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Chapter 15: The check-up

Gained 5000 exp.

Acquired Guaranteed legendary Gacha ticket.

Gained 5000 exp.

Acquired 10 Gacha tickets.

Ed was ecstatic. He did not expect so many things from just 1 monster. The quest rewards plus the monster drops were worth the time and blood put into it.

Ed pulled out some pills and ate them; he also gave some to Raikou. After resting for about an hour they got up and prepared to leave, it was already dark.

'I'm going to get an earful from my mom this time...' Ed didn't want t think about what would happen when he gets back.

Suddenly he heard movements and put up his guard. If it was a monster as strong as the bear he would be in trouble.

"Young master you are late" It was Becky. She came looking for Ed because he was behind schedule.

"Sorry, Becky I met a strong monster and couldn't run away until I killed it.

Becky noticed the bear's body after he spoke and was stunned. "You killed the forest king!" It was the first time Ed saw some emotion on Becky's face.

"I couldn't have done it alone. I would be dead if not for Raikou and Suika." Ed was telling the truth.

"It still is quite an achievement. Although stronger monsters exist, this bear is known for being easily provoked and for its wild nature" Becky was talking with pride in her voice.

"Do you mind if I take back the body with me young master? It should fetch quite the price"

"I don't mind but how are you going to carry it back?" Ed couldn't imagine Becky carrying the huge bear alone.

"I won't be carrying it" As soon as she finished talking she waved her hand and the body disappeared. 'Could it be the Item Box?'

"I have a special skill that allows me to store non-living things" Becky explained.

Sure enough, it was the Item Box skill Ed thought about.

Ed and Becky then returned to the castle. As Ed expected; his mother didn't let him go without asking a million questions first. Ed also his little sister walking in a weird way. She was feeling muscle pain from the exercise she did with Ed.

'I wish I could take a video of her' Ed was appreciating Bella's cuteness in secret.

Ed, as usual, went to the bath and asked Becky to prepare food for all three of them.

Before falling asleep he asked the system for an overview of his stats and abilities as well as Raikou's and Suika's.

[Scanning...]

*Ding*

Name: Edward Avalon.

Level: 7 (2360/4500).

Stats:

Str: 80.

Agl: 60.

Int: 60.

Def: 65.

Sta: 82.

Skills: Two-sword style, Etiquette, Haggling, Strategy.

Abilities: Sharingan, Spectral Shadow Steps, Wind blade.

Monsters: Raikou, Suika.

Evaluation: You finally have one step in this world.

...

Nitoryu (Epic): Full mastery.

Able to professionally use two blades without any issues. Extra effect: Both hands can wield blades even when it's not the dominant hand.

Etiquette (Uncommon): Full mastery.

Able to converse properly like a noble without forgetting manners.

Haggling (Rare): Level 1.

Successfully reduce the price of items by 2%.

Strategy (Uncommon): Level 2.

Ability to think of advanced strategies even in the middle of the fight.

Sharingan (Rare): Level 3 (3 tomoe)

Enhanced vision, ability to perceive Chakra flow and ability to copy movements, Genjutsu compatibility.

Spectral Shadow Steps (Rare): Level 3.

Increase movement speed by 30%. Increase the degree of silence while moving.

Wind blade (Rare): Level 2.

Able to coat any weapon with a wind blade. Wind blade can be shot out for a distance of 5 meters.

...

Name: Raikou (Fire-thunder wolf).

Cultivation: Knight establishment (level 5).

Master: Edward Avalon.

Name: Suika Level 4 (Poison Slime).

It's a poison slime.

'I finally mastered the Sharingan.' Ed over-viewed all of his results and was very satisfied with what he had achieved.

He was in this world for a bit more than a week and is already comparable to a Knight Establishment level 1.

His leveling up speed was crazy, but he was royalty so most people would think he got help from his father anyway.

Ed decided to end the day and sleep. He wanted to use the Gacha but thought it would be better to leave for the next day.

In the morning, Becky knocked on the door as usual. Ed thought he was being summoned by his father again but it seemed like she had just brought him breakfast.

After all three of them ate Ed decided it was time to use the Gacha and opened it.

"System can the guaranteed ticket be used in any Gacha?"

[That is correct]

Ed thought for a while and used it on the Function Gacha.

[Drawing please wait]

*Ding*

Acquired Game interface V2.

"What the hell?! They come in versions now?!"

[This is a Gacha, the system has no control about what is drawn. It's all in the luck of the draw]

Ed crushed the card he had gotten and waited for results.

Unlocked Inventory!

Unlocked HP/MP bar!

"What is this about system? Don't I already have an inventory? Are you trying to scam me?"

[Host is misunderstanding. The inventory that exists already is for storing Gacha draws, while the new can be used to store anything including real-world items]

After the explanation, Ed finally understood and knew he was lucky. He had thought yesterday that he wanted a skill like Becky's and now he got it.

"The HP/MP bar is self-explanatory but shouldn't it have been unlocked before?"

[Why don't you be thankful for what you have?] The system seemed like it was annoyed by Ed questioning it.

"Alright alright no need to get so annoyed!"

'Well then, now for the rest of the tickets!'

"System, use 2 tickets on Weapon Gacha, 1 on Armor, 2 on Skill and 5 on Function!" Ed gave the order and waited patiently.

[Drawing]

*Ding*

Obtained Kitchen knife, Kunai, Leather Gloves, Fire Magic, Seikūken, 3xUpgrade card, Healing card, Map.

The first thing Ed saw made his heart sink but reading on he felt happier.


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
Shigun Shigun

For those who don't know Seikūken is a martial art technique from the manga Keinichi. I always liked it so decided to implement it.

It can be translated to air sphere of control.

Remember to leave your thoughts and review the story so i know how to improve it! :)

Chapter 16: The illusion

Ed disregarded the weapons he got. He was satisfied with the rest. He crushed the skill cards he got and asked the system about the map.

[The Map is another component of the Game interface; it should allow you to check on your allies, enemies and neutral characters within a radius of 20 km]

Ed understood what the system meant; he did play games before that used maps. After crushing the Map card, he was wondering if he should use the Upgrade cards or keep them for another time.

'It's better to get stronger faster so I'll use them!' Ed made up his mind and used one Upgrade card on his Wind blade ability.

Wind blade evolved into Wind magic.

Ed was pretty happy that he got another type of magic that easily.

"Raikou would you like to get stronger again?!" Ed planned on using the 2 Upgrade cards on Raikou. He thought about evolving his Two-sword Style but he remembered he only had 2 swords. He would level it up when he got a good sword, at least as good as the ones he has now.

"Woof!" Raikou was enthusiastic about leveling up. He knew this world was one where the strong ruled.

Ed crushed the two Upgrade cards and used them on Raikou. This time instead of light, a Shadowy sphere surrounded Raikou, Ed used his Sharingan and saw that his companion's Qi kept growing at a huge rate. It was even greater than the Bear they fought last time.

Ed was afraid that such Qi would attract the attention of someone so he turned around and looked towards the door. He noticed Becky's Qi was moving, It seems Raikou's transformation affected her as well but she didn't move, she still had her duties above all else.

A minute later the shadowy sphere disappeared and Raikou came out. He was a lot bigger than before; he was now almost 2 meters tall. His fur was even darker and looked like it glistening with patches of purple fur giving him a dangerous look.

Ed scanned him and was stunned at the result.

Name: Raikou (Shadow wolf).

Cultivation: King establishment (Level 1).

Description: A wolf heard of only in legends.

Raikou was now a legendary wolf. His transformation alone pushed him to a greater height than before.

"How about some training Raikou?!" Ed was excited at his partner getting stronger.

"Woof!" Raikou nodded in agreement and they both headed out towards the training area.

They both got ready to spar, Ed grabbed two wooden swords while Raikou and running and jumping around like he was warming up.

Ed activated his Sharingan and rushed to where Raikou was. Raikou then used his signature speed and easily dodged him. Ed then felt someone coming from his side and automatically swung his sword.

He had hit a fireball Raikou threw at him. 'My body moved on its own. This must be the Seikūken's effect' Ed backed away and clad his swords in Wind blade. The skill hadn't disappeared even though he had evolved it.

This time Ed took it a step further and used Fire magic above the wind, so it wouldn't burn his swords, giving them a mysterious yet mystical image. Ed swung his swords towards Raikou and the flame on the swords was sent towards him at an alarming speed.

Ed didn't know, but the ability to combine two types of magic was considered very rare in this world. Yes, he used it like it was child's play.

Before the flames hit, Raikou howled and it seemed like he was clad in lightning. This gave him a boost in speed and strength. He used this form to make his way towards Ed. However, Ed always reacted quickly using his skills in combination with each other. The Sharingan and the Seikūken combination proved to be very powerful.

However, soon enough Ed felt weak. He noticed that his MP was close to hitting 0. Using the Sharingan along with the Fire and Wind magic drained him very quickly.

"Let's stop here Raikou, I can't continue anymore Hah! Hah!" Ed was very exhausted. Raikou was getting tired as well, though not like Ed.

Ed turned around to leave and found his brother coming towards him. It seemed like he was about to use the training area as well.

Eric passed by Ed without talking to him or even acknowledging his existence. Ed found it weird, even though his brother had a lot of pride he still cared about his family. Ed got curious and looked at his brother and noticed that his Qi was very agitated. It looked like his brother was about to use magic every time but stopped just before releasing it.

'What could that be?' Ed got curious while walking away, and then suddenly remembered his Sharingan had just leveled up and he was now compatible with Genjutsu, that is illusionary techniques.

He also remembered that those who had the Sharingan could detect when someone was under an illusion.

'Could someone be using an illusion technique on my brother?!' Ed thought about going back and undoing the illusion on his bother, but he was stopped by a notification.

Special quest activated.

Find out who is controlling your brother and stop them.

Reward: 10.000 Exp.

Ed stopped in his tracks. The exp from this quest was double what he got killing the bear. Ed then decided to monitor his brother while he is under an illusion. Whoever is controlling him would need to be close to him to be able to do it.

Ed got back and decided on his next course of action. He wouldn't tell his father since that might warn the culprit and cause him to run away. He would also check his mother and little sister, he didn't bother checking his father since he knew nobody would dare to try and control him.

'My father said before that some sect disciples were the reason for Eric's behavior the other day'. That was Ed's only clue so he decided to start from there.


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
Shigun Shigun

Hello everyone, Raikou and Ed are getting stronger every chapter. I hope you enjoyed reading this chapter, please give me your thoughts on it.

The story is moving ahead, I wonder what could be waiting.

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