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A new city, a new life. It was all the same to William Carter. After the disappearance of his mother Isabelle two years ago, he and his father Jonathan were always heading to a new place, never stopping for more than a few months.
Upon reaching his new home in Colorado, a mysterious man named Michael thrusts him into a world of magic.
For Will to be able to make it in this new world of Crystallia, he must learn to hone his new skills. He must cast away everything he once believed and learn a new way to survive.
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I am leech. Leech like reading books, this book looks interesting. Leech will read book. Leech will get to level 5. Then leech will win. What will leech win? Ask big saber bro
Is everyone enjoying the series so far? I still have quite a bit stocked up. If anyone is interested in becoming a character in my Royal Flame Crusade, message me a name and appearance you wish to see in the future. I am also working on formatting my old book A Wizard's Birth Awakening which is The Crimson Prince's former title. I am working on saving enough money to change the cover art for the paperback version to reflect the new name. I will have both the first and second volume ready for sale in a few weeks. Let me know if you are interested! The first book in paperback will be 12.99 as well as the second. I will also be working towards getting concept art for posters made in the coming months, if anyone wished to support this, I do have a patron under the name J.C. Nord. Any help would be appreciated! I have a lot of ideas moving on for the future and I can't wait to continue on. The world I am creating is one of many worlds which will be explored. I am going to integrate different styles of power as well as alternate timelines. I really hope you have enjoyed my series so far! Within the last few months I have had triple the views on this site versus the fan base I had on other publishing platforms. I am grateful for your support, even if just to read the next chapter. You all are the reason I continue writing!
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The main character has personality and you can tell the story is not one-dimensional just from the beginning. I can't wait for more. Seriously I've been waiting for a while and I hope the chapters comes soon. On one hand I believe there's a reason, on the other I really want more chapters.
i stumpeled over this as i was out of anything to read yet again.. and i thought i will give it a try, and so i did... i started to read and could see parallels in some of the things in movies or books i have read before.. but hey so what i thought.. but then at chapter 12 sh!t hit the fan for me.. i nearly exploded in that chapter and couldnt read anymore.. the way the mc behaves in that chapter is in no way acceptable to me, it is down right illogical, the way he acts.. first of all i am a person who knows what despair and darkness looks and fells like i have had a deep depression for over 10 years.. when you have no will and only darkness covers you, trust me when i say, that you do not break out of it that easyly! and no matter what any one would try to say to you, when you are in that state, you simply do not care, it is like words does not reach you.. so i can not agree with how he can break out of that, by a few words.. but hey okay i could maybe let that slide.. but then we have the next scene a 17 year old boy (who have not learned to comtrol hes emotions) almost consumed with rage wanting another man dead.. when you are that pist and you dont know how to control it, i dont belive he would not, not harm him.. and maybe even kill him.. other then that, its not that bad of a story..
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This is honestly one of the best books I've ever read. Not just on webnovel either, but of all time. It progresses like a book that was published and paid for. The quality of each chapter is exquisite. I highly recommend this book.
I'm really liking this novel, binge read 40 odd chapters when i should have been sleeping, and very much hope the author continues with it. The only tiny minor issue i've come across is the occasional spelling mistake (1 or 2 per chapter) or sentence structure ( maybe 1 every 2-3 chapters) very minor stuff, for a self editing author is pretty damn good.
Hey guys! If you haven't noticed yet, TCP moved! Just type in my name on the search bar or The Crimson Prince: Awakening and choose the other one. There are 136 chapters to read and more on the way! Thank you all for your support!
I need some of your advice. Will and Maya have pretty much always been a thing since he and Bianca have broken up, though it never seemed truly official. I want to know if you as the reader base want to see more romance out of this series. And if you do, I want to know on a scale of 1-10 just how much romance. It's not as if I can't incorporate more in. But I want to know just how much you'd wish to see in the advancement of the series.
Reveal Spoiler Kindle addition books are now up! Both A Wizard's Birth: Awakening and King's Blood are up for 2.99! Paperbacks will be released later this week! Please support more me as I release more chapters!
If I were to put both Awakening and King's Blood on Amazon Kindle for 1.99, who would buy it? I'm working on raising enough money to get the third book's cover art doneb as well as some concept art for all characters. Would anyone like to help?
Reading through the first 20 chapters, felt like a chore. It gave of the impression of the author trying too hard to create characters with personality and a complex world. As well as the lack of a natural flow of events as opposed to the author setting up plot points to move the story forward. The problem with this is, a break in reading immersion. A story with a natural flow of events would make you stop to think “wait, what?” as a result of a surprising turn of events in contrast to the case of the story’s logical flow “is that even possible?”, “why would that happen?” All of this makes the story give off a poor first impression. This is fairly obvious we see the character “Maya” created as an obvious plot trigger rather than a person in the story. I mean you portrayed your main character and “Maya” being in a dangerous situation as well as a mysterious protector who is always watching but this time only watches as his charge and “Maya” face danger. He does noting about it, this might be to prove a point “you are weak”, “you need to get stronger”, “you are in a different world” but really at the expense of a life? I mean saving him at the last moment would equally work to pass the message, “if I wasn’t here Maya would have died” or something similar. It would have been even better if Maya betrayed him.. This goes on till said protector comes out and says “I’m your uncle.” I mean would you watch a family member go through all that **** just to prove a point? The second case was during the course of his training, the MC needed to understand how to utilise his “weapon”. Said uncle couldn’t simply say you need to envision “intent” with your flame into the conduit, but he took him to a different dimension, Watched as the MC endangered another character said Uncle knew, the MC cared about just to prove another point?? I mean if this wasn’t a plot trigger to involve this character into the ongoing situation and move the story forward then I can’t think of any other logically valid reason for it to happen so.. I mean, a character dies of the same situation, it got me thinking, does this “uncle” think of the MC as family? Or just another tool... I’ll keep reading future chapters and see if this changes before updating my review. Otherwise, I’d say you have a good story going there author, good work. Reading
Sorry about the releases for the chapters. My computer broke down, should be up and running tonight. In curious as to how you like the book so far, we are nearing the end point of what I had premade. If there's something more you wish to see, let me know!
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Please fix the table of contents. It is mixed up. The chapter 14 is set on Chapter 2. ............................................................................................................
oh now i remember where i read it before, royalroadl -_- that explains why the name is familiar :| n then it just stopped one day -_- 140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char140 char
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Volume 1
- 1 Prologue 1 years ago
- 2 Home Sweet Home 1 years ago
- 3 The Man in the Business Suit 1 years ago
- 4 Revelations 1 years ago
- 5 A New World 1 years ago
- 6 Survival 1 years ago
- 7 Welcome to Crystallia 1 years ago
- 8 Maya 1 years ago
- 9 Truth and Lessons 1 years ago
- 10 Part to Play 1 years ago
- 11 Discovery and Departure 1 years ago
- 12 Black Despair 1 years ago
- 13 Strength of Resolve 1 years ago
- 14 The Heir 1 years ago
- 15 Who am I? 1 years ago
- 16 Responsibility and Lessons 1 years ago
- 17 Those Left Behind 1 years ago
- 18 The Night Before Training 1 years ago
- 19 Set in the Routine 1 years ago
- 20 Reason to Fight 1 years ago
I can't wait for everyone to see where these next chapters go! I promise you, this is not your generic love/vengeance story. It is full of twists and turns enough to make your head spin. If you like a novel that keeps you on your feet, I promise you just that. Whatever you think you know, I promise" everything is not as you think. I am so excited to publish this story here! I know you will enjoy it!