Faceless Phantom

LV 13

AnaelleB

This story has a great potential to become a good read if develop properly. However, there is a part that is bugging me. The protagonist said that he will never log out. How on earth will he sustain his body? Did he not need to eat or go in the toilet or take a bath for hygiene? Will he not die from starvation? He will need to log out to do all of those. Please give us a proper explanation about it. Well it is all that I was asking about. Though, is this going to be an harem because I hate those.

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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

LV 1

BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

LV 3

spectorfox

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LV 2

FaabTyk

Story is ok has sone potiential. Tiny inconsistencies throughout novel, not a big deal but puts a damper on the fun. Overall it would be worth a read if there were more chapters. So far only read 4 so will need to see later when more chapters are released

LV 13

Celtend

Great potential, the start of a progressive story, and experience. The MC starts as many of us (neets) and goes the extra mile into a place that can change the minds of the players. I predict him to participate and change while doing so.