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It was not physical means which caused his death. In fact, no being on Earth was related to Lu Fengyi's disappearance. The only thought that ran through his mind when he vanished from the face of the physical world.
"My deadline is too soon!"
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nice job author... if u can write more caps i appreciate.... this history have some special... so, i wait than all peoples than have some curiosity, read it.
great story .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................... i hope there are no harem
A novel that is unique, entertaining and written well. I quite like it, and beside complaining about the low amount of released chapters, I can only sing praises and more praises ~
I like the concept of your novel ,but the updates is slow and chapter content is low ,try to increase the size of chapters if you want to post single chapter a day otherwise I'm anticipating Ur story good luck๐
So this review will be biased since I love this fiction, but my little intro will probably be ok. INTRO THINGY Dudes wrighting, dude gets sucked into a computer and gets a system that helps those in need seek inspiration. Dude visits popular novles and gains an in depth understanding of how stuff works. WARNING! MC IS STUPIDLY OP p.s. don't see anything about a harem as of now. Mc likes women, but I don't think he plans to pick up woman everywhere. Plus the author isn't comfortable with romance yet, so expect anything there to be kinda slow. Shure he'll get comfortable soon enough though since it's a part of any good story.
While I like to read but the author walks on the edge. This idea can always be quickly ruined if you allow a couple of weighty mistakes. So far, there is also communication between the characters, a few jokes, too easy tamed cute element ... And the system and everything connected with it, I hope the author will be able to dose her influence on the plot. Try to write interesting author, do not spoil the story! And remember, with great power, comes great responsibility!!! Muhahahaha.........
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Could you please author make precision about the realm in library of heaven path ? I'm really lost there..... And do it with every different wrld please
I have a question, you will do many chapters based on a novel or you will do 50 chapters and change. this can be good and bad because if it is a book that people enjoy will have more readers, but it can happen instead. The beginning is fun I'm in chapter 5. I'm sorry for my bad english I'm from Brasil(Brazil).
Apakah dia hanya bisa bertarung menggunakan teknik taekwondo,,, tidak kah kau memberinya beberapa teknik canggih,,agar kelihatan badass mc nya,,dan tidak membosankan saat dia bertarung,,,
This novel is good for those who want to read about your favourite novels from a different perspective. I gave 5 for everything except stability of updates as there were some chapters that seem to have been deleted recently. I would still recommend the novel though!
Is it just me or are the chapters deleted? 140 characters........................................... Dijdjfufjensb udder udhdbdhidjdhdhdudjdndbdhdu ehjdjf Djjdjdjdh hedhhd
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love the novel please do update it regularly ๐๐๐ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
hue hue br falando, faz com a novel Against the Gods na prรณxima vez brother. br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br br
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It is a very good novel and overall is interesting , i might suggest it but i am still not too sure , so i dont really know what to say , i guess it is good but depend
Congrats on the novel, Good luck. I'm glad that I inspired someone to do something. Also, thanks for giving me credit for inspiring you, not everyone would do that.
I clicked on the link the moment I saw the title of the latest chapter, and starting from the beginning I can say that I liked what I saw. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Alright, first off: The concept is nice and the novel also has a good start, with the MC being transported into the LoHP world at the beginning of the story and having to clear a few quests. There, he meets another Transcender, and the concept of the system gets explained a bit. Until here, it is a pure fanfiction of LoHP. However, then things take a turn into utter **** direction, the (slightly below) average intelligent MC (because it is easier to advance a plot when you only have to write about someone dumber than yourself) turns into an absolute retard, several things get thrown out of the window, things get ignored and two girls join the story (typical girls from beta jap MC novel), all for the sake of slight plot advancement. ----spoiler from here---- instead of just using the system for what it is there, telling the MC about rankings and all and maybe making newbie-farming a thing, the author uses the imo worst option on how to advance the plot so that the MC gets into the System fights: making him retarded and adding an unreasonable fake-harem, making him fight a duel to escape a cult, when it was unnecessary, and then probably win against a veteran transcender after training one single day, even though he was too retarded to even spell retarded right before.... . . . Thus, my recommendation is: DO NOT Read this, unless you are fine with all named above and enjoy seeing a potentially good novel plummet into literal ****
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