First of all, my review is focused on technicality because this story has amazing potential. I would hate it, for this to not be near perfect.
Concept : 9/10
- not doing spoilers; just going to mention that the lore is rich
- potential to great is evident
Setting: 8/10
- it's descriptive enough to know which place looks like what; only issue is, ease for reader to distinguish between the two worlds
Characters: 9/10
- they're relatable
- a bit of distinction among different characters' manner of speaking would help the reader differentiate between characters.
(some conversations, if read aloud, sound a bit monotonous)
Summary:
The story itself can be outstanding! My issue tends to revolve around technicalities.
Ex. Punctuations, grammar, spelling, etc.
(a critical eye for an outstanding story)
I do apologise if I sound a bit harsh. I get strict on stories that can achieve near brilliance.
Keep up the good work!!
I really liked this book and I think it has so much potential to be so good. I got hooked in the first chapter and finished the few that were available at the time of this review I’ll update it as time goes on. Love to see the ML created in this way.
First of all, my review is focused on technicality because this story has amazing potential. I would hate it, for this to not be near perfect. Concept : 9/10 - not doing spoilers; just going to mention that the lore is rich - potential to great is evident Setting: 8/10 - it's descriptive enough to know which place looks like what; only issue is, ease for reader to distinguish between the two worlds Characters: 9/10 - they're relatable - a bit of distinction among different characters' manner of speaking would help the reader differentiate between characters. (some conversations, if read aloud, sound a bit monotonous) Summary: The story itself can be outstanding! My issue tends to revolve around technicalities. Ex. Punctuations, grammar, spelling, etc. (a critical eye for an outstanding story) I do apologise if I sound a bit harsh. I get strict on stories that can achieve near brilliance. Keep up the good work!!