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This is an absolute amazing novel. The concept of the story is extremely interesting as it immersed me into the story. Thrilling and eye catching is all I can say.
This story really comes to life as it progresses, the first few chapters may not be appealing to some but please hang on! It gets better especially with the wars and story development, the characters are detailed and are not left our to develop only the MC. WELCOME TO THE ORGANISATION!!
Désolé auteur, Mais ton roman je les trouvé avec une bonne idée mais perso la maintenant j'en n'est plus que marre, il me fait trop mal a la tète. Tu a beaucoup de bonne idée mais aucun ordre plutôt simple et logique pour moi ton roman c'est l’apocalypse sur la compréhension(et trop t'info d'un coup) ce qui détruit tout le plaisir, Désolé moi je tourne la page a un autre roman
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Fight! War! Heroes! Battles! TESTOSTERONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Read this one for the world comrades. 5/5 would f*** with WW2 again
I do not really like to write or comment much about books, as I don't want to get in discussion. But I make an exception for this book, mainly because it is going over a lot of people's radars. People who enter the War&Military Novel section would expect such a novel as the category states. But this is not what is happening, all Novels I see are utter trash on this section until I started to read this jewel, having Humour, action, intricate scheming, characters you relate and a good Author. This Book is a much read of people want to experience a true War&Military novel, as all the others are UTTER disappointments. I thank the Author for giving what all people deserve when they open this genre :D
This novel quickly became one of my favorites recently. everything is superb and amazing. I hope for more chapters! keep it up man!............
Well let me summarize this.Novel.You read novel.Novel is good.Then you comment on the chapter saying "thx for the chap" then the author liked it.Then you have exp for days.Then you think how to help the author novel to get to higher realm like the sector heads.Then you remember you can review it .Then join the discord.Joining discord has so much spoiler for days you just need to wait for future arcs then you win the game.+100000^10000000000 exp. Player 1:GG Player 2:All hail comander Player 3:Author too good to be true ...+1 ...+2 ...+.... Player 1069069069:Well the moral of the story.Read this novel dont be a noob like @Player 1
Well it got much better so I'll give a five for encouragement Fjfjfjfjjfjfkfkdkdkkdkrkrkrklrldlfkfkfklrlrlrlrlrlrlrllrlrkrkr Jdjdjdkkdkfkfkfkkfkfkfkfkkfkfkfkkfkfkkf Dkdkfkjfjfjfjfjfjk
Am i the only who's getting this message "This chapter has been deleted. Please go to The The War That Transcends Timelines! or Webnovel home" when i tried to read this story seriously this is such a bother to me considering i how i love the story
So, I haven't used Qidian and all these webnovel sites as I am not really into the cultivation and stuff. But when I stumbled upon the military section I saw a new light from these sites. Sadly most are again cultivation or are not executed well. But I stumbled upon this novel, the 1st chapter made me hooked and made me binge read this novel, -The quality of writing could be a bit better compared to some novels, but seeing this is the author's 1st book the minor grammar mistakes can be overlooked. -Stabilities of updates are great, you are guaranteed one chapter a day, and if we breach the top 100 it will only increase, the author never let me down -The beginning of the story has been rewritten a few times, with the current one looking very promising, the plot is surprisingly very deep, where it makes you think constantly about how or what happened. -The characters are few, we have the MC, Zero, Rudolf, Mackensen, Nova and Rommel. Some important minor characters are sector heads, Gunther. In conclusion the author has made a small group to specialise on while still putting some flavour in minor characters. -The world background will probably vary, currently it is WW2 but different, the author had developed the new world very well. In the end, this Novel I would say is a novel that can be truly classified as military. It has guns, men, planes and tanks. No cultivation, no weird things. I really recommend reading it. I would say, read it, it is worth your time, and with the author actively going back to old chapters improving them and expanding them shows the dedication of the author. Hope people will enjoy this novel as much as I do :)
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This is what everyone should be looking for! I joined Qidian to find a Novel which would be about war, Intelligence gathering, resources and a bit of steampunk. To anyone hesitating, this Author is a beginner, but his quality of writing is totally not shabby compared to some other novel writers I have seen. Development in the beginning is a bit bad but he is a beginning and he is improving. I would say give it a go, it is special in its way.
I like the novel But it just that many of the developmentbof the novel is missing. You should develop more of thr storyline for the marshall
I'm on chapter 26 and I would just like to say i love this and I find only one minor problem and that is misspellings but this is my favorite book so far. And this is also my first review. I love the amount of development and I really like how well your time skips fit in. For a beginner I would rate you a semi pro thus far. I hope to see everything come beautifully together like a well woven blanket.
If you like wars with different time lines and different weapons in who know many era time lines then this is for you and this is not something you see every day on webnovel in this genre
everything is great about this novel, the og story, and development of characters and plot, however, I do have one question for the author AS of C42, I am questioning @Chaos_Overseer 's plot... 1) will MC's actions change the future, or will MC be teleported to a parallel timeline, or will time freeze until MC is teleported back to WWII... 2) as of MC's actions on WWII... would his next travels through time and space continuum be set in the future (either with WWII info changed, or not) -or- would MC be teleported back to WWI or earlier? 3 a. if forward how will his actions play in the future, would MC remember his organization/ MC retain his look after going forward in time... or back to his previous nontramaticfied body... but still have the memories of his actions in changed WWII 3 b. if backwards, would his actions affect his previous history changes on WWII, for example if MC had time traveled further back, to WWI per say, and turned some battle events into some other sides victory, and killed some important people who would play a important role in WWII, would his WWII timeline that he has changed be affected by his actions, or would another parallel timeline appear, and separate WWI and WWII's timelines? can the author help clarify?
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This is a really good story. I was kind of hesitant at first but really glad that I jumped in. this story deals with alternate timelines that seem to be created by 2 futuristic factions to get the ending they want in the future. The one against the MC seems to not be as advanced, they don't have the advanced tech accessibility as the MC but they have started a lot farther back then the MC and are just using the resources and tech avaible for the era.
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This isn't for everyone. Those who know the time periods, (currently WW2), will have an easier time understanding what's happening. However, I would like to state this is "Near" historical. Of course with timeline changes comes changes to actual events. It's a little fast, but currently the author is new, and trying to find the balance, but things as they stand are good for a quick read. It's really enjoyable, the MC actually isn't stupid for once!
really good book so far all i got to say is that these kinds of books are RARE hmm so i need 140 characters ebvqhwbpijeqbphvibegpiuprvhphebvonejvvbjnjhoevjhebbrrvb
Dear author I do hope you continue your execellent work daily and please dont forgot to have atleast 1 battle lost to awaken KYLE overly that he needs to be serious at everything to be fitting to become the world's greatest leader but it still depends on you dear author.
will try reading your novel bro.. it just happens i like this kind of genre... just dont hang us readers in middle of arc.. hope u can finish this
The author here, I love the idea of a man with modern knowledge traveling to the past where there was the most conflict, a great what if scenario. I hope to use Historical accurate data, make it balanced, a good system to make certain things happen. And be to more battlefields than just one. I will use some terminology which could be viewed as difficult. I'll try my best, hope you enjoy reading this type of book. A REAL Modern military Fiction. I am rating it 5 stars just for the sake of a foundation.
IT really nice story....You guys seriously need to read it.....But be careful at the END.....it has Explllllosionnn!!! It has a good characteristic, backgrounds,History (SlightlyAlter) overall it good to read in you free time....
Reveal Spoiler This is an absolute amazing novel. The concept of the story is extremely interesting as it immersed me into the story. Thrilling and eye catching is all I can say.
This story really comes to life as it progresses, the first few chapters may not be appealing to some but please hang on! It gets better especially with the wars and story development, the characters are detailed and are not left our to develop only the MC. WELCOME TO THE ORGANISATION!!
Désolé auteur, Mais ton roman je les trouvé avec une bonne idée mais perso la maintenant j'en n'est plus que marre, il me fait trop mal a la tète. Tu a beaucoup de bonne idée mais aucun ordre plutôt simple et logique pour moi ton roman c'est l’apocalypse sur la compréhension(et trop t'info d'un coup) ce qui détruit tout le plaisir, Désolé moi je tourne la page a un autre roman
Reveal Spoiler Fight! War! Heroes! Battles! TESTOSTERONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Read this one for the world comrades. 5/5 would f*** with WW2 again
I do not really like to write or comment much about books, as I don't want to get in discussion. But I make an exception for this book, mainly because it is going over a lot of people's radars. People who enter the War&Military Novel section would expect such a novel as the category states. But this is not what is happening, all Novels I see are utter trash on this section until I started to read this jewel, having Humour, action, intricate scheming, characters you relate and a good Author. This Book is a much read of people want to experience a true War&Military novel, as all the others are UTTER disappointments. I thank the Author for giving what all people deserve when they open this genre :D
This novel quickly became one of my favorites recently. everything is superb and amazing. I hope for more chapters! keep it up man!............
Well let me summarize this.Novel.You read novel.Novel is good.Then you comment on the chapter saying "thx for the chap" then the author liked it.Then you have exp for days.Then you think how to help the author novel to get to higher realm like the sector heads.Then you remember you can review it .Then join the discord.Joining discord has so much spoiler for days you just need to wait for future arcs then you win the game.+100000^10000000000 exp. Player 1:GG Player 2:All hail comander Player 3:Author too good to be true ...+1 ...+2 ...+.... Player 1069069069:Well the moral of the story.Read this novel dont be a noob like @Player 1
Well it got much better so I'll give a five for encouragement Fjfjfjfjjfjfkfkdkdkkdkrkrkrklrldlfkfkfklrlrlrlrlrlrlrllrlrkrkr Jdjdjdkkdkfkfkfkkfkfkfkfkkfkfkfkkfkfkkf Dkdkfkjfjfjfjfjfjk
Am i the only who's getting this message "This chapter has been deleted. Please go to The The War That Transcends Timelines! or Webnovel home" when i tried to read this story seriously this is such a bother to me considering i how i love the story
So, I haven't used Qidian and all these webnovel sites as I am not really into the cultivation and stuff. But when I stumbled upon the military section I saw a new light from these sites. Sadly most are again cultivation or are not executed well. But I stumbled upon this novel, the 1st chapter made me hooked and made me binge read this novel, -The quality of writing could be a bit better compared to some novels, but seeing this is the author's 1st book the minor grammar mistakes can be overlooked. -Stabilities of updates are great, you are guaranteed one chapter a day, and if we breach the top 100 it will only increase, the author never let me down -The beginning of the story has been rewritten a few times, with the current one looking very promising, the plot is surprisingly very deep, where it makes you think constantly about how or what happened. -The characters are few, we have the MC, Zero, Rudolf, Mackensen, Nova and Rommel. Some important minor characters are sector heads, Gunther. In conclusion the author has made a small group to specialise on while still putting some flavour in minor characters. -The world background will probably vary, currently it is WW2 but different, the author had developed the new world very well. In the end, this Novel I would say is a novel that can be truly classified as military. It has guns, men, planes and tanks. No cultivation, no weird things. I really recommend reading it. I would say, read it, it is worth your time, and with the author actively going back to old chapters improving them and expanding them shows the dedication of the author. Hope people will enjoy this novel as much as I do :)
Reveal Spoiler This is what everyone should be looking for! I joined Qidian to find a Novel which would be about war, Intelligence gathering, resources and a bit of steampunk. To anyone hesitating, this Author is a beginner, but his quality of writing is totally not shabby compared to some other novel writers I have seen. Development in the beginning is a bit bad but he is a beginning and he is improving. I would say give it a go, it is special in its way.
I like the novel But it just that many of the developmentbof the novel is missing. You should develop more of thr storyline for the marshall
I'm on chapter 26 and I would just like to say i love this and I find only one minor problem and that is misspellings but this is my favorite book so far. And this is also my first review. I love the amount of development and I really like how well your time skips fit in. For a beginner I would rate you a semi pro thus far. I hope to see everything come beautifully together like a well woven blanket.
If you like wars with different time lines and different weapons in who know many era time lines then this is for you and this is not something you see every day on webnovel in this genre
everything is great about this novel, the og story, and development of characters and plot, however, I do have one question for the author AS of C42, I am questioning @Chaos_Overseer 's plot... 1) will MC's actions change the future, or will MC be teleported to a parallel timeline, or will time freeze until MC is teleported back to WWII... 2) as of MC's actions on WWII... would his next travels through time and space continuum be set in the future (either with WWII info changed, or not) -or- would MC be teleported back to WWI or earlier? 3 a. if forward how will his actions play in the future, would MC remember his organization/ MC retain his look after going forward in time... or back to his previous nontramaticfied body... but still have the memories of his actions in changed WWII 3 b. if backwards, would his actions affect his previous history changes on WWII, for example if MC had time traveled further back, to WWI per say, and turned some battle events into some other sides victory, and killed some important people who would play a important role in WWII, would his WWII timeline that he has changed be affected by his actions, or would another parallel timeline appear, and separate WWI and WWII's timelines? can the author help clarify?
Reveal Spoiler This is a really good story. I was kind of hesitant at first but really glad that I jumped in. this story deals with alternate timelines that seem to be created by 2 futuristic factions to get the ending they want in the future. The one against the MC seems to not be as advanced, they don't have the advanced tech accessibility as the MC but they have started a lot farther back then the MC and are just using the resources and tech avaible for the era.
Reveal Spoiler This isn't for everyone. Those who know the time periods, (currently WW2), will have an easier time understanding what's happening. However, I would like to state this is "Near" historical. Of course with timeline changes comes changes to actual events. It's a little fast, but currently the author is new, and trying to find the balance, but things as they stand are good for a quick read. It's really enjoyable, the MC actually isn't stupid for once!
really good book so far all i got to say is that these kinds of books are RARE hmm so i need 140 characters ebvqhwbpijeqbphvibegpiuprvhphebvonejvvbjnjhoevjhebbrrvb
Dear author I do hope you continue your execellent work daily and please dont forgot to have atleast 1 battle lost to awaken KYLE overly that he needs to be serious at everything to be fitting to become the world's greatest leader but it still depends on you dear author.
will try reading your novel bro.. it just happens i like this kind of genre... just dont hang us readers in middle of arc.. hope u can finish this
The author here, I love the idea of a man with modern knowledge traveling to the past where there was the most conflict, a great what if scenario. I hope to use Historical accurate data, make it balanced, a good system to make certain things happen. And be to more battlefields than just one. I will use some terminology which could be viewed as difficult. I'll try my best, hope you enjoy reading this type of book. A REAL Modern military Fiction. I am rating it 5 stars just for the sake of a foundation.
IT really nice story....You guys seriously need to read it.....But be careful at the END.....it has Explllllosionnn!!! It has a good characteristic, backgrounds,History (SlightlyAlter) overall it good to read in you free time....
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