The Strongest Marine

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Zeno

the novel has potential, you should have it eliminate all the corrupt or bad marines and then discover the existence of Im-sama, the ruler of the world, from the mouth of a tenryuubito, then kill Im-sama, destroy the gorosei, the Tenryuubitos, the world government, the great wall that separates the 4 seas and that discovers all the blue, guides the sailor in the right way and make him immortal with the help of his valeria stone and his wife too, are some ideas for your novel ha and improve your spelling please

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CyborgFranky

dropped? dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?dropped?

LV 5

Azure_Dragonfly

Hey author here Thanks for the Support. "The Strongest Marine" is my first Novel I really hope you guys like it. I am also looking forward to the "Legend" or "Legends" The MC is going to make. So if your willing "come Board and Bring Along All your Hopes and Dreams" And Join Me as I Take you on a bold and Exciting Adventure Through the Majestic and Vast World of One piece. Which I presume most of you out there have Already witnessed Either way I also Invite Those of you who have witnessed it, well? Lets go then, will have a few Laughs , fight Monsters , as well as which as Our MC goes through difficulties and Makes New friends along the way. I will apologize head of time about the slow releases. but i promise there will be bonus chapters depending on " The Strongest Marine"s Power ranking. Now I will Shamelessly give my self a 5.0.

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hiddenwolf

hmmmmmm..................................................... I actually don't know what to say. Everything so far is on point and has potential to become a good novel. Keep it up author.

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Plutonium

Idea is original and new which I have to say is really interesting. Many focus on Canon and don't think or are serious about the actual work. I really hope you hav3 the direction the story is going and progress. Good luck.

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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ellie_alina

Why is it dropped so far the story is so good and the development is also going well i just hope u will continue its by far unique i hope u will think about continuing it please and thank you for the story

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Rosano

This is the first One Piece fanfiction I have read from the marine perspective. I enjoyed reading it , but sadly it seems like the author has stopped updating for months............................

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Rosano

This is the first fan-fiction of One piece that I have read that has a story line from the marine perspective. Still it's a shame that the era is wayyy before the story line.

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Hyhyhyhyh

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Hyhyhyhyh

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SoSlimShady

Look you have good idea but you need a beta for your story. Someone who is in fact english. Because that is what is holding your story back.

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Apocalypsesummoner

I support you dude keep writing and don't give up and keep pushing on the book is good with the little amount of chapter but the book so far is really good