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Rewritten: Loki: God of Tricksters
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Phoenix tried to kill mc Phoenix forced mc to follow her for like 1000 years Mc fall in love with the Phoenix.
It started really great. I was excited about the premise. Reborn as Loki. So much potential, it has the making of a really great story. But, it was far from that. The characters are really inconsistent, especially the MC. Speaking of which, we only really learn about the MC. The others sre just decorations. It quickly developed into a crack fic with crazy power-ups, no real challenges.
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Terrible choice of character self insert. Loki is a great character but not for fan fiction His life span is to long making alot of stuff irrelevant He is to op at start for future development Few can beat him that's why he makes great villain he would be able to escape Also you preventing him from changing stuff ruins the entirety of the story, multiverse is vast there would be a reality where he doesn't want to rule
I like it!........an SI loki...with a system...dope.....though just saying the title seems like a title for a story that will be tragic and angsty....pls dont make this like that...keep it happy and fluff [atleast the romance..dont make the romance tragic/sad]..........make MC stupid OP...ie: god of magic?....add some romance and fluff BUT do build it and keep it happy,,,,,,..also if harem keep it small..[maybe pair loki up with his OG wife,,,,,she did love him a lot...] ..eitherway GL................also bash if ya want... **: what does the transformer tag mean?.......if transformers universe...well lets just say,,,I really hope you continue this
The Idea is interesting. Great storytelling overall. I have two remarks: 1. The system you Introduced needs more tuning. 2. Same of the events unfold awkwardly( not smooth)
It's great is an amazing novel love how it's progressing so far and hope to see it go farther. AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING
Trash Trash can see that you are not the intended recipient you are not the intended recipient you are not the best part of helping your browser does not currently recognise any of the north is independant of the realm stop by the teacher in this purpose can't change you ya gwendal the king of the same opinion on the throne our main focus is a diplo
The story is haphazardly written, with barely any correlation. Its a fanfic so thats acceptabel but your quality of writing is quite simply bad. I do enjoy how you wrote loki but the thing with the authoritie Destiny made no sense whatsoever it came out of nowhere. Suddenly there is a council and suddenly destiny/fate is pissed at him and then nothing gets done with it.
Story idea was good but it’s incredibly lame now. It was going decently well until one of MC’s clones gets bItched by the Phoenix and became her servant for years like holy sHit that was hard to read. All of a sudden he’s so in love with her. The beginning is just mc getting super op in time chamber for so many years. Sound cool? But once he’s op , he decided to just become a mortal on earth with a secret identity. Even worse is now he has to work for the ancient one and defend earth. He’s also scared of women. The worse cliche for an mc. He gets shivers from his mother and ancient one even though he’s that strong. Now the Phoenix became a women and he made her pregnant so he lives a normal life. It’s basically super boring now. That’s my opinion, try it out if you want but it’s not for me. His time on Asgard was also lame as theirs barely any interactions with him and the asgardians. Literally only talks to his mother. So it was just training training and training, then go live a mortal life. Don’t expect any badass moments because the mc feels the need to hide every single thing he does. Story also was very rushed. One moment he’s the Phoenix servent, next chapter she becomes a human women and gets pregnant lmao
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