One of the things I hate in fanfiction is when the author changes the personality of a beloved character for no good reason. It can be really jarring. And the over - use of angst for the sake of it. Not every story needs to be super dark and depressing all the time. Also, when the dialogue is stilted and unnatural, it takes away from the overall enjoyment of the fanfiction. Fanfiction should flow well, like a conversation between friends, but when the dialogue is off, it's a big turn - off.
Well, in some cases, the quality of fanfiction varies greatly. There might be a lot of poorly written fanfictions out there that use the Harry Potter name just for popularity. These might have bad grammar, inconsistent characterizations, and illogical plots, which can make the whole idea of fanfiction based on Harry Potter seem annoying.
To build a good relationship with your brother, you can start by spending more time together. For example, you can play games or watch movies together. Communication is also crucial. Be honest and open with each other, and listen to his opinions and feelings.
I'm not sure what you mean by 'Danmei brothers', because this phrase rarely appears in novels. If you can provide more background information, I will try my best to answer your questions.
As for the surname An, if it was in a novel, it was usually the name of a male character. According to your description, if my brother was only a few years old when he was reborn, he might not have been born yet, so I can't give him a name. If the elder brother had been reborn, he might choose a name based on the time and background of his rebirth. For example, if he was reborn as an adult, he might choose a name that was appropriate for his age. If he was reborn as a child, he might choose a name that was related to his age, or he might choose a name that was related to his experience.
First, give yourself some time to calm down from the initial shock and embarrassment. Then, approach your brother in a private and non - accusatory way. Say something like 'Hey, that moment earlier was really awkward. Let's just forget about it and be more careful in the future.' This way, you can start to resolve the issue and reduce the discomfort between you two.
I recommend the book, Secret Love for Ming's Pet, to you. The male protagonist mistakenly thought that the female protagonist had caused his brother to get into a car accident and slowly alienated the female protagonist. However, he later discovered that the female protagonist had not harmed his brother. Instead, she had been silently helping him and his family. The male protagonist gradually fell in love with the female protagonist, and the two of them ended up together. I hope you like this book.
The large and detailed cast of characters. There are so many characters in Harry Potter with their own personalities, backstories, and relationships. Fanfiction writers may struggle to keep all these elements in mind and might find it annoying when trying to incorporate them into their own stories without making mistakes or contradictions.