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ArthurHFSS

Top notch quality writing was the first thing that greeted me as my eyes landed on this beautiful masterpiece. As I read through each line of text I immersed myself in the head of the protagonist and was able to enjoy his intelligence while maintaining his devious and ruthless side. What can I say? I have a think for smart and dark protagonists. No one's perfect, only someone that has it's good and bad side can be considered a human, that's why I found myself enjoy the protagonist, he's reliable. He isn't perfect, far from it, and that's why I love him. As for the world, because of the writer's top quality english, I really enjoyed reading it. Extra points for the rather unique magic system. All in all, if you are looking for a dark protagonist with intelligence, that doesn't solve everything with it's fists and killing the other side's entire family, I highly recommend this novel.

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TjunBing

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09952888708

This story was very nice and I love the flow of the story jhfdhmhffhjfsxchhhtzxhxhgsyayaausuduxxkxhzhsyausjxkxkxhsksjskxijzkzlUajshsyauahausususususdksjshssslhsjsjsjdksisudusisiajaiaiaaiaisuskskskdididjfifkdhhsgatauayausudhdjeidiskdjskdjsusysjxjgxfukdksdis

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Decadence1

i really love this book not like most hollow books on this site it has amazing character development the world background has already been set brilliantly the author doesn't drag the chapters out by putting in useless fillers, the writing quality for the most part is also good and above all it is interesting and if i could gift money i would have already done it a million times so thank you to the author for writing this as i was starting to get bored with most other webnovels and i love how the false and real agnes characters ideals are set

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Drellzie

Great novel... Hope no one else will spam 1 star reviews... Umm... Go read it I guess... Did I reach 140 characters yet? Nope... Umm... Yeah... So how is your day going?

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Phospho

Seems I'm a bit late but here's another five-star review to balance out the baseless one stars a couple days back. Honestly though why. Another filler sentence to help this review reach word limit hehe.

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Cookieeeees

This story has one of the (for me) best writing style. It goes smoothe, the story is going on really well and to this point I haven't encountered a single flaw in the overall story. As this is about transcending into another world/ time and into another body I can understand that some are wary. (There are also some good writin love display scenes.) The character is developing in a good pace and always make you stand on tips end! I really like this novel ๐Ÿ˜

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KingFischer

This is the most impressive webnobel i have ever read, among the few gems found in qidian and espescially original, this would be the diamond, already polished, among them. If i had to complain, id say there were a few grammatical errors, but there are less errors than there are chapters, so i don't think it detracts from the experience. And what a crazy experience, the best case of "show don't tell" i've seen in all of qidian. Please keep writing! I want more...

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bacon_bacon

I really love ur writing style so much. It is so engrossing. The personality and everything. So great. Also, why does it have to reach 140 words?

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DaolordCookie

Well thought out novel, a good read to those who love dark adventures as well as tragedy, youd love the logic behind each situation as well as the mc herself :)

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Drakaris

I don't get why would people give 1 or 2 stars when they are just writing a review for experience..Or if its just for fun, its like kids ringing the door bell for no reason..๐Ÿ˜… That is Super Rude..!! Writing critical review is fine as long as you are expressing your opinion 'after reading'.. Well.....๐ŸŽถits a cruel cruel world๐Ÿ˜‚

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WedhusSlayer

This is good. Too good. I'm hooked for the first time read this book. The first chapter is very captivating, the seconds drown me in, and then stop to try to review it. I better read as a normal reader, more fun.

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90751052

Really great novel! Just needs to update more consistently! If you like genderbenders, reincarnation, and magic novels, then this is definitely for you! The writing quality is pretty good, just needs to fix some minor grammar errors, which could easily be done with an editor! Keep it up, author! >3</

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sleep_yturtle

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Fleurbear

I'm giving it 5 stars again as I have previously stated as it seriously just seems proper rude to do that, although I might not have minded if they where saying valid reason which they weren't as they where just spamming it although I don't see what could give this fabulous novel a one star as it's my favourite novel on here, I think or at least one of my favs( you know how hard it is to decide)

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TjunBing

More more more more more Give us more of that thrilling show!~ I love love love love this novel so much!~ I can't wait what will happen in the end!!~~ Love you too author-sama!~ ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Oh yeah don't forget to take care of your health~ So you can give us more chapters!! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muahahahahahahaha

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TjunBing

More more more more more Give us more of that thrilling show!~ I love love love love this novel so much!~ I can't wait what will happen in the end!!~~ Love you too author-sama!~ ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Oh yeah don't forget to take care of your health~ So you can give us more chapters!! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muahahahahahahaha

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TjunBing

More more more more more Give us more of that thrilling show!!~~~~ I love love love this novel so much!~~ I can't wait what will happen in the end!~ Love you too author-sama!~~ ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ But don't forget to take care of your health so you can give us more chapters!~~ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muahahahahahaha

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Fleurbear

Giving 5 star this book deserves to balance out stupid one star reviews. Honestly this book is amazing I think I said it in my original review but I'll say some more aspects about it. I forgot to add to my first review that one major thing I love about this novel is it's psychology, I personally find psychology an interesting subject although I couldn't take it as my GCSE as I chose music instead and the fact that this novel incorporates psychology into the schemes that are aaaaAaaAAAAsSHhh so amazing and the way the magic uses the psychology (is that a spoiler? Sorry if you read this and it is) is a very interesting concept and will be interesting to see how it is used further in the story.

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Fleurbear

I'm righting another review to balance the ratings as some trolls have spammed this amazing book with one stars for reasons such as that the author uses a cool font to show when one of the most important characters that gives it an even cooler effect, can help with POV changes and is a very cool thing to do and this troll is using that as a reason that doesn't even change the story's fabulousness and amazingness!!!!! Doing such a thing as giving it a one star for that reason which it's clearly not, it's just to give it a one star review and bring it down, which is honestly disappointing.

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YoungReaperX

Gender bender and transmigrated?! SIGN ME UP FOR THIS SHIT LET'S GOOOOOร’OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'M GONNA READ THE WHOLE CHAPTER LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!++! (#ยฃรทรท*=*")รท)ร—9'(ยฃ=84 (ร—โ‚ฉ@0'ยฅ(=*4ยฃ%โ‚ฉ=(=*=ยฅ=)=ยฅ$ยฅยฅรท((kage buunshi no jutsu)

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Salexez
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It's an ok story. The writing quality and planning is really good. But it seems to suffer from the standard Amateur Author/fanfic problems. In this case some of the plot seems forced to the point where it seems like the fans/readers comments effect future events. It also suffers from Japanese story influence, with people throwing weird signs and acting weirdly. I mean in what feudal society do they use victory poses and OK signs? Author also tries to use different tones in the story, some with more succes then others. The manic dark tones are wonderfully written and a real highlight of this story. But it gets pulled right back down by happy go lucky tones that simply feel forced and out of place.

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marycry
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Beautifully written n illustrated look forward to more reading.... ....................

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ArthurHFSS

Top notch quality writing was the first thing that greeted me as my eyes landed on this beautiful masterpiece. As I read through each line of text I immersed myself in the head of the protagonist and was able to enjoy his intelligence while maintaining his devious and ruthless side. What can I say? I have a think for smart and dark protagonists. No one's perfect, only someone that has it's good and bad side can be considered a human, that's why I found myself enjoy the protagonist, he's reliable. He isn't perfect, far from it, and that's why I love him. As for the world, because of the writer's top quality english, I really enjoyed reading it. Extra points for the rather unique magic system. All in all, if you are looking for a dark protagonist with intelligence, that doesn't solve everything with it's fists and killing the other side's entire family, I highly recommend this novel.

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TjunBing

Love you and your novel~ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Love you and your novel~ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Love you and your novel~ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Love you and your novel~ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Love you and your novel~ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Love you and your novel~ ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

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09952888708

This story was very nice and I love the flow of the story jhfdhmhffhjfsxchhhtzxhxhgsyayaausuduxxkxhzhsyausjxkxkxhsksjskxijzkzlUajshsyauahausususususdksjshssslhsjsjsjdksisudusisiajaiaiaaiaisuskskskdididjfifkdhhsgatauayausudhdjeidiskdjskdjsusysjxjgxfukdksdis

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Decadence1

i really love this book not like most hollow books on this site it has amazing character development the world background has already been set brilliantly the author doesn't drag the chapters out by putting in useless fillers, the writing quality for the most part is also good and above all it is interesting and if i could gift money i would have already done it a million times so thank you to the author for writing this as i was starting to get bored with most other webnovels and i love how the false and real agnes characters ideals are set

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Drellzie

Great novel... Hope no one else will spam 1 star reviews... Umm... Go read it I guess... Did I reach 140 characters yet? Nope... Umm... Yeah... So how is your day going?

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Phospho

Seems I'm a bit late but here's another five-star review to balance out the baseless one stars a couple days back. Honestly though why. Another filler sentence to help this review reach word limit hehe.

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Cookieeeees

This story has one of the (for me) best writing style. It goes smoothe, the story is going on really well and to this point I haven't encountered a single flaw in the overall story. As this is about transcending into another world/ time and into another body I can understand that some are wary. (There are also some good writin love display scenes.) The character is developing in a good pace and always make you stand on tips end! I really like this novel ๐Ÿ˜

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KingFischer

This is the most impressive webnobel i have ever read, among the few gems found in qidian and espescially original, this would be the diamond, already polished, among them. If i had to complain, id say there were a few grammatical errors, but there are less errors than there are chapters, so i don't think it detracts from the experience. And what a crazy experience, the best case of "show don't tell" i've seen in all of qidian. Please keep writing! I want more...

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bacon_bacon

I really love ur writing style so much. It is so engrossing. The personality and everything. So great. Also, why does it have to reach 140 words?

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DaolordCookie

Well thought out novel, a good read to those who love dark adventures as well as tragedy, youd love the logic behind each situation as well as the mc herself :)

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Drakaris

I don't get why would people give 1 or 2 stars when they are just writing a review for experience..Or if its just for fun, its like kids ringing the door bell for no reason..๐Ÿ˜… That is Super Rude..!! Writing critical review is fine as long as you are expressing your opinion 'after reading'.. Well.....๐ŸŽถits a cruel cruel world๐Ÿ˜‚

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WedhusSlayer

This is good. Too good. I'm hooked for the first time read this book. The first chapter is very captivating, the seconds drown me in, and then stop to try to review it. I better read as a normal reader, more fun.

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90751052

Really great novel! Just needs to update more consistently! If you like genderbenders, reincarnation, and magic novels, then this is definitely for you! The writing quality is pretty good, just needs to fix some minor grammar errors, which could easily be done with an editor! Keep it up, author! >3</

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sleep_yturtle

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Fleurbear

I'm giving it 5 stars again as I have previously stated as it seriously just seems proper rude to do that, although I might not have minded if they where saying valid reason which they weren't as they where just spamming it although I don't see what could give this fabulous novel a one star as it's my favourite novel on here, I think or at least one of my favs( you know how hard it is to decide)

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TjunBing

More more more more more Give us more of that thrilling show!~ I love love love love this novel so much!~ I can't wait what will happen in the end!!~~ Love you too author-sama!~ ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Oh yeah don't forget to take care of your health~ So you can give us more chapters!! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muahahahahahahaha

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TjunBing

More more more more more Give us more of that thrilling show!~ I love love love love this novel so much!~ I can't wait what will happen in the end!!~~ Love you too author-sama!~ ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ Oh yeah don't forget to take care of your health~ So you can give us more chapters!! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muahahahahahahaha

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TjunBing

More more more more more Give us more of that thrilling show!!~~~~ I love love love this novel so much!~~ I can't wait what will happen in the end!~ Love you too author-sama!~~ ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ But don't forget to take care of your health so you can give us more chapters!~~ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Muahahahahahaha

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Fleurbear

Giving 5 star this book deserves to balance out stupid one star reviews. Honestly this book is amazing I think I said it in my original review but I'll say some more aspects about it. I forgot to add to my first review that one major thing I love about this novel is it's psychology, I personally find psychology an interesting subject although I couldn't take it as my GCSE as I chose music instead and the fact that this novel incorporates psychology into the schemes that are aaaaAaaAAAAsSHhh so amazing and the way the magic uses the psychology (is that a spoiler? Sorry if you read this and it is) is a very interesting concept and will be interesting to see how it is used further in the story.

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Fleurbear

I'm righting another review to balance the ratings as some trolls have spammed this amazing book with one stars for reasons such as that the author uses a cool font to show when one of the most important characters that gives it an even cooler effect, can help with POV changes and is a very cool thing to do and this troll is using that as a reason that doesn't even change the story's fabulousness and amazingness!!!!! Doing such a thing as giving it a one star for that reason which it's clearly not, it's just to give it a one star review and bring it down, which is honestly disappointing.

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YoungReaperX

Gender bender and transmigrated?! SIGN ME UP FOR THIS SHIT LET'S GOOOOOร’OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I'M GONNA READ THE WHOLE CHAPTER LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!++! (#ยฃรทรท*=*")รท)ร—9'(ยฃ=84 (ร—โ‚ฉ@0'ยฅ(=*4ยฃ%โ‚ฉ=(=*=ยฅ=)=ยฅ$ยฅยฅรท((kage buunshi no jutsu)

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Salexez
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It's an ok story. The writing quality and planning is really good. But it seems to suffer from the standard Amateur Author/fanfic problems. In this case some of the plot seems forced to the point where it seems like the fans/readers comments effect future events. It also suffers from Japanese story influence, with people throwing weird signs and acting weirdly. I mean in what feudal society do they use victory poses and OK signs? Author also tries to use different tones in the story, some with more succes then others. The manic dark tones are wonderfully written and a real highlight of this story. But it gets pulled right back down by happy go lucky tones that simply feel forced and out of place.

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marycry
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Beautifully written n illustrated look forward to more reading.... ....................

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