC's character or powers, messy love triangle that was thought to have been resolved only for a new reason to show up and it all starts all over again. It was good in the beginning...
Masterpiece, those who say otherwise are sour people and have no patience to observe this written art. Author, don't stop, even if destiny and destiny show that people are not bringing you income today, it doesn't mean that it can't be done in the future! I love your work, I see your pain. Every time I look at the sidebar and see it as small as thirteen thousand words, my heart screams with excitement... and when the bar is so small that I imagine it has more than twenty thousand words, I get up to get coffee! I will always support you, you are on my list. One day I will pay for all karma. Don't forget, have the strength to fight against destiny and destiny, one day everyone those who owe you karma just like on the stairs karma. will be paid!!!
Solid idea, poor execution. The grammar is horrendous, which is confusing since the first 20 chapters were okay. Then chapter 21, where the titles are all capitalized for whatever reason, it gets really bad. I dunno if it’s English as another language or poor machine translation copy-paste. Unpalatable regardless.
Book in starting had a great view and story to read. But after 30 chapter so it start to the story start to decline. The author is just writing whatever to increase word count. Too much explanation, fillers and dumb thoughts explanation. Further the story goes more boring it gets. What a waste of time.
The idea is pretty good but the problem is that it is so annoying and difficult do read because of grammar mistakes or CAPS LOG. In addition this story develops too fast and random. For example, the MC and the FL just meet and a few hours later it is "them against the world" but before the author completes there love story the MC has to disappear for a few months iI.which he will fall in love again?!? All in all it was not very fun to read since it is difficult to follow the story due to the above mentioned problems.
This could be my favourite Novel, only if there were no love story’s. I like the Characters designs, the mc and the fights.There are few writing mistakes,but i can bear.The only thing that i didn’t like ,is the relationship between the mc and Sofia.
The story is great, the fight scenes and the power ups are also good. but the romance is probably the worse I have ever seen, everytime I read it, I feel like pulling my hair out. I'm at chapter 1249 even after the break up it just gets worse. Just stop already this romance thing is pointless and doesn't even add to the plot
Hey, Author Manz, I really love this story. Can I perhaps get a discord link for it. If you even see this comment that is.
I really liked this story due to its unique or should i say a different story than your normal style of writing which is full of cliche .. Other than its nerve-wracking romance for me its a brilliant story.
Hi can anyone tell me how things are going between azief and katarina ium currently in chapter 1360 Gjfghjjjhggggfff fgkvdshhfdssshjh hhgdshhfssgh hgfdfggu
Man, I'm just mad, mad at the author for turning this beautiful idea into a mess. From Chapters 1-20 there were grammatical errors but it was bearable but from ch 21 I spent more time restructuring the sentences in my head for them to make sense. But seeing that the novel had 1000+ chapters I thought to my self that surely there's no way it could have been going this long without fixing the grammar and that it must have gotten better so I decided to read one of the latest chapters and what to I find in the first paragraph? A grammar error like I don't understand how it wen't this long with all the errors author please get an editor this was a good Idea but you kinda messed it up
First of all, I have to know that I'm not good at English, so I don't really like to criticize novels. But this novel is an example that I think I have to comment on. (I read up to chapter 180+) Pros - This novel has a plot. The beginning was interesting, set in a world that is turning into an apocalypse. Everyone on Earth has been given systems and weapons. The protagonist must survive the onslaught of monsters and zombies, which leaves the reader wondering how he will survive. Cons - After going through the first part of the plot, the bad part that starts with writing a narrative using The 'global second-person perspective' in which he begins to cut across the world in various characters. who do not even know the protagonist at all (not just one of the two but more than 6-7 people), I think it's a relationship plot, so I'm patient and keep reading. Later, with these scenes, the protagonist disappears but he still improves very quickly (about 100+ chapters, which this story has 1400+ chapters in total), he almost becomes a god. Humans and monsters were no longer his opponents. Loses all the aura of the survival story. However, the worst thing is The 'global second-person perspective' has never ended, but has grown. Even when the protagonist fights and the outcome of the battle is taking place. But the next chapter, the writer cut the scene to the other side of the world, making me very upset. (which doesn't happen once or twice) In addition, the cutting of the aforementioned scene was frustrating. The author also uses the concept of both parallel worlds. past-future world came into the story, which made this novel so bad that it could not be reversed The cut back and forth didn't happen just across the continent. But the author cuts the past, present, future, and all the multiverses (1 chapter per 1 world, which has no less than 7-9 chapters). During this time, the protagonist disappears without a trace. However, if something worse turned out to be my last straw, it would have been the protagonist who had originally placed his character to be smart and cautious in his every action. But after he started OP, he became arrogant and everyone had to submit to him. He will begin to use his powers to solve every problem. Plus, his EQ in love is so negative that even youngsters do better than that. [img=faceslap]
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It’s an average novel with common concepts. It takes the idea of avengers and the multiverse (uses the characters/heroes from them too). The only difference is it adds the MC and connects it with made up concepts. The big thing I don’t like is all the skills and abilities. They keep piling on more and more and it becomes clustered where you can’t even enjoy it. The good thing is that the story progresses at a fast speed so he’s not stuck in the same realm for long.
I had hopes, and the author had guts to smash it to pieces. Shadow lord is the profession, but nothing related to shadow . It could be there in the future, but I am not gonna read the whole just for that prt. I though the mc was gonna be alone and the starting was great with mc grinding like a rational guy, but the way the quality fell. Speechless.
hey i really love this book so much That I am reading till the early morning just so I could read more chapters and i like the way you potrait every character and just so you know you have created a wonderful novel and thank you for that . and i like how the past azief beat every one at their own chess game but I was really shocked and found it interesting and just so you know i literally screamed when I read that chapter and just wanted to clap and salute to him for his mind thinking power and I meant it and so you know you have heart core fan over hear for this novel. and i hope for more updates. thanks you 💞 this is for you for writing such a wonderful novel .
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One of the best novel i ever read but author you owe me two new phones i broke the first one when he chose sofia over katarina and the second when he still loved her and felt pain for her when she the one who didn't won't to get marrid can't you just stop making him so pathetic over thousand chapter and he still fool in love and sorry for my bad English cuz English is not my first language
I know these 2nd language writers have a thought time with Grammer. but for some reason this one is worse than others. my brain starts hurting trying to interpret it. other than that the rest was ok.
The writing quality is just above average and the storyline is very annoying. I do not recommend reading this book because the Author does not value Nationalism, Leadership and often portrays them as evil. The author is jealous of the rich and thinks the reason behind the poverty of the poor is too much wealth in the hands of rich people. The story is also very boring and clumsy. Do not read this book.
To be honest i love your novel and ivr also read your book agr of hearos and thought they wre both great. You make your characters seem real and add alot of depth to your story considering how long your chaps are. This adds alot of background and world building and i think those are the strongest points of your novels. Love the novel keep up the good work[img=update][img=update]
This author puts NTR in his novels. ...........................................................................................................................
the honest truth is the quality kf the working ruins the entire experience for me. This novel is the type I love to read most but I just can't handle how God awful the writing is and it never changes, so I had to drop this novel that had such and intriguing story because I couldn't handle it.
It's a great story that I've learned to appreciate and that still blow my mind when I think of it I recommend it to all the passionate readers of this site and hope more will see his greatness.
I had high hopes for this book and felt confirmt after the first few chapters where the main character was introduce, but after that the MC just acted absolutly out of his introduced character. When he was originally only concerned about himself and thought about his family more like roommates, in the next few chapters he suddenly super concerned about his parents. Generally he is getting introduced as one thing just to be the absolute opposite in the next chapter.
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Lord shadow? More like lord simp. How to make an otherwise great story unreadable asap? Introduce an obnoxious ***t of a female lead and then turn the cool protagonist into a simp. Worse even, there is another awesome love interest but no, the mc has to simp for the obnoxious *****.
Honestly i had high hopes but after chapter 20 the writing quality takes a nosedive so i just stopped reading, the story is good, liked the plot so far but the writing quality after chapter 20😮💨 can someone tell me if it gets better.
Very interested in the story and the development but then saw how many coins to unlock chapters. Range from 23-42coins!!!! Ouch. I don’t think I’ll be reading this anytime soon. 😮💨😵💫
Unnecessarily complicated, the title is just a title with no relation to the MC's character or powers, messy love triangle that was thought to have been resolved only for a new reason to show up and it all starts all over again. It was good in the beginning...
Masterpiece, those who say otherwise are sour people and have no patience to observe this written art. Author, don't stop, even if destiny and destiny show that people are not bringing you income today, it doesn't mean that it can't be done in the future! I love your work, I see your pain. Every time I look at the sidebar and see it as small as thirteen thousand words, my heart screams with excitement... and when the bar is so small that I imagine it has more than twenty thousand words, I get up to get coffee! I will always support you, you are on my list. One day I will pay for all karma. Don't forget, have the strength to fight against destiny and destiny, one day everyone those who owe you karma just like on the stairs karma. will be paid!!!
Solid idea, poor execution. The grammar is horrendous, which is confusing since the first 20 chapters were okay. Then chapter 21, where the titles are all capitalized for whatever reason, it gets really bad. I dunno if it’s English as another language or poor machine translation copy-paste. Unpalatable regardless.
Book in starting had a great view and story to read. But after 30 chapter so it start to the story start to decline. The author is just writing whatever to increase word count. Too much explanation, fillers and dumb thoughts explanation. Further the story goes more boring it gets. What a waste of time.
The idea is pretty good but the problem is that it is so annoying and difficult do read because of grammar mistakes or CAPS LOG. In addition this story develops too fast and random. For example, the MC and the FL just meet and a few hours later it is "them against the world" but before the author completes there love story the MC has to disappear for a few months iI.which he will fall in love again?!? All in all it was not very fun to read since it is difficult to follow the story due to the above mentioned problems.
This could be my favourite Novel, only if there were no love story’s. I like the Characters designs, the mc and the fights.There are few writing mistakes,but i can bear.The only thing that i didn’t like ,is the relationship between the mc and Sofia.
The story is great, the fight scenes and the power ups are also good. but the romance is probably the worse I have ever seen, everytime I read it, I feel like pulling my hair out. I'm at chapter 1249 even after the break up it just gets worse. Just stop already this romance thing is pointless and doesn't even add to the plot
Hey, Author Manz, I really love this story. Can I perhaps get a discord link for it. If you even see this comment that is.
I really liked this story due to its unique or should i say a different story than your normal style of writing which is full of cliche .. Other than its nerve-wracking romance for me its a brilliant story.
Hi can anyone tell me how things are going between azief and katarina ium currently in chapter 1360 Gjfghjjjhggggfff fgkvdshhfdssshjh hhgdshhfssgh hgfdfggu
Man, I'm just mad, mad at the author for turning this beautiful idea into a mess. From Chapters 1-20 there were grammatical errors but it was bearable but from ch 21 I spent more time restructuring the sentences in my head for them to make sense. But seeing that the novel had 1000+ chapters I thought to my self that surely there's no way it could have been going this long without fixing the grammar and that it must have gotten better so I decided to read one of the latest chapters and what to I find in the first paragraph? A grammar error like I don't understand how it wen't this long with all the errors author please get an editor this was a good Idea but you kinda messed it up
First of all, I have to know that I'm not good at English, so I don't really like to criticize novels. But this novel is an example that I think I have to comment on. (I read up to chapter 180+) Pros - This novel has a plot. The beginning was interesting, set in a world that is turning into an apocalypse. Everyone on Earth has been given systems and weapons. The protagonist must survive the onslaught of monsters and zombies, which leaves the reader wondering how he will survive. Cons - After going through the first part of the plot, the bad part that starts with writing a narrative using The 'global second-person perspective' in which he begins to cut across the world in various characters. who do not even know the protagonist at all (not just one of the two but more than 6-7 people), I think it's a relationship plot, so I'm patient and keep reading. Later, with these scenes, the protagonist disappears but he still improves very quickly (about 100+ chapters, which this story has 1400+ chapters in total), he almost becomes a god. Humans and monsters were no longer his opponents. Loses all the aura of the survival story. However, the worst thing is The 'global second-person perspective' has never ended, but has grown. Even when the protagonist fights and the outcome of the battle is taking place. But the next chapter, the writer cut the scene to the other side of the world, making me very upset. (which doesn't happen once or twice) In addition, the cutting of the aforementioned scene was frustrating. The author also uses the concept of both parallel worlds. past-future world came into the story, which made this novel so bad that it could not be reversed The cut back and forth didn't happen just across the continent. But the author cuts the past, present, future, and all the multiverses (1 chapter per 1 world, which has no less than 7-9 chapters). During this time, the protagonist disappears without a trace. However, if something worse turned out to be my last straw, it would have been the protagonist who had originally placed his character to be smart and cautious in his every action. But after he started OP, he became arrogant and everyone had to submit to him. He will begin to use his powers to solve every problem. Plus, his EQ in love is so negative that even youngsters do better than that. [img=faceslap]
Reveal Spoiler It’s an average novel with common concepts. It takes the idea of avengers and the multiverse (uses the characters/heroes from them too). The only difference is it adds the MC and connects it with made up concepts. The big thing I don’t like is all the skills and abilities. They keep piling on more and more and it becomes clustered where you can’t even enjoy it. The good thing is that the story progresses at a fast speed so he’s not stuck in the same realm for long.
I had hopes, and the author had guts to smash it to pieces. Shadow lord is the profession, but nothing related to shadow . It could be there in the future, but I am not gonna read the whole just for that prt. I though the mc was gonna be alone and the starting was great with mc grinding like a rational guy, but the way the quality fell. Speechless.
hey i really love this book so much That I am reading till the early morning just so I could read more chapters and i like the way you potrait every character and just so you know you have created a wonderful novel and thank you for that . and i like how the past azief beat every one at their own chess game but I was really shocked and found it interesting and just so you know i literally screamed when I read that chapter and just wanted to clap and salute to him for his mind thinking power and I meant it and so you know you have heart core fan over hear for this novel. and i hope for more updates. thanks you 💞 this is for you for writing such a wonderful novel .
Reveal Spoiler One of the best novel i ever read but author you owe me two new phones i broke the first one when he chose sofia over katarina and the second when he still loved her and felt pain for her when she the one who didn't won't to get marrid can't you just stop making him so pathetic over thousand chapter and he still fool in love and sorry for my bad English cuz English is not my first language
I know these 2nd language writers have a thought time with Grammer. but for some reason this one is worse than others. my brain starts hurting trying to interpret it. other than that the rest was ok.
The writing quality is just above average and the storyline is very annoying. I do not recommend reading this book because the Author does not value Nationalism, Leadership and often portrays them as evil. The author is jealous of the rich and thinks the reason behind the poverty of the poor is too much wealth in the hands of rich people. The story is also very boring and clumsy. Do not read this book.
To be honest i love your novel and ivr also read your book agr of hearos and thought they wre both great. You make your characters seem real and add alot of depth to your story considering how long your chaps are. This adds alot of background and world building and i think those are the strongest points of your novels. Love the novel keep up the good work[img=update][img=update]
This author puts NTR in his novels. ...........................................................................................................................
the honest truth is the quality kf the working ruins the entire experience for me. This novel is the type I love to read most but I just can't handle how God awful the writing is and it never changes, so I had to drop this novel that had such and intriguing story because I couldn't handle it.
It's a great story that I've learned to appreciate and that still blow my mind when I think of it I recommend it to all the passionate readers of this site and hope more will see his greatness.
I had high hopes for this book and felt confirmt after the first few chapters where the main character was introduce, but after that the MC just acted absolutly out of his introduced character. When he was originally only concerned about himself and thought about his family more like roommates, in the next few chapters he suddenly super concerned about his parents. Generally he is getting introduced as one thing just to be the absolute opposite in the next chapter.
Reveal Spoiler Lord shadow? More like lord simp. How to make an otherwise great story unreadable asap? Introduce an obnoxious ***t of a female lead and then turn the cool protagonist into a simp. Worse even, there is another awesome love interest but no, the mc has to simp for the obnoxious *****.
Honestly i had high hopes but after chapter 20 the writing quality takes a nosedive so i just stopped reading, the story is good, liked the plot so far but the writing quality after chapter 20😮💨 can someone tell me if it gets better.