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I'm disappointed ... I thought I was going to see Kratos or someone reincarnated in that Greek world: everyone comments without seeing the novel, and it is usually very good, plus sometimes the novel turns out to be bad and they just leave the comment with 5 You are there, promoting bad novels. The point is ... I will leave this review here because it is not God Of War 1, 2, 3, 4 or 5.
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Need 140 words cause WebNovel sucks, but its just all hot garbage. 6 contadictions per chapter, things switching around on you, the betrayal isnt actually a betrayal? Theres no actual revenge plot, the characters are flat and make no sense in their decision making. things get conpletely ignored after being introduced, like in chapter 1 the MC is running a fever, but gets out of bed to find his father to apologize. his mother and sister do absolutely nothing besides stsre at him, he ends up working with his father in construction for the next 4 hours, and there’s a joke about his dad checking him for a fever because hes so agreeable…what? Author writes himself into a corner, cant get out of the corner theough storytelling cause he sucks at writing, so just literally writes the walls away to not be in the corner anymore. all classes can equip whatever they want. wait i cant have the ebemy using this super OP equip, so all equips have class restrictions. wait that means MC cant use one of his own equips that he specifically got because of its effect, but its technically from a different class, so lets remove the class restriction from that item as an exception. its stupid, dont bother wasting your time.
this story is ranked 2.3/5 on novel updates. i guess that`s all you have to know. that`s it.sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss too cliche.
Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Reborn: Super God of War”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
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Seriously what is this book because I can't follow up and I can't put a finger on what this is about. There is a very big problem with this story begin and everything is messed up moreover boring very boring. Storyline is something else because I can't tell difference in game world and story reality
This is a piece of trash. 1. The MC reincarnates after losing a fight after being betrayed by his "friend", forget to explain how he really died "God killed him" "died of anger" nobody knows. Ohh I went back to the past, hello mom, little sister. What will we eat today?. sh1it! 2. Let's talk about your concern for his family, which at every opportunity clarifies that it is his greatest concern. Sh1it I read 70 chaps .. and the interaction they had will have been 1/2 chapter and it was irrelevant! sh1it!. 3. The game ... so many things to say ... let's begin, at no time is a time relationship between the real world and the world within the game clarified which can confuse them; the MC has knowledge of powerful items and only decides to get a few and several by chance. he only cared about the sealed sword, with trash statistics that falls when he dies and that in order not to be recognized he decides not to use it in important moments .. sh1it! If you are not going to use it for great things, leave it in a deposit in the city and look for something of less quality that has better attributes and you can use it. Their enemies, all obtain large amounts of equipment and skills of equal or superior quality to the MC and only God knows where. 4. Mc skills as a player or strategist are rubbish! Noob enemy elites without knowledge of the game put him in trouble or even almost killed him. his awareness of the environment is appalling, he was ambushed a large number of times and has never detected it before. Great skills from one of the 'best' players in the game. sh1it. 5. His greatest enemy ... who curiously is not the one who betrays him, but someone who came out of nowhere and according to the MC is the ruin of his family who suffered a car accident and who is believed until now to be a coincidence, sh1it! How does that make any sense! In the game they meet and the enemy says "ohh we ambushed you for that sword xx (your biggest secret that nobody should know yet) kill him". sh1it! There is a legendary wiki that this antagonist can access to know everything the stupid MC has and how the hell it works. sh1it! Anyway, don't waste your time on this garbage, which is a bad copy of other works full of holes in the plot.
This is just a copy and warior edition of The Thief That Roamed the World so its not that great i suppose because of the same events in that novel but the translation is good
Character traveled back into his own past, has OP knowledge about game, yet cant out level others. Insane xp requirements for lower levels player reached area that wasnt suppose to be found by others for several weeks on the 1st day, when suddenly his best froend from the other timeline is also in the area??? Level 2 successfully ran away from a level 100 boss, when just earlier he was slaughtered by a level 20 elite??? This novel makes no sense.
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Translation is bad the characters is good personally rooting for that npc x mc 😏😏 even though its a bit lacking on world design its ok anyways i recommend everyone to spend atleast some time to read this novel
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Ok besides the concept for the first 200 chapters being copied from another book, i am conflicted. The author starts off writing well and building good characters and world. Then his writing goes to crap. First, he starts contradicting his self and the history and rules created. Second, he lose all common sense. There are times were he explains how hard leveling is and how much time it will take. Our MC is from the future and know everything about the game and can level like crazy. Yet? Some one in one month comes in and can out level and become stronger than the MC who has, years of the past life, and a year of game play in this life. Wtf? Just becomes asinine. I quit around chapter 450.
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really enjoying this book to the point i can not wait every chapter they put out. do wish they can put more chapters out every day instead of the one. a day
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I think the writer was asleep as he was writing the first few chapters of this... ..................................................................................
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By some deep thought one can say that this genre of LN has become very saturated but when you read this novel you find something that many novels skip on, Family. By the first 3 chapters I could say that the way the storyline is executed makes this novel comparatively better than most.
Just off the bat, the mc isn’t all that bad. However, as you read more he fails to solve simple problems and makes friends with complete brain-lets. One of the “conflicts” he has with his team is that he made his new group/clan/guild or whatever you want to call it take the credit for a clear of an early dungeon they’ll forget about in 3 days. It’s made out to be this big thing, but I just can’t wrap my head around why the fck they care. It was stated that they couldn’t even get close to the first boss even with him giving them advice and free potions necessary for it (which were expensive at that time). They literally wouldn’t have been able to walk in there without him. But after he beats the las boss on his own, they get all pissy with him. Up until that moment, it was a pretty fun read, but it’s just too unbearable to see how any functioning person could solve that “problem,” if you can even call it one.
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A blatant copy/paste of multiple different stories, so far I've seen 1. Shuras Wrath 2. Rebirth of the thief who roamed the world 3. Rebirth of the strongest sword god. There are probably more but so far I've seen near word for word scenes for these three. Not taking into consideration the horrible time management, character development, and flow of the whole story.
I love game and reborn genres and I’ve read a lot of them. This one is comfortable to read, i like the mc, i like the whole concept. But it’s obvious that few parts of the story is plagiarized. The author did great for the story as it’s not like other “reborn and game” writers that the characters are irritating and fussy to me. For me it’s just the plagiarism (-2 points) and few bad plots (-1 point) that sometimes ruin the mood. Over 10 points so 7/10
Hi, I’m writing this review just so I can finish my daily reward and get 5 exp. Sorry for this but I believe this is a good story. Thank you very much
My 4th grade nephew once told me a story about his field trip, and it still a better story than this.
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So i've read this story pretty far and I can honestly say it's a poorly designed story. There's a lot of inconsistencies with the game/world in terms of equipment and skills. Not to mention how shallow the characters are. They really don't contribute much, especially since the MC is too omnipotent.
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I read 16ch but i will tell u it was unbearable to read more, 1/ character was expert in previous life yet fights equally wit some idiots 2/ as of ch 16 only his planning ability shined 3/ it all comes down to luck in some cases 4/ I did not get a clear picture of game rules some are blatantly changed 5/ story seems mixed up 6/ lets his enemys go 7/ the theme betrayal forced in ch16
Super God of War!!...sounds interesting to me..a game to win and die..like Dead or alive type of game...it's a pity the plot is a common thing...revenge for this and that or like avenging stufs and all the bat ****...but I hope it's gonna be good and expect far better than wat the plot gives
I mean, it's a bad copy of multiple novers of the same genre. Legendary thief or legendary guardian. Some quests, events and characters are taken from them and piled and mashed together to create this tasteless novel without mutch characters background and development. I'm quite disappointed.
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I'm disappointed ... I thought I was going to see Kratos or someone reincarnated in that Greek world: everyone comments without seeing the novel, and it is usually very good, plus sometimes the novel turns out to be bad and they just leave the comment with 5 You are there, promoting bad novels. The point is ... I will leave this review here because it is not God Of War 1, 2, 3, 4 or 5.
Reveal Spoiler Need 140 words cause WebNovel sucks, but its just all hot garbage. 6 contadictions per chapter, things switching around on you, the betrayal isnt actually a betrayal? Theres no actual revenge plot, the characters are flat and make no sense in their decision making. things get conpletely ignored after being introduced, like in chapter 1 the MC is running a fever, but gets out of bed to find his father to apologize. his mother and sister do absolutely nothing besides stsre at him, he ends up working with his father in construction for the next 4 hours, and there’s a joke about his dad checking him for a fever because hes so agreeable…what? Author writes himself into a corner, cant get out of the corner theough storytelling cause he sucks at writing, so just literally writes the walls away to not be in the corner anymore. all classes can equip whatever they want. wait i cant have the ebemy using this super OP equip, so all equips have class restrictions. wait that means MC cant use one of his own equips that he specifically got because of its effect, but its technically from a different class, so lets remove the class restriction from that item as an exception. its stupid, dont bother wasting your time.
this story is ranked 2.3/5 on novel updates. i guess that`s all you have to know. that`s it.sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss too cliche.
Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Reborn: Super God of War”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
Was hoping for faster release of chapter......,......................................n.n.n..n.n.j.h.h.h.h.hmh.h.hnhmhmh.h.h.h hmhihgjgbmignkgbkjgnkgbmig
Seriously what is this book because I can't follow up and I can't put a finger on what this is about. There is a very big problem with this story begin and everything is messed up moreover boring very boring. Storyline is something else because I can't tell difference in game world and story reality
This is a piece of trash. 1. The MC reincarnates after losing a fight after being betrayed by his "friend", forget to explain how he really died "God killed him" "died of anger" nobody knows. Ohh I went back to the past, hello mom, little sister. What will we eat today?. sh1it! 2. Let's talk about your concern for his family, which at every opportunity clarifies that it is his greatest concern. Sh1it I read 70 chaps .. and the interaction they had will have been 1/2 chapter and it was irrelevant! sh1it!. 3. The game ... so many things to say ... let's begin, at no time is a time relationship between the real world and the world within the game clarified which can confuse them; the MC has knowledge of powerful items and only decides to get a few and several by chance. he only cared about the sealed sword, with trash statistics that falls when he dies and that in order not to be recognized he decides not to use it in important moments .. sh1it! If you are not going to use it for great things, leave it in a deposit in the city and look for something of less quality that has better attributes and you can use it. Their enemies, all obtain large amounts of equipment and skills of equal or superior quality to the MC and only God knows where. 4. Mc skills as a player or strategist are rubbish! Noob enemy elites without knowledge of the game put him in trouble or even almost killed him. his awareness of the environment is appalling, he was ambushed a large number of times and has never detected it before. Great skills from one of the 'best' players in the game. sh1it. 5. His greatest enemy ... who curiously is not the one who betrays him, but someone who came out of nowhere and according to the MC is the ruin of his family who suffered a car accident and who is believed until now to be a coincidence, sh1it! How does that make any sense! In the game they meet and the enemy says "ohh we ambushed you for that sword xx (your biggest secret that nobody should know yet) kill him". sh1it! There is a legendary wiki that this antagonist can access to know everything the stupid MC has and how the hell it works. sh1it! Anyway, don't waste your time on this garbage, which is a bad copy of other works full of holes in the plot.
This is just a copy and warior edition of The Thief That Roamed the World so its not that great i suppose because of the same events in that novel but the translation is good
Character traveled back into his own past, has OP knowledge about game, yet cant out level others. Insane xp requirements for lower levels player reached area that wasnt suppose to be found by others for several weeks on the 1st day, when suddenly his best froend from the other timeline is also in the area??? Level 2 successfully ran away from a level 100 boss, when just earlier he was slaughtered by a level 20 elite??? This novel makes no sense.
Reveal Spoiler Translation is bad the characters is good personally rooting for that npc x mc 😏😏 even though its a bit lacking on world design its ok anyways i recommend everyone to spend atleast some time to read this novel
Reveal Spoiler Ok besides the concept for the first 200 chapters being copied from another book, i am conflicted. The author starts off writing well and building good characters and world. Then his writing goes to crap. First, he starts contradicting his self and the history and rules created. Second, he lose all common sense. There are times were he explains how hard leveling is and how much time it will take. Our MC is from the future and know everything about the game and can level like crazy. Yet? Some one in one month comes in and can out level and become stronger than the MC who has, years of the past life, and a year of game play in this life. Wtf? Just becomes asinine. I quit around chapter 450.
Reveal Spoiler really enjoying this book to the point i can not wait every chapter they put out. do wish they can put more chapters out every day instead of the one. a day
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I think the writer was asleep as he was writing the first few chapters of this... ..................................................................................
Looks good to me. Have a read and then decide if yourself 😀😋☺️😋😃🙄😂😊🤩🤔😊🤩😆🙄😋🥰😣😋🙄☺️😊😉🤔🤣🤣🙂😶😗😪😎😐😅😋🥰😑😪🤔😶😉😊☺️😋😥😐🙄🥰😊🤩🤨😶😊😀
By some deep thought one can say that this genre of LN has become very saturated but when you read this novel you find something that many novels skip on, Family. By the first 3 chapters I could say that the way the storyline is executed makes this novel comparatively better than most.
Just off the bat, the mc isn’t all that bad. However, as you read more he fails to solve simple problems and makes friends with complete brain-lets. One of the “conflicts” he has with his team is that he made his new group/clan/guild or whatever you want to call it take the credit for a clear of an early dungeon they’ll forget about in 3 days. It’s made out to be this big thing, but I just can’t wrap my head around why the fck they care. It was stated that they couldn’t even get close to the first boss even with him giving them advice and free potions necessary for it (which were expensive at that time). They literally wouldn’t have been able to walk in there without him. But after he beats the las boss on his own, they get all pissy with him. Up until that moment, it was a pretty fun read, but it’s just too unbearable to see how any functioning person could solve that “problem,” if you can even call it one.
Reveal Spoiler A blatant copy/paste of multiple different stories, so far I've seen 1. Shuras Wrath 2. Rebirth of the thief who roamed the world 3. Rebirth of the strongest sword god. There are probably more but so far I've seen near word for word scenes for these three. Not taking into consideration the horrible time management, character development, and flow of the whole story.
I love game and reborn genres and I’ve read a lot of them. This one is comfortable to read, i like the mc, i like the whole concept. But it’s obvious that few parts of the story is plagiarized. The author did great for the story as it’s not like other “reborn and game” writers that the characters are irritating and fussy to me. For me it’s just the plagiarism (-2 points) and few bad plots (-1 point) that sometimes ruin the mood. Over 10 points so 7/10
Hi, I’m writing this review just so I can finish my daily reward and get 5 exp. Sorry for this but I believe this is a good story. Thank you very much
My 4th grade nephew once told me a story about his field trip, and it still a better story than this.
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So i've read this story pretty far and I can honestly say it's a poorly designed story. There's a lot of inconsistencies with the game/world in terms of equipment and skills. Not to mention how shallow the characters are. They really don't contribute much, especially since the MC is too omnipotent.
Don't mind me I'm just getting my points 😊😊😊😊🤭🤭🤭🤭😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊🤭🤭🤭🤭😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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I read 16ch but i will tell u it was unbearable to read more, 1/ character was expert in previous life yet fights equally wit some idiots 2/ as of ch 16 only his planning ability shined 3/ it all comes down to luck in some cases 4/ I did not get a clear picture of game rules some are blatantly changed 5/ story seems mixed up 6/ lets his enemys go 7/ the theme betrayal forced in ch16
Super God of War!!...sounds interesting to me..a game to win and die..like Dead or alive type of game...it's a pity the plot is a common thing...revenge for this and that or like avenging stufs and all the bat ****...but I hope it's gonna be good and expect far better than wat the plot gives
I mean, it's a bad copy of multiple novers of the same genre. Legendary thief or legendary guardian. Some quests, events and characters are taken from them and piled and mashed together to create this tasteless novel without mutch characters background and development. I'm quite disappointed.
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