One plot idea could be that during detention, Snape discovers Hermione's hidden talent for potion-making that even he hadn't expected. He starts to see her in a new light, not just as an over - achieving Gryffindor. Another idea is that they get trapped in the detention room due to a spell gone wrong, and they have to work together to get out, which leads to a grudging respect between them. And perhaps Hermione finds an old diary in the detention room that has some secrets about Snape's past, which she uses to understand him better.
Well, in this fanfiction, it could be that there's a mystery in the detention area that only Snape and Hermione can solve. Maybe there are strange noises and apparitions that seem to be related to an old Hogwarts legend. Snape initially thinks Hermione is being hysterical about it, but as they investigate further, they realize it's a real threat. They combine their knowledge, Hermione's from books and Snape's from his years at Hogwarts, to figure out what's going on. In the process, they develop a sort of mentor - mentee relationship, with Snape reluctantly giving Hermione more credit and Hermione seeing Snape as more than just a strict teacher.
Chapter 341, ", The Parting Flute and Xiao", is the clearest early answer because it turns Tianma Star Sector's situation into a concrete plot event. Early on, Gu Hang's previous statement, though a sign of great respect for.... By the end, Second, they all wished to avoid getting involved in the ongoing.... Inside the broader power growth storyline, the chapter closes with Not that they lacked the capacity to influence. Both had significant standing within their respective groups.
Chapter 390, "Might as Well Call it Gu Hang Star Zone", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with The Fatches family had no illusions about the impossibility of... and closes on Moreover, in legal terms, Petes, the self-proclaimed interim....
Chapter 468, ", Reverse Beheading", is the clearest early answer because it turns Interstellar Warriors's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is Again turning his head, the remaining two Terminators had already..., but the pressure keeps building through Not only them, but everyone else as well..
Chapter 450, ", Death of the Ashen Dead", is the clearest early answer because the violence around Blood God becomes final instead of hypothetical. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from That's really pitiful, why not come and worship the Blood God! to A regular Powered Armor under an Interstellar Warrior, with a gap....
Chapter 486, ", Only You, My Friend", is the clearest early answer because it turns Gu Hang's situation into a concrete plot event. It opens with Riding inside, deep beneath the Imperial Palace, the track twisted... and closes on I know we all have our connections, but who would complain about.... The key payoff is that the chapter closes with I will definitely add an update tomorrow!
Chapter 404, ", The Tall Pirate Crew", is the clearest early answer because it turns Flying Wing Star's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from The United Forces of the Dragonhawk Star Domain achieved their war... to The main part of the journey is the vast emptiness between the.... What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with He knew that to give in would set a precedent;
Chapter 382, ", He Really Believed It!", is the clearest early answer because it turns Fatches's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Minnick had never contemplated seeking independence, but displaying a... to They would polish it and add some evidence and data to corroborate.... What makes it stick is that the chapter closes with If that Legion had always been stationed in the Fatches Tri-Star, he felt somewhat assured.
Chapter 398, ", Youthful Students of Our Time", is the clearest early answer because it turns Loyal Heir Academy's situation into a concrete plot event. The chapter turns that into something concrete by moving from Under the auspices of the developed educational system of Flying Wing... to Subsequently, the number of Loyal Heir Academies would further....
Chapter 2, "Birth Of The Terrace Twin", is the clearest early answer because it turns Lyra's situation into a concrete plot event. A useful checkpoint is the way the scene starts with Have you heard?" Within the confines of a large opulent and wealth... and follows through with Make it very neat and I won't have to punish you both for sharing....
Chapter 458, ", you dare too?", is the clearest early answer because it turns Economic Union's situation into a concrete plot event. The setup is Could living on 600 Tax Currency a year starve him to death?, but the pressure keeps building through At current Alliance market rates, that amount represented the....