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Endou Kai!! I read his arc too in wattpad! Titled the most handsome male lead over all the guys in 'Pick The Second Male Lead' by the MC. After noticing this I finally get some of the gist of what the story might be about (as in, whether the husband be the male lead
The story is intriguing and character driven while still having fun and entertainment elements. A term that I have recently learned "upmarket fiction" comes to my mind while reading this. Even after approximately 2 years, this story is still maintaining it's ratings. Although I have recently read this novel, it still keeps me hanging on my imagination about what will happen next and how it will turn out in the future but as in my opinion, only writer can do the much needed justification of the story. From the chapters I have read till now, I seem to figure out that it is only and introduction phase of the story and it will be more amazing in the future updates like: Relationship of main characters as well as it's impact on their growth and on the other characters. The contribution of children in the story. The continuation of the hidden plot that is hinted in the last parts of the story. Most of all, the female lead's comeback and success "victory" in both career and relations. All in all, I greatly anticipate the continuation of the story.
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If your not into the gay thing this book may not be for you. The main characters were not gay but side story character’s were. Over all this book a has a good storyline. Where are you author? 😁 It’s been a year😁
Came across this by chance.....and I’m hooked! Love the mc and excited about the ml I hope this doesn’t get dropped. Wishing for more updates in 2020!!
In terms of character design, the author achieved a great feat. Each character has a definitive trait that sets them significantly apart from each other, allowing them their own persona. Though the updates are unstable, the story progresses quite well. It's not too fast, but also not that slow. Maybe a downside that I noticed is that the chapters of the story are a bit short compared to the stories that I enjoy to read, but it's a good read nonetheless.
I love the book.its a pity it seems to be dropped because it's really a nice novel. I would have rated it more if there were more updates. However left the book hanging off a cliff for ages now.
It’s a nice Webnovel if you’re looking for a rebirth/reincarnation genre novel and it’s set up in the modern time so it perfectly suits my taste
Very interesting book. The FL gets a second chance in life. She has twins and is going through a divorce. Her ex husband is very hateful. Luckily, he isn’t the ML. 42 chapters deep so far, last update was a year ago. The chapters are well written and lengthy. Excited to see how the story will develop.
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The story is good. Altought the FL is a bit childish and annoying to me I like the characters around her so I continue reading. It's really a fresh idea to introduce a second male lead who she will fall in love with instead of her douchbag ex - husband.
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The story is good and different from the usual transmigration story. But I do find the FL really annoying and quite childlike, I he her characters develops a little and becomes more mature. Because to me she is annoying.
Loving this novel. A hidden gem. Author we need more. 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
I am loving the story~~😍😍😍 Hopes the author to keep up the good work I dont think there need any change in the plot but I guess if the author feel like there is need I can't say anything..
This is such a hidden gem.I really like the FL and her two lovely kids. The plot is really interesting and the characters are really well thought. Good job author but is this going to be updated again?
I'm sooooooo hoooked! I really liked this story so much and I hope Author-san will update more of this. Pleaseeeeee. I'm waiting! I want more huhu. </3
Dang how sad no updates at all. It’s such a nice story now I regret reading it 😢😢😢 Author will you ever come back? It’s such a jem I feel like its a waste to throw it aside like this 😢
So spewing that this has been dropped!! It was such a fun and refreshing read, that even half way through, when I realised that it hadn't been updated in a year, I still finished the available chapters.
Autor I'm really waiting for a year for your return. I love this story because it's diferent from everyelse. 😊😊 My vote for stability of updating esse from before tou stop.
I loved this story the moment i read it. Even though there were once in a while updates i have been following it. But it's been a year too long. Has the story been dropped? I hope the author would let us know if it has been scrapped.
Wow.... Thank you so much fir this wonderful story Ms/Mr. Author. I fell in love with Izzy, the kids, Sage abd the gang... Kudos... Please continue this captivating story till the end and i hope for more inspirations for you to come. Thank you. 😚😚😚😘😍❤💘
This story is pretty well written and a lot of surprises in the story line. Also very well written side storys about the other characters. But I DO NOT THINK THIS STORY WILL BE FINISHED BEING WRITTEN!?!?!
Amazing story! Amazing characters! I eagerly await the next chapters while the author sorts out the change in the plot. I do hope Brycen will suffer a huge face slap and Susan be exposed. And that Kelly and Phoenix will be able to help their mother. The love interest, Sage, is interesting, but he adds taste to our female lead, Isabel. The other characters like Davi and Kim are also very interesting. :)
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thank you for the story so far, I'm sure you will continue superb. Don't worry be relaxed when ever you ready. I will patiently wait thank you for your note
I have read the story long back in wattpad and have been waiting for the next release so much that I only remember it has been more than 6 months to say the least I truly am in love with the writing story the plot and ridiculously cute kids as well as the awesome MC may you live long and finish the novel I wish to read it to end before I rest in peace
Endou Kai!! I read his arc too in wattpad! Titled the most handsome male lead over all the guys in 'Pick The Second Male Lead' by the MC. After noticing this I finally get some of the gist of what the story might be about (as in, whether the husband be the male lead
The story is intriguing and character driven while still having fun and entertainment elements. A term that I have recently learned "upmarket fiction" comes to my mind while reading this. Even after approximately 2 years, this story is still maintaining it's ratings. Although I have recently read this novel, it still keeps me hanging on my imagination about what will happen next and how it will turn out in the future but as in my opinion, only writer can do the much needed justification of the story. From the chapters I have read till now, I seem to figure out that it is only and introduction phase of the story and it will be more amazing in the future updates like: Relationship of main characters as well as it's impact on their growth and on the other characters. The contribution of children in the story. The continuation of the hidden plot that is hinted in the last parts of the story. Most of all, the female lead's comeback and success "victory" in both career and relations. All in all, I greatly anticipate the continuation of the story.
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If your not into the gay thing this book may not be for you. The main characters were not gay but side story character’s were. Over all this book a has a good storyline. Where are you author? 😁 It’s been a year😁
Came across this by chance.....and I’m hooked! Love the mc and excited about the ml I hope this doesn’t get dropped. Wishing for more updates in 2020!!
In terms of character design, the author achieved a great feat. Each character has a definitive trait that sets them significantly apart from each other, allowing them their own persona. Though the updates are unstable, the story progresses quite well. It's not too fast, but also not that slow. Maybe a downside that I noticed is that the chapters of the story are a bit short compared to the stories that I enjoy to read, but it's a good read nonetheless.
I love the book.its a pity it seems to be dropped because it's really a nice novel. I would have rated it more if there were more updates. However left the book hanging off a cliff for ages now.
It’s a nice Webnovel if you’re looking for a rebirth/reincarnation genre novel and it’s set up in the modern time so it perfectly suits my taste
Very interesting book. The FL gets a second chance in life. She has twins and is going through a divorce. Her ex husband is very hateful. Luckily, he isn’t the ML. 42 chapters deep so far, last update was a year ago. The chapters are well written and lengthy. Excited to see how the story will develop.
Reveal Spoiler The story is good. Altought the FL is a bit childish and annoying to me I like the characters around her so I continue reading. It's really a fresh idea to introduce a second male lead who she will fall in love with instead of her douchbag ex - husband.
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The story is good and different from the usual transmigration story. But I do find the FL really annoying and quite childlike, I he her characters develops a little and becomes more mature. Because to me she is annoying.
Loving this novel. A hidden gem. Author we need more. 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
I am loving the story~~😍😍😍 Hopes the author to keep up the good work I dont think there need any change in the plot but I guess if the author feel like there is need I can't say anything..
This is such a hidden gem.I really like the FL and her two lovely kids. The plot is really interesting and the characters are really well thought. Good job author but is this going to be updated again?
I'm sooooooo hoooked! I really liked this story so much and I hope Author-san will update more of this. Pleaseeeeee. I'm waiting! I want more huhu. </3
Dang how sad no updates at all. It’s such a nice story now I regret reading it 😢😢😢 Author will you ever come back? It’s such a jem I feel like its a waste to throw it aside like this 😢
So spewing that this has been dropped!! It was such a fun and refreshing read, that even half way through, when I realised that it hadn't been updated in a year, I still finished the available chapters.
Autor I'm really waiting for a year for your return. I love this story because it's diferent from everyelse. 😊😊 My vote for stability of updating esse from before tou stop.
I loved this story the moment i read it. Even though there were once in a while updates i have been following it. But it's been a year too long. Has the story been dropped? I hope the author would let us know if it has been scrapped.
Wow.... Thank you so much fir this wonderful story Ms/Mr. Author. I fell in love with Izzy, the kids, Sage abd the gang... Kudos... Please continue this captivating story till the end and i hope for more inspirations for you to come. Thank you. 😚😚😚😘😍❤💘
This story is pretty well written and a lot of surprises in the story line. Also very well written side storys about the other characters. But I DO NOT THINK THIS STORY WILL BE FINISHED BEING WRITTEN!?!?!
Amazing story! Amazing characters! I eagerly await the next chapters while the author sorts out the change in the plot. I do hope Brycen will suffer a huge face slap and Susan be exposed. And that Kelly and Phoenix will be able to help their mother. The love interest, Sage, is interesting, but he adds taste to our female lead, Isabel. The other characters like Davi and Kim are also very interesting. :)
Reveal Spoiler thank you for the story so far, I'm sure you will continue superb. Don't worry be relaxed when ever you ready. I will patiently wait thank you for your note
I have read the story long back in wattpad and have been waiting for the next release so much that I only remember it has been more than 6 months to say the least I truly am in love with the writing story the plot and ridiculously cute kids as well as the awesome MC may you live long and finish the novel I wish to read it to end before I rest in peace