To develop Peter further, he could be given more backstory about his childhood dreams. Maybe he wanted to be an artist but gave it up for some reason. For Lola, she could start taking self - defense classes which would show her determination to be stronger. This would also add new dimensions to their relationship as Peter might be worried about her getting hurt in the process.
For Peter, he could be involved in a community project in Eastenders that really tests his leadership skills. This would make him more confident and also show his growth. As for Lola, she could get involved with a local charity that helps underprivileged kids. This would not only develop her character as a more caring person but also give her and Peter new topics to talk about and bond over. Their relationship could then grow as they support each other in their new endeavors. They could also have some disagreements about how to handle things in their respective projects which would further develop their characters and relationship.
To develop Lola further, the fanfiction could explore her hobbies more. For example, if she likes painting, she could start an art project that involves Jackson. This would show her creative side and how she interacts with others when it comes to her passion.
Use vivid descriptions. Instead of just saying they met at a place, describe the place in detail - the smells, the sounds, the look of it. This will draw the reader in. For the characters, describe their expressions, their body language. When they talk, use dialogue that sounds natural. Don't make it too formal or stilted. And include some twists and turns in the plot. Just when the reader thinks they know what's going to happen, surprise them.
Peter could be developed further by having him face a personal fear. Maybe he has a fear of losing his connection to Narnia completely. Caspian, on the other hand, could be developed by exploring his relationship with his people on a deeper level. He could be shown dealing with the everyday problems of his subjects, which makes him more relatable and also shows his growth as a king. Their characters could also be developed through their interactions with each other. They could have friendly competitions that teach them both about their own strengths and weaknesses.
One plot idea could be that Peter and Lola decide to start a small business together in the Eastenders' neighborhood. They face challenges like getting funds and dealing with local competition. Another could be that they find an old mystery related to their families in the area and work together to solve it.
A more adventurous plot could be that they decide to start a small business together. They face various challenges such as getting the necessary funds, dealing with difficult customers, and competing with other local businesses. This journey brings them closer together as they rely on each other's strengths and overcome their weaknesses.
Peter's character can be developed by having him face some really tough moral dilemmas. For example, in the Infinity War chaos, he might have to choose between saving a group of civilians or going after an important Infinity Stone. This would force him to think like a true Avenger and not just a friendly neighborhood Spider - Man.
There could also be supporting characters in the fanfiction. Maybe Lauren's family members who have an influence on her relationship with Peter. Or Peter's friends who either encourage or discourage his involvement with Lauren. These supporting characters can add more depth and realism to the story.
For Bart, you could explore his softer side more. Show how he really cares about his family deep down, even if he acts out. For Lisa, perhaps show her struggling with non - academic things like making friends outside of her usual intellectual circle.
You could also develop their characters through their relationships with other characters in the fanfiction. If they have friends or foes, how they interact with them can reveal more about who they are. For example, if they have an enemy, do they fight back bravely or try to find a peaceful solution? This can tell us a lot about Reiji and Xiaomu.
Victoria's character can be developed by making her more assertive. In the context of fanfiction with Agent 47, she could start to take on more dangerous tasks and prove herself. For example, instead of always relying on Agent 47 for protection, she could save him in a crucial moment, which would show her growth and independence.