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I love Lynn's story And Devon too The story line is amazing and I can't wait for more chapters. Yep yep yep❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 Keep it up
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When I saw in the synopsis the phrase 'his curse' my first thought was: -Oh Sh*t a yandere! My second thought was: -F*cking half sister / 'best friend' Hahaha, I'll wait a few more chapters to read this and then put a real review. ;D
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO........Author-nim DeLyn Ship is already sailing why did u have to sink it? What will happen now bohohoho....poor LYNNNNNN T^T
The characters are just amazing and AI like the progress so far it always makes me laugh and excited. .......................... I love it so much ❤❤❤
Hehe what a great story u got there...... What an unfortunate girl hope she can break 'the curse' .............................. .............................. Just read the first 2 chapters n they are great n also comical😏 Hope u will provide for us more sweets eh!!❤❤😳
Author please do continue, I'm your 1st fan pleaseeeee.....and also Dont always go inside the story just write between them and do your comment on the last part. Fighting author
If you are just have started reading a book and haven't read tons of **** fictional stories, you might find this a good one. But when you ask the experienced and knowledgeable ones... It doesn't really give a good impact. From story development to character design and world background, they are cliched and still noticed how the typical dreamy romance between a nerd and a badboy is happening within this book. Not saying this in a haters way, but as an experienced wattpad reader. I hope you could apply a few modifications with your writing to improve its quality, I hope you dont take this too negatively or offensive :) I just want to give an honest review.
I love Lynn's story And Devon too The story line is amazing and I can't wait for more chapters. Yep yep yep❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 Keep it up
Reveal Spoiler When I saw in the synopsis the phrase 'his curse' my first thought was: -Oh Sh*t a yandere! My second thought was: -F*cking half sister / 'best friend' Hahaha, I'll wait a few more chapters to read this and then put a real review. ;D
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO........Author-nim DeLyn Ship is already sailing why did u have to sink it? What will happen now bohohoho....poor LYNNNNNN T^T
The characters are just amazing and AI like the progress so far it always makes me laugh and excited. .......................... I love it so much ❤❤❤
Hehe what a great story u got there...... What an unfortunate girl hope she can break 'the curse' .............................. .............................. Just read the first 2 chapters n they are great n also comical😏 Hope u will provide for us more sweets eh!!❤❤😳
Author please do continue, I'm your 1st fan pleaseeeee.....and also Dont always go inside the story just write between them and do your comment on the last part. Fighting author
If you are just have started reading a book and haven't read tons of **** fictional stories, you might find this a good one. But when you ask the experienced and knowledgeable ones... It doesn't really give a good impact. From story development to character design and world background, they are cliched and still noticed how the typical dreamy romance between a nerd and a badboy is happening within this book. Not saying this in a haters way, but as an experienced wattpad reader. I hope you could apply a few modifications with your writing to improve its quality, I hope you dont take this too negatively or offensive :) I just want to give an honest review.