...Perfectly Imperfect...
I am not much of this kind of stories, but the way chapter one was started, I give credit to the author for detailing it with precision. The ml, Melton, his love for his late parents and girlfriend were realistic. I could feel him and his desire to avenge their death. Keep it up, Sir.
Urban · TheATK
If I could describe it in one word, it would be... Speechless. The flow was great, characterization and setting was precisely detailed. It's a great read, although I've read until chapter 3 only, but it was enough to pique and captivate my curiosity as a reader. A must read for people who are into this kind of genre. Excellent job on this one, Sir. Very good indeed!
Fantasy · TheATK
This is a good read, different from many stories I've read already. The piloting chapters were intriguing and vivid with descriptions. Words were chosen in a distinct manner that are very easy to understand, not too terminal and deep. Way to go my fellow Filipino author. You did a great job here! More power to you and God bless you always.
Horror · ExoShaneey
This story is catching and has thrill. The creator did an excellent job in detailing the characters personality as well as the setting. The first three chapters was captivating enough to pigue my interest. Kudos to you, author!
Fantasy · littlemaomao_
I left a comment at chapter 1. Good thing you are wise to listen to constructive reviews. I'll add tthis story to my list. You can add mine also if you wish.
Teen · PPamilerin
Now this is an entrance! Much better than the first, very nice revision! I could feel Avy, her emotions, as if I was her and I was there. This chapter alone sends you to a roller coaster of emotions. Great start!
ch 0 1 This can't be
Urban · MissBlackRose
Hahaha! Too early for that, my dear 😁
"Huh! In your dreams perhaps!"
It was a very catching story. The characters were describe and introduce well enough to pique my attention. This is a good read. Goodjob to the author!
Fantasy · Mia_Evergreen
The syory is light and easy to understand. The way the creator introduce each characters was very accurate and precise. It pique my interest just by reading the first two chapters. Great start, author. Goodjob!
Urban · Cupidlove_200416
This story was catching and has that pulling effect. The piloting chapters were detailed properly, plot setting was in sequence and easy to read. The creator did an excellent job making this story. I do recommend this, a must read.
Fantasy · Ka_rma
Chapter one alone already pique my interest. The choice of words were easy to understand, not too terminal for readers to comprehend. The main character's traits and their despositions can already be imagine as the author introduce them in the right manner. Great start! More power to the creator!
Urban · Mr_Passek
I like the synop, intruiging and gripping. The piloting chapters also shows great potential, seeing how miserable the fl's condition was and her struggle to fight back. The ml also seems mysteriously frightening. A promising story. Good job, author!
Urban · eneirariwayn
I will dare everyone! I'll end my writing career, if this story won't get you hook or won't even pique your interest. [img=coins][img=golden ticket]
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
I am not much of this kind of stories, but the way chapter one was started, I give credit to the author for detailing it with precision. The ml, Melton, his love for his late parents and girlfriend were realistic. I could feel him and his desire to avenge their death. Keep it up, Sir.
Systems Gambit
Urban · TheATK