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All my reviews are truthful (The way I review originals and translations are different), I'm not going to try and inflate anyone's egos if the book doesn't justify it. Writing Quality 4/5: The transitions are pretty smooth, nothing much to say here. (There are naturally your occasional grammar mistakes, but I'm not going to nit-pick something so miniscule. These occasional bumps in the writing have no major effect on the actual flow of the writing, which is really good for an ******* writer on WN; where english isn't the first language for many of the readers/writers.) E.g, In this novel you get your occasional use of 'Superfluous Commas', (where the writer uses a comma before because even though it is not necessary.) Examples of the types of minor errors I'm talking about, Unlike his demon family who only respected him, because of his power (Now, your typical extremely minor mistakes.) Kretos tried to speak, but was unable to. It would seem that his body wasn't develop enough to do such a thing. - Let's be honest here, we all know that it should be 'developed' and our eyes would auto-correct it pretty quickly anyway. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was at this point in time, Kretos lifted his arms he finally noticed that his arms were small and dainty. This was not the arm of the supreme overlord, this was the arms of a baby. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Alright, it doesn't take a genius to recognize that these two sentences aren't perfect. Yet, we as your average readers can easily understand the general plot and direction the author is heading with.) Stability of Updates 5/5: The updates appear punctual (good to see) Story Development: The story is primarily about the MC progressing to become more 'human', he enjoys the warm feeling of love and care from a paternal family which is progress. Character Design: So far I can say that reading only 10 chapters, the MC has character. I admired the way he greeted his son's betrayal, even though it's not very 'realistic' in human terms I still enjoyed reading it nevertheless. Perhaps I've grown tired of the common trope, 'You, a haughty young master stared at my girl? Prepare for the nine familial exterminations.' Yet, this is also the character's double-edged sword. (You get the feeling that since he can greet death so casually, why won't he just do the same in his next life? — This may just be my own personal agenda against tropes like these, many readers would enjoy this type of MC though, so no massive complaints here.) The writer is able to give a seperate and unique personality to his main cast, so it doesn't feel like that we the readers are reading 2D cardboard cut-outs. So here's my conclusion, if you enjoy the magical world of 'elves', 'demons' etc you will probably enjoy this novel. Personally, it's not my cup of tea, the novels I enjoy are less main-stream. (The types of MC I admire also differ to this type of MC portrayed by the writer, but I can't comment on 'Writing Quality' in the review due to my personal preferences.) Overall Review: 4/5 (For an original it's definitely above average, but would I compare it to the likes of a novel like CCG, or perhaps even the averagely translated Shadow Hack? No fucking way.) My personal recommendations: Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder, Transmigator Meets Reincarnator, EMHS, Lord Xue Ying If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)
Good book overall, I enjoyed the first part more than anything. The narrations slowed down as the character for too strong and too powerful. The negative comment is that the final boss is too overpowered to a point it became a hopeless fight. I enjoyed unfolding all the back story and what happened prior to timelines. It is a good read but can be made shorter
entertaining story that was good for passing time until he have all of other reincanated of him in his soul. kretos was supposed 10000 years old and you're telling me he never look to his soul when he reach his peak? it was stup*d. and the character not have depth at all, each character can be described as 1 sentence. also the kretos arc was boring asf and him being amnesia was unnecessary.
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I can't believe this book is back again!!! author, I love you so much for this!!! I swear, it's the best demon book I've ever come across. it was the first book I read when I first had this app, and now its back... I've missed it so much...... 🥰🥰
I’m be been looking for this series for weeks, lol, glad to have finally found it again!
This light novel was the one that got me into light novels, and while he doesn't post as often, when he does I'm hyped. I love how he goes into different sub categories of like novels and does his own unique spin. I will support this author for many years to come.
It seems like an interesting story. It is just that the sentence structure is so awkward that I keep getting pulled out of the story. I would suggest getting someone with a good proficiency with English grammar to edit your your chapters. As this is for the first chapters, it might improve later. In that case, I would suggest doing an editing run yourself to fix these issues. I would return and try again if that is done. Good luck.
This is hands down the best content I have ever consumed regarding any mediums, be it anime, novels, manga, or anything else. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to see how it ends! You have blown my mind away can't wait to keep reading your other works.
I got very invested in this book, but now the author takes 1 month to update 2 chapters
the story pulls you in fast and keeps you wanting more and more. the only down fall to this book, is the author only writes a couple chapters a week. wish it was more. 😭
Not your typical reincarnation story. The story just keeps getting better. I just finished ch. 582 and it is still incredible. In fact it is only getting better. I was readin on free Webnovel.com but switched to the original source as I have no issues supporting a great piece of work. Heck hopefully this even gets turned into a anime one day.
I love this novel from the wide array of characters, to the beautiful detail during battles it truly pulls you into this world and holds you begging for more. I wasn't really into fantasy/magical novels but I've fell in love and I'm so glad I did and you will too. Daily updates packed full of action and all other ingredients to make you love it too.
The story seems good but Author just didn't put any effort into making the backstory of MC consistent and believable. MC is the First Ever Demon Lord to unite all demons under his rule and he died to a simple Mana Suppressing Drug!
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I really like this book and if the author sees this message I really would like this book to be uploaded more often. I find this books world building and character design to be amazing and they really drive home that he is the strongest. And that the author stays true to the MC character of a battle junkie
you named him kratos. with 1 letter changed. everytime i see his name i think of god of war, literally can't read this. don't use names that are the same as Atier famous people.
I think it's a great story. I love those kinds of stories where the MC is overwhelmingly powerful. Several times, I could almost feel like my blood was boiling like Ren himself. There were several grammatical mistakes and I wish it could be updated faster as it's a great story.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
What can I say? i just love this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update] it's basically my favorite book right now [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The book was great until the part where the ORIGIN erased Ren's memory. After that, it got boring as Ren was only able to remember parts of his previous life
Story is quite good and flow of the story is good as well. As for characters MC is strong and smart but still makes decisions immaturely and side characters are ok i guess .So overall i will say its good to read and entertaining.
check it the reviews webnovel please, there is too many people that just give 5strs for exp in way too much novel beside this. And the restrictions in characters for review is a bit inconsistent.
Just caught up with the chapters which is currently 471. This novel is so amazing. Author you better never drop this book until it has a satisfying ending. This is definitely a top 5 best novel EVER.
This novel seems uninteresting or cliché at first, but try to continue reading it. As you progress through the story, you will get hooked as each chapter ends. the comedy is also quite good, but the best part in this novel is the story progression.
One of the best ever reads. the story blends most of the elements in a typical reincarnation story, but that doesn't mean that this story is mundane. in fact the story does this very well, thus creating its own uniqueness.
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I should state firstly that this novel is not focussed on character development or emotion depictions. I read multiple hours everyday. I have MDD, Maladaptive Day Dreaming Disorder, which means I constantly day dream hyper realistic settings with its own plots and characters. I have personally lived through this world for many many hours just exploring the universe in my head. This novel follows Ren, a thrillseaking fighter and his soul’s travels through a spawling (and unbelievably exciting) multiverse. The mere setting in which this takes place, this multiverse, is so fun to think about and imagine. I cant wait to see what is next. I cant wait to explore it in my dreams. Thank you Author, you should be immensely proud pf yourself.
so so, I think this is just above average... Not a Masterpiece nor a crapterpiece ... I recommend reading if you are into this type of genre, reincarnation stuff...
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So to start out with I’m a bit burned out on this type of novel just coz they're all the same and not much change. And that’s where this one improves, changes does something right which is Character Growth. You don’t see it often really often or I’ll be that the MC devolves into some dick. The author has a really good grasp of character growth and I can’t wait for more. The chapter read nice and easy and there is a good flow to them. Will review again after more is out but for the time being I enjoy it. Check it out yourself
All my reviews are truthful (The way I review originals and translations are different), I'm not going to try and inflate anyone's egos if the book doesn't justify it. Writing Quality 4/5: The transitions are pretty smooth, nothing much to say here. (There are naturally your occasional grammar mistakes, but I'm not going to nit-pick something so miniscule. These occasional bumps in the writing have no major effect on the actual flow of the writing, which is really good for an ******* writer on WN; where english isn't the first language for many of the readers/writers.) E.g, In this novel you get your occasional use of 'Superfluous Commas', (where the writer uses a comma before because even though it is not necessary.) Examples of the types of minor errors I'm talking about, Unlike his demon family who only respected him, because of his power (Now, your typical extremely minor mistakes.) Kretos tried to speak, but was unable to. It would seem that his body wasn't develop enough to do such a thing. - Let's be honest here, we all know that it should be 'developed' and our eyes would auto-correct it pretty quickly anyway. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- It was at this point in time, Kretos lifted his arms he finally noticed that his arms were small and dainty. This was not the arm of the supreme overlord, this was the arms of a baby. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- (Alright, it doesn't take a genius to recognize that these two sentences aren't perfect. Yet, we as your average readers can easily understand the general plot and direction the author is heading with.) Stability of Updates 5/5: The updates appear punctual (good to see) Story Development: The story is primarily about the MC progressing to become more 'human', he enjoys the warm feeling of love and care from a paternal family which is progress. Character Design: So far I can say that reading only 10 chapters, the MC has character. I admired the way he greeted his son's betrayal, even though it's not very 'realistic' in human terms I still enjoyed reading it nevertheless. Perhaps I've grown tired of the common trope, 'You, a haughty young master stared at my girl? Prepare for the nine familial exterminations.' Yet, this is also the character's double-edged sword. (You get the feeling that since he can greet death so casually, why won't he just do the same in his next life? — This may just be my own personal agenda against tropes like these, many readers would enjoy this type of MC though, so no massive complaints here.) The writer is able to give a seperate and unique personality to his main cast, so it doesn't feel like that we the readers are reading 2D cardboard cut-outs. So here's my conclusion, if you enjoy the magical world of 'elves', 'demons' etc you will probably enjoy this novel. Personally, it's not my cup of tea, the novels I enjoy are less main-stream. (The types of MC I admire also differ to this type of MC portrayed by the writer, but I can't comment on 'Writing Quality' in the review due to my personal preferences.) Overall Review: 4/5 (For an original it's definitely above average, but would I compare it to the likes of a novel like CCG, or perhaps even the averagely translated Shadow Hack? No fucking way.) My personal recommendations: Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder, Transmigator Meets Reincarnator, EMHS, Lord Xue Ying If anyone wants me to do an in-depth review, simply @reply to me in one of my reviews and I'll do a truthful in-depth review if I can actually understand the flow of the writing. (I write these reviews so that the section for determining whether someone reads a story is actually truthful and not full of deceit.)
Good book overall, I enjoyed the first part more than anything. The narrations slowed down as the character for too strong and too powerful. The negative comment is that the final boss is too overpowered to a point it became a hopeless fight. I enjoyed unfolding all the back story and what happened prior to timelines. It is a good read but can be made shorter
entertaining story that was good for passing time until he have all of other reincanated of him in his soul. kretos was supposed 10000 years old and you're telling me he never look to his soul when he reach his peak? it was stup*d. and the character not have depth at all, each character can be described as 1 sentence. also the kretos arc was boring asf and him being amnesia was unnecessary.
Reveal Spoiler I can't believe this book is back again!!! author, I love you so much for this!!! I swear, it's the best demon book I've ever come across. it was the first book I read when I first had this app, and now its back... I've missed it so much...... 🥰🥰
I’m be been looking for this series for weeks, lol, glad to have finally found it again!
This light novel was the one that got me into light novels, and while he doesn't post as often, when he does I'm hyped. I love how he goes into different sub categories of like novels and does his own unique spin. I will support this author for many years to come.
It seems like an interesting story. It is just that the sentence structure is so awkward that I keep getting pulled out of the story. I would suggest getting someone with a good proficiency with English grammar to edit your your chapters. As this is for the first chapters, it might improve later. In that case, I would suggest doing an editing run yourself to fix these issues. I would return and try again if that is done. Good luck.
This is hands down the best content I have ever consumed regarding any mediums, be it anime, novels, manga, or anything else. Please keep up the good work and I can't wait to see how it ends! You have blown my mind away can't wait to keep reading your other works.
I got very invested in this book, but now the author takes 1 month to update 2 chapters
the story pulls you in fast and keeps you wanting more and more. the only down fall to this book, is the author only writes a couple chapters a week. wish it was more. 😭
Not your typical reincarnation story. The story just keeps getting better. I just finished ch. 582 and it is still incredible. In fact it is only getting better. I was readin on free Webnovel.com but switched to the original source as I have no issues supporting a great piece of work. Heck hopefully this even gets turned into a anime one day.
I love this novel from the wide array of characters, to the beautiful detail during battles it truly pulls you into this world and holds you begging for more. I wasn't really into fantasy/magical novels but I've fell in love and I'm so glad I did and you will too. Daily updates packed full of action and all other ingredients to make you love it too.
The story seems good but Author just didn't put any effort into making the backstory of MC consistent and believable. MC is the First Ever Demon Lord to unite all demons under his rule and he died to a simple Mana Suppressing Drug!
Reveal Spoiler I really like this book and if the author sees this message I really would like this book to be uploaded more often. I find this books world building and character design to be amazing and they really drive home that he is the strongest. And that the author stays true to the MC character of a battle junkie
you named him kratos. with 1 letter changed. everytime i see his name i think of god of war, literally can't read this. don't use names that are the same as Atier famous people.
I think it's a great story. I love those kinds of stories where the MC is overwhelmingly powerful. Several times, I could almost feel like my blood was boiling like Ren himself. There were several grammatical mistakes and I wish it could be updated faster as it's a great story.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
What can I say? i just love this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update] it's basically my favorite book right now [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The book was great until the part where the ORIGIN erased Ren's memory. After that, it got boring as Ren was only able to remember parts of his previous life
Story is quite good and flow of the story is good as well. As for characters MC is strong and smart but still makes decisions immaturely and side characters are ok i guess .So overall i will say its good to read and entertaining.
check it the reviews webnovel please, there is too many people that just give 5strs for exp in way too much novel beside this. And the restrictions in characters for review is a bit inconsistent.
Just caught up with the chapters which is currently 471. This novel is so amazing. Author you better never drop this book until it has a satisfying ending. This is definitely a top 5 best novel EVER.
This novel seems uninteresting or cliché at first, but try to continue reading it. As you progress through the story, you will get hooked as each chapter ends. the comedy is also quite good, but the best part in this novel is the story progression.
One of the best ever reads. the story blends most of the elements in a typical reincarnation story, but that doesn't mean that this story is mundane. in fact the story does this very well, thus creating its own uniqueness.
Good Book. go read it! spamspamspamspamspamspamspamspamspamspamcndjdjdjdjsjjsjddjsjdjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsjdnsnsjejnens
I should state firstly that this novel is not focussed on character development or emotion depictions. I read multiple hours everyday. I have MDD, Maladaptive Day Dreaming Disorder, which means I constantly day dream hyper realistic settings with its own plots and characters. I have personally lived through this world for many many hours just exploring the universe in my head. This novel follows Ren, a thrillseaking fighter and his soul’s travels through a spawling (and unbelievably exciting) multiverse. The mere setting in which this takes place, this multiverse, is so fun to think about and imagine. I cant wait to see what is next. I cant wait to explore it in my dreams. Thank you Author, you should be immensely proud pf yourself.
so so, I think this is just above average... Not a Masterpiece nor a crapterpiece ... I recommend reading if you are into this type of genre, reincarnation stuff...
llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
So to start out with I’m a bit burned out on this type of novel just coz they're all the same and not much change. And that’s where this one improves, changes does something right which is Character Growth. You don’t see it often really often or I’ll be that the MC devolves into some dick. The author has a really good grasp of character growth and I can’t wait for more. The chapter read nice and easy and there is a good flow to them. Will review again after more is out but for the time being I enjoy it. Check it out yourself