I will be suspending this novel
I plan to stop writing this story for now, I made this so I can try writing a story, however I was left with a storyline that was all over the place and grammar mistakes here and there.
I truly like this story though and being the first ever story that I created I was really attached to it. So if there's a time I will try to redo this form the start, because we all know how much of a mess this novel turned out to be.
And fort those who voted and commented at my Novel I truly deeply appreciated it. I was able to see my wrongs and that helped me a lot.
I am a barely pass at my English, Grammar, and practically anything to do with English so I truly thanked you for sticking woth ot even there are many errors in it.
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Thank you also for those who read my other Novel, The Heavenly Monarch System. Don't bother with it I am also hiving up on that for a totally different reason than here.
I plan on making another story so please support that to, and as a final favor can I ask what is better? Normal cultivation novel or one with a system? I do not know what yo do so please help me.
Thank you guys
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