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Balance & Coordination

'The only problem is, I need more information: what differentiates a good Qi affinity from a bad one? If I don't know that, I can't increase it'

'Better think about that tomorrow.'

Adam woke up just as the first sunrays entered his room.

"They told me to come before sunset, so I still have some time until then, what should I do?"

'I could search for a library but I don't think that they'll have one since books are supposed to be expensive in such a backward civilization.'

"AAAARGHh Fuck it."

"Why couldn't I just be transported into a Science-Fiction world, Fantasy is so lame if you're poor. Fuck my life."

Looking at his Customization Menu, he checked the requirements for the changes he would want to make in the future.

1. better balance – 30 Soul Shards

2. 20/20 vision – 75 Soul Shards

3. stronger bones – 200 Soul Shards

4. better immune system – 500 Soul Shards

("Soul Shards" has a really awkward abbreviation)

He still had 40 Soul Shards from back then.

'I guess the only thing I can do now is to upgrade my balance.'

'But it's going to hurt, and I don't want it to hurt.' *sigh*

As he selected to improve his balance, the pain arrived.

A thousand needles seemed penetrated his ear while a huge gong was making him deaf.

His eyes seemed to pop out but at the same time forcefully pushed inward.

Comparing it to the previous pain he felt from those transformations could not be done, as it was something wholly different. His entire skeleton reverberated like a pulled guitar string while his eyes and ears were constantly attacked.

Even after 1 hour it still did not stop.

Finally, after the brightest sunrays of the day infiltrated his room could he relax.

His bed was soaked in cold sweat and veins on his forehead popped out looking like they would explode at any given moment.

He was free, finally.

After that he jumped and landed on his right palm seamlessly, he could now freely control his body in every way while maintaining perfect coordination and not falling down, the only thing he needed to do now was to overcome his fears of suddenly misplacing a hand and breaking his neck, but with his strong body he didn't have to fear too much about that.

It was a natural feeling as if his whole body was in his grasp.

In his P.E. lessons where they had to do a front flip off a trampoline he always felt disoriented when he did it, he did not know where he was and did not know how he would land. Now it is a completely different story, not only could he easily do a front flip from a standing position, he also knew when to stop rotating thanks to his new enhancement.

"Hehe." Grinning stupidly he lets out a little chuckle.

After that, he went to the Grey Wolves.

Apparently, the transformation took long enough that the sun was already near the horizon by the time Adam got to the gate of the Mansion.

Again, he pushed it open and entered the estate, there were some people training on a field beside the mansion but the person he saw yesterday, who stood behind Scarface was not there.

Therefore, he went up to the door and knocked.

Very soon, the door opened and Scarface head popped out and he looked at Adam.

"Boss, the rookie is here." He turned around and said loudly.

"Tell Shaine to prepare the duel."

From the top of a flight of stairs came and imposing figure of a man, tall and handsome, older than Adam but younger than Scarface, like a mature university student, which goes to the gym regularly.

He had short black hair and a jawline that stood out, he had stubbles instead of a beard.

He had a sleep deprived look but was brimming with energy as if even less sleep could not get to him.

"Follow me." He said as he strode to the training grounds.

"Shaine! It's time for a duel." He shouted to which Adam cracked up and had to hold himself back, he truly did not expect that.

Some old guy who was training with a halberd turned around and wiped the sweat off his forehead.

Gramps was inflicted with numerous scars spread on his body but not his face; it was completely free of scars.

He was with a mustache and his hair already began to turn white.

"Mmh, another rookie?" he asked the youth. There was no disrespect or disdain in his voice.

The youth just nodded to that question.

"Lord Alexander, I'm already old, couldn't you have picked another captain to test the rookie?"

"It's because I trust your evaluation the most gramps, besides you still fight like a tiger."

Shaine sighed and put away his halberd, he strode to the middle of an open field and waited for Adam.


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
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I'm sorry I couldn't upload earlier, I just came back on Sunday.

On the plus side: I've already written the draft for the next chapter so it won't take as much time.

On another note, I really need some feedback, so if you have some thoughts about this novel or my writing just post a review or if you don't want to evaluate it just write a comment. I would really appreciate that. :)

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