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haha wtf is an akimeg. akimeg more like aki akileg haha *dab* 140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters
XD haha my sad VIDEO GAME attempt? Please enjoy it while the contest last! MUAHAHAHHAHAHAHA MAUAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH.... *coughs* Okay, so it's kinda romance/video game... why? because i think it would be cute to have!
Hi Author, So I liked the storyline very much! I haven’t read many rpg styled stories that have a similar vibe. The only thing I would comment about negatively is that you should re-read your chapters before posting them. Sometimes the order in which you describe things is a little confusing to be honest. At first I was like oh a short and to the point explaination, but then two sentences later it was a full on info dump that pretended that the previously stated info wasn’t mentioned before. It would be less confusing if it was the other way around in my opinion. So thanks for the story and hopefully it’s updated more frequently!!
haha wtf is an akimeg. akimeg more like aki akileg haha *dab* 140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters140characters
XD haha my sad VIDEO GAME attempt? Please enjoy it while the contest last! MUAHAHAHHAHAHAHA MAUAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH.... *coughs* Okay, so it's kinda romance/video game... why? because i think it would be cute to have!
Hi Author, So I liked the storyline very much! I haven’t read many rpg styled stories that have a similar vibe. The only thing I would comment about negatively is that you should re-read your chapters before posting them. Sometimes the order in which you describe things is a little confusing to be honest. At first I was like oh a short and to the point explaination, but then two sentences later it was a full on info dump that pretended that the previously stated info wasn’t mentioned before. It would be less confusing if it was the other way around in my opinion. So thanks for the story and hopefully it’s updated more frequently!!