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Chapter 73: The Pit Part Three

WARNING: BLOOD AND GORE IN THE FOLLOWING CHAPTER.

It lunges so I twist out of the way but slip in the process because of all the slime and goo. I land hard and Fig almost flies off but manages to hold on as I try to stand but something grabs my leg flipping me over on my back and dragging me to the large mouth creature. It's eyes flash with joy as it stretches it's mouth wider.

The creature tries to bring my leg into it's mouth so I use my free leg to kick it in the face as hard as I can causing it to scream out in pain as it releases me. I look to my now bare foot and realize that my heel on my high heel shoe was now stuck in the creatures face. I quickly kick off the other shoe as I turn struggling to my feet and I try to run. I curse as my feet fail to find enough traction as I slip and slide in the goo. The creature screeches again as it grabs my waist slamming me up into the nest of eggs.

Even as it releases me my body stays within the gooey mess. I struggle against the goo and find myself loosening but the creature notices and slams it's large body into me crushing me further into the gooey mess. I feel hard pieces stabbing my back and sides. I shudder when the smell hits me. I'm pretty sure I'm in someone's chest cavity... I try to block it out but a thought suddenly crosses my mind.

I grab for the bones stabbing my sides and pull with everything I have and cry out in joy when I hear a snapping noise as it breaks free. It wasn't the best weapon but it was something. The creature pushes against me again nearly crushing me. Fig who was holding on to my hair suddenly lets go with a war cry and attacks the large creature biting and scratching it.

I can no longer breath in with the large creature crushing me so I waste no time in flipping the bone around so the part I broke off was facing out. At least this side was sharp.. I reach back as far as I can using all the strength I have left giving out a war cry of my own as I stab the creature. It screeches out in pain as it's body pulls away. Fig jumps into my dress right into the low cut front.. Huh, the dress does come in handy.. who knew?

I suck in air chasing the dark spots away from my vision as I start struggling to get down again. I feel the goo slowly releasing and I feel a ray of hope spread through out my trembling heart. Fig swings out of the front of my dress but holds the edge as he starts pulling with everything he has swinging back and forth.


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Hey guys.. I was only going to release two extra chapters but I feel like I should just keep going for now.. I don't like the feeling of leaving Fig and Syn down there for too long lol

Chapter 74: The Pit Part Four

WARNING: BLOOD, GORE, HORROR IN THE FOLLOWING CHAPTER.

With a sucking sound I finally break free and fall to the ground in a ungraceful heap. The creature was still screeching as it wiggles back in forth trying to remove the bone. I see that the shoe is still stuck to it's face and I feel a small satisfied smile break across my face at my own handy work.

I shimmy the best I can as Fig and I make our way back over to the door and I pray that the creepy creature on the other side is long gone. As I finally make it to the door I'm shaking with hope but my heart beats harder as I realize the large creature is quiet. I look back to find it crawling over to me trying to sneak up on us.

I fumble with the lock on the door again but for entirely different reasons.. Every inch of me was covered in goo and I couldn't get a grip on the lock. I shake as I fight with the lock and hear the large creature picking up speed behind us. "Come on, come on, COME ON!!" I yell as the lock finally slides over. Yes! I turn the door knob and nearly cry when my hand just keeps spinning on the door knob.

"Please!!" I yell and grip the door knob with everything I have and the door finally opens as the creature nearly reaches us. I stubble out of the room and turn around quickly to shut the door only to realize the creature's head was already half way out the door behind us. I fall back against the wall in the small hall and use my feet to try and shut the door on the creature.

It screeches in anger as it pushes the door open against me. I cry out in anger and determination and kick with everything I have and watch as the door closes on the creature cutting it's head off. Blood gushes out covering Fig and I as I watch in horror as the head continues to snap at me trying to bite me.

I frantically crawl backwards down the hall to get away from the thing still snapping at me. "What kind of place is this!?" I yell and stand on shaking legs stepping farther away. I watch as it slowly comes to a stop and begins to twitch before finally dying.. I'm breathing hard as I lift a hand to my chest to feel my heart. I walk a little longer before sliding down and taking a moment. "Are you okay?" I ask Fig and he says "Never better." I smile and close my eyes as I let myself rest for a minute.


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